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Reviews for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe

From chickaboo on September 16, 2008
*Clears throat* Excuse me, I just need to take a moment......

OH. MY. GODS. Sweetie, wow. I feel as if I've been made innocent and corrupted all over again. lol *Shivers* Mmmmmm.....yummy kinkiness. More please!
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From Pumkin on September 16, 2008
ok. wow. i don't know what to say. can't wait for the next chapter. happy dreams tonight. keep up the good work.
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From LadyVoldemort87 on September 16, 2008
Wow!

Chapter 41, sure was a hot one indeed.

So we reached the long awaited anal chapter, and it was intimately done and I have to admit, despite my prior doubts and reservations about the whole Lucius anal subject, it was very well done, and I enjoyed it.

Bravo, LaBib!

Looking forward to the next chapter!

~LadyVoldemort87~

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From Clare1984 on September 16, 2008
I hope I can finish this review - my laptop might go haywire. Unfortunately, the drool rag you provided was not sufficient - one drool rag and all that kinky lemony goodness and my computer is now in danger!

Wow, so good! Ooh, having Lucius laid out to feast on and pleasure - lovely! I do love these lemon breaks so much!

Anyhoo, thanks for the encouragement. I have decided to make my story a Lucius/Hermione because I just find it easier to write it as her. I love writing Hermione anyway. I am steadily working on it.

I am loving this story and I think my computer has recovered. Wait, should there be smoke?
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From ANON - Jesse on September 16, 2008
Wow!! Now that is what you call a lemon!!!!!!! :) Great job. Is it Hermione's turn next?? I wonder if she is more relaxed about that now that she has seen her husband enjoying it so much.
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From ANON - Rini on September 16, 2008
I did see the pictures and they are pretty dresses, but how Hermione said that if she
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From soldiersgirl0709 on September 16, 2008
Poor guy! She completely buggered him...I mean tuckered him out!!!!

=)

Ready for part 2!
Happy Writing
SG
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From helenesnape on September 16, 2008
Thanks for the drool rag...I most certainly needed it because that was HOT!!!

For some reason (that I don't truly understand, but is my own nonetheless) I feel a little weird saying how much I enjoyed that interlude. It was just so erotic to read about Hermione (in esscence) buggering Lucius. The fact that she enjoyed it simply because she was pleasuring him just added to it! Your descriptives of the scenario were just...WOW! (I'm speechless!) I think I need a cold shower!

Thanks for the mind-blowing chapter! I'm looking forward to more on the mystery.

BTW, when can I have a turn on the Kinky Merry-Go-Round with Lucius?
MHS
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From Damiana on September 16, 2008
Aw LaBib! Don't slow down on my account...life is a little busy for me these days but it only means that I get to read several delightful chapters at a time once I get a chance to breathe.

Chapter 41-So the jade columns serve as measuring rods. I wonder if they can be made to do other things... So what was the duplicate made of? Will it simply fade into thin air after a while? If the columns are merely duplicated, why aren't they just used as they are and simply cleaned with magic? Heirloom sex-toys...odd to say the least. I think I just answered my own question.

Hm. And what about Hermione? Does she get any this time around? (I'll allow for a short recess before things continue...)

*neatly folds her drool rag and readies it in hopes of round 2*

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From Heidi191976 on September 16, 2008
A great chapter. I look forward to reading the next one.
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From ANON - doodle on September 16, 2008
My,my,my...I need a cold drink of water. I was struck by two sentences "center of his universe" and "opening his heart and soul to her" I think I quoted them correctly. Looking at the beginning of the story to now he has done more than change it is as if he was recreated. I wonder the true purpose of the veil. Thanks for something to ponder.
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From Utopia on September 16, 2008
So, they don't use the actual jade pieces, is that a hygiene thing?

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From Citten on September 16, 2008
i am rather like hermione anything to please lucius (well almost anything. :) ) well he was very statisfied and on to a goods night sleep. so what of our poor hermione? ;) i am sure lucuius will think of something wonderful for a repayment. :) thanks for the update! and i do hope that you state off with the next morning or latter that same night =)
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From Phreakdom on September 16, 2008
Brilliant! Absolutely lovely! I so rarely get to indulge in a good pegging scene and though this wasn
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From Damiana on September 14, 2008
Chapter 40

All caught up!

The past few chapters have been loads of fun! I really enjoyed reading the dinner party scenes and am now eagerly awaiting lemony dessert!

Will you be explaining the use of those jade columns any further? Oh...and three cheers for deviance!
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