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Reviews for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From Heidi191976 on September 11, 2008
    This was a great chapter. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From HermioneMalfoFan on September 11, 2008
    More lemons in the next chapter, yay!

    Nicely done, this one, too! And still no hints who's behind the blackmailing. You're letting us hang there! That is so mean (well, maybe it is meaner that we have to go without lemons after the expectations you raised for the end of the chapter...)! But I have the impression that they get into societies good graces, and that's good. They need to be trusted to do what they have to do!

    Already impatient for your next update!
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  • From Phreakdom on September 11, 2008
    Lucius is quite the deviant though I think that only makes me love him more. It
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  • From ANON - lurky loo on September 11, 2008
    Lucius isn't the only tease, love. And while I don't think I'll be dying of scurvy anytime soon, I am greatly anticipating the lemons ahead. Very, very sour, wonderfully raunchy lemons. Hee hee. I wonder if you'll ever do a Hermione Lucius story where Hermione is the one with the kinks to begin with. See, I am married to a lovely Remus Lupin type. He does three positions. Now don't get me wrong, he knows his business with those three positions, and it is quite, erm, profitable. But I'd love to see you write a story where it is Hermione that introduces Lucius to the depravities to be enjoyed with kinkiness.

    Also, think I will just start reviewing as Mia, from now on. Lurky loo was in reference to your plea to lurkers to review. I was being cute, I'm done now. Just Mia. And again, I thank you for such wonderfully entertaining stories. You make my day lighter and sparklier. And may I order a dish of rising pantaloons as well? Or are you fresh out?

    I honestly have absolutely no clue where you are going with this mystery. It could be anyone, and I LOVE that about this story. Usually I can make an educated guess, but not so much as a whisper of an hypothesis on this one. I am completely in the dark. Good one, love.

    ~Mia~
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  • From tambrathegreat on September 10, 2008
    I adored the whole checking each other out portion of the chapter. Hermione being protective of Lucius' "reputation" and worried over how tight his breeches were was cute.

    I hope they can meet their aims with the dinner party without getting Lucius embroiled in a duel over some wife's honor or his own.

    The dinner was very Austinesque with all the sexual undertones. I really loved the chapter and am sorry I missed the other one. Iguess I 'll have to check more often.


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  • From on September 09, 2008
    Oh that clever man in his tight pants! I look forward to reading more of the party. Thanks for the update!
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  • From ANON - Rini on September 08, 2008
    Yes, I think Hermione was being a little over the top with the compliments. Yes, Lucius was eating it up, but what happens when he stops to think about it and goes
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  • From ANON - lurkyloo on September 08, 2008
    As lovely and entertaining as ever, love. I am always happy to have more of your work to peruse. You've certainly set up an excellent tale thus far.

    ~Mia
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  • From Heidi191976 on September 08, 2008
    Another great chapter. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From amyfeddy on September 08, 2008
    You have piqued my interest. I know I've said it before, but Ilove this story and can't wiat to read more. Even if there are no lemons in the chapter.
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  • From ANON - jw on September 08, 2008
    ch 39 - go, Lucius, go!!! the Charm-Meister is at work and I think he is enjoying it, since his wife is fully aware that his charms belong to her at the end of the night. dare I hope we will learn know who the blackmailer is in just a few chapters? thanks for the fun chapter!!
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  • From CoCoM on September 07, 2008
    Tight trouser time, I am hoping! LOL. Just the thought of Lucius in something like that..*drools*
    Hermione keeps on making me laugh when she says "bosoms" all the time. She is too adorable.
    I hope that I am not the only one who hasn't a clue who the blackmailer is...
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  • From blueartemis on September 07, 2008
    OK, that was a lovely set up. I enjoyed reading about them getting ready for their roles. Anyway, I like that he is getting closer to figuring out the blackmail. And I can't wait to see how you reward them for dealing with those social obligations.
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  • From Scarybearhair on September 07, 2008
    Yay LaBib, another update.
    I suppose you won
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  • From ANON - slytherin-princess on September 07, 2008
    I am so entranced by this story!! I'm dying to find out who the blackmailer is more than i yern for the lemons (shock and horror!)
    Just wondering have you a plan on how many chapters more there will be?
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