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Reviews for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From Utopia on September 23, 2008
    The answer to life, the universe and everything!

    Oooooh! Hermione with Slytherin tendencies! yay!

    Knickers! With FLOWERS! Wooohoooooo!

    Is the prophet in circulation yet? Are there portraits on the front page? Line drawings? The camera's not even a twinkling in it's inventor's eye at this time!

    Granny nightie? All tied up at the neck? Eh?

    Ooooh, speechless AGAIN!
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  • From Heidi191976 on September 23, 2008
    Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From helenesnape on September 23, 2008
    That whole scenario of Pansy and Hermione exchanging secret hexes was funny as hell! I had some girls in high school I would have loved to do that to. With Hermione, I see that revenge is a dish best served cold (I mean she did wait three days before exacting her revenge)!

    Whew! You had me worried there. When Hermione showed up in be dressed in her 'granny' nightgown, I thought the prudish Hermione had reared her ugly head and we were about to return to 'restrictive sex'...i.e. nighttime only, missionary (and forget about pegging or anal sex...that's simply not done!) I'm so glad that it was just a brief stint of Hermione's old insecurities coming to the fore.

    As for the abudance of lemon pie, I have no tummy ache. It was soothed ever so well by lovely Lucius' presents. So please feel free to dish up the lemons as often and in as large quantities as you like.

    Looking forward to reading about Hermione's 'gossip session' at her breakfast with the bitches...er ladies!
    MHS
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  • From HermioneMalfoFan on September 23, 2008
    Delicious! Simply delicious! My lacy knickers (not black ;-D) are definitly soaked... I guess that's what you had in mind for your readers???

    As for the mystery: I like the mix!
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  • From Citten on September 23, 2008
    no my stomach is fiin in fact i could of had a bigger piece. ;) well that was wonderfully sweet of lucius to gift her with the undergarments! :) i know our hermione would not be left out for long you (well him, rather) would not do that. :) i will be wait for the next chapter to see what you have planned next!
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  • From ANON - lonne2 on September 23, 2008
    I would like a little less lemon and some more plot.
    Don't get me wrong, I like lemons, I'll just like
    more plot than lemons in storries (70% plot 30% lemon), please?
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  • From Phreakdom on September 22, 2008
    Oh, thank you! I
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  • From ANON - Rini on September 22, 2008
    Maybe when you read of the
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  • From ANON - Jesustheatheist on September 21, 2008
    I'm new to your long list of fans and ever grateful to have found this gem of a story. It's charming, witty, intelligent, sexy, and I'm a sucker for a good mystery! I can't wait for the next addition. Do you send out chapter alerts?
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  • From ANON - nitesfool on September 21, 2008
    HEY!!!!! good job!!! quite interesting... keep it going... ok... peace out homie!
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  • From sheherazade on September 18, 2008
    She isn't going to hold him to that promise that he'd do whatever she wanted if she pleasured him then? It seems like she definitely kept her side of the bargain there. Lucky Lucius. I do like the jade columns - so stylish! I wonder if you can buy such things *innocent musing*.

    So the plot reaches maximum tension soon, eh? I'll go and get my tenterhooks out ;).
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  • From AndreaLorraine on September 18, 2008
    Mm, mm, mm. Do you know what I should be doing? Studying for my massive exam that is in approximately 2 hours. What am I doing? Reading this - and it's so worth it.

    I love a man that can appreciate his own body and isn't afraid to seek pleasure in all of it. Simply put, Lucius + anal = HOT. Unfortunately I couldn't bust out the wine because it's 7:45 in the morning and I don't want to make the exam situation worse than it already is, haha! How entertaining would that be? I do have some classmates that have written papers after a bit too much wine and those were hilarious.

    I wish this chapter had been longer! I'm such a deviant. But I suppose Lucius hadn't had that kind of pleasure in a long time and Hermione is often a little too good at things, even the first time, so I understand the quick nature of their play. Sigh. If I went back to sleep right now I'd have some pleasant dreams.

    I suppose I should go back to studying about hip replacements...hehe, Lucius might need a hip replacement after that orgasm. Snerk.
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  • From Scarybearhair on September 18, 2008
    Eeeek! I am sorry LaBib. Here I pester you all weekend to update, and then when you do, I don
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  • From tambrathegreat on September 17, 2008
    Wow, that was hot. I could see everything you wrote and what an image it created. Will Lucius get his wish in the next chapter? I hope so. Hermione needs to learn everything she can from her kinky husband.

    Great job, and I anxiously await more.
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  • From blueartemis on September 16, 2008
    OK, that was hot. And he did have to trust her quite a bit for that. I hope she gets over her fear and lets him do it back to her. The trust is really building, and I like that. I also like the idea that you are getting closer to finishing up the mystery.
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