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Reviews for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From ANON - pasen852 on September 02, 2008
    hi im back and all caught up hope you did not think i had loved and left you lol

    story is fab as always just when i think i have sussed it out you go and confuse me again lol i love how you do that.

    update soon take care and huggs from the uk
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  • From chickaboo on September 01, 2008
    You know I must say as much as I enjoy the lemons, your lemonless chapters are just as good and I enjoy them just as much....just differently. LOL Anyway, another fabulous update and a wonderful little look into the minds of Lucius and Hermione and their thoughts and feelings for one another. I can't wait for more!
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  • From blueartemis on September 01, 2008
    She obviously thinks quite highly of him. Apparently though, Lucius can't see it, which makes for a good story. That was a good, if lemon-free chapter.
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  • From ANON - Rini on September 01, 2008
    As long as there
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  • From AndreaLorraine on September 01, 2008
    Chapter 38

    Oh, they are so cute with their verbal sparring.

    Lucius is such a sweetheart in this chapter. He's being a very good husband. I must say, good behavior does suit him and maybe he is making some progress on his New Leaf program. I'm just chuckling to myself thinking of Lucius talking to the women Hermione lists. How could any of them resist him? If he can't charm or con it out of them, he'll SCARE it out of them. That's how he rolls. Reason #53245 why I love him.

    It's nice to see that their bond is starting to include more than just physical passion. That's all fine and dandy, but without the kind of intimacy they have in this chapter, there is (the irony) a weak link in their relationship. Lucius has admitted to himself that he's basically in love. I'm sure Hermione feels the same. The trouble is admitting it to each other. I hope they can do it before whatever ill-defined threat that exists makes life difficult.

    Well done. I wait with baited breath for the fecal fan-hitting.
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  • From AndreaLorraine on September 01, 2008
    Chapter 37

    Heh, I'm not surprised that Hermione asked Margaret about some of Lucius's more interesting proclivities. She just isn't the type to remain in ignorance if she can help it. I have a feeling Lucius may be avoiding the bordello a bit more than usual now, hehe. Perhaps Hermione had a double purpose in her questioning.

    I do love a sexually liberated male. Poor Lucius and the unsatisfying candles. Hermione should do a little better by him once she knows what she's doing. :)

    Glad to see that the issue of potential slurs seems resolved.

    Good comparison to the Sorting Hat. I always wondered what was up with that particular object; JK never gave us an explanation. I can come up with plenty of my own, but it makes sense that the Veil is a similar sort of old, sentient magical object. Another interesting dimension to consider.

    So far it seems like Lucius and Hermione are doing evertying right, but I think it's just the calm before the storm...
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  • From ANON - jw on August 31, 2008
    ch 38 - ahh, Lucius is such a sweetie!! I like this peek at the Malfoys' home life, and look forward to seeing him charm those ladies into their secrets. if only Hermione can remember that he's charming them for a purpose! thanks for the new chapter.
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  • From Phreakdom on August 31, 2008
    Another lovely chapter! I can
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  • From amyfeddy on August 31, 2008
    I've missed this story, my computer was down and I couldn't read anything for a while. Anyway I was rewarded with three great chapters, especially riding, that was great. Out of curiosity, how ling is this story going to be, I don't remember you mentioning it before. I love it no matter how long it is, and you have certainly made up for twenty three chapters of waiting for lemons, but don't let that stop you, bring all the lemons you want.
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  • From HermioneMalfoFan on August 31, 2008
    LaBib,

    this chapter was so nice! They do deserve a bit of fluff and just to be happy in each others company... Well done! Although I think it's more of a filler chapter? Whatever, I loved it!

    Your comment on beeing married to Lucius: You are certainly right! I have no doubt that he would do anything for his family and that it doesn't take much to offend him! I do like that side of him, what girl doesn't like the idea that her man would go as far as kill for her (okay, even if I wouldn't want it to happen, but the idea has some appeal!)? Hmmm... Lucius the protector, Hermione is such a lucky girl!
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  • From soldiersgirl0709 on August 31, 2008
    Awwwwww.....gotta love those quiet moments between lovers. I miss those. :(
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  • From Heidi191976 on August 31, 2008
    Another great chapter. I hope that Lucius can get information about the blackmailer from the women, that way the blackmailer can be caught and punished. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From angelprince on August 31, 2008
    Hi Labib.

    O.K. I'm all caught up now.

    Lucius was a tad fluffy in this chapter. He's got it bad.

    I do have a feeling that a wedge is going to be driven between these two. They are getting along too well.

    Perhaps I just crave the drama.

    The thought of Lucius in a marble tub full of bubbles is rather tasty. But the hipbath did have it's merits.


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  • From ANON - Utopia (just not logged in) on August 31, 2008
    Oh dear, the best she can come up with is washing their mouthes with soap? She's soooooo cute! lol!

    Idiot females travel in flocks? Really? I know several flocks, if that's thre case. Cats with sharp claws, they be. [and she channels Yoda...]

    Lucius makes EVERYTHING all alright again by giving her a hug. Hugs are good. Lucius is well trained. lol.

    Have you ever tried to write a review whilst watching the Hitchhiker's guide to the galaxy? Its a challenge, I tell you! lol.

    Talk about well trained! If Lucius wanted to guarentee endless happiness and greatfulness then putting that bath in was a brilliant idea... Does Lucius introduce really good internal plumbing to the magical world??

    There's always something that makes me smile when I read HP fanfics - the use of the word MATE rather than spouse. Mate is more organic and natural, a more comfortable word to use. Spouse sounds like it's artificial in some way, the way your mouth shapes when you say it, it just feels OTT and if you look in a mirror while you say it you look a total twit. Mate is so calm with natural mouth shapes... and I'm rambling.

    The biochemistry of the maternal atatchment (providing the atatchment forms) is the same one as when you first fall head-over-heels in love, but it doesn't dwindle like romance does. Lots of happy neurotransmitters are released, Oxytocin among them. I'm not surprised Lucius noticed Narcissa loved Draco more than him - if she never truly loved him, then her atatchment to Draco would have been a biochemical slap in the face. I'll dig up the really well explained diagram from NewScientist and send it to you, it says it better than I ever could.

    Hermione loves him, and should they decide to have children, I think Hermione has plenty of love to share between two people who need her care.




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  • From ShiningEyes on August 31, 2008
    Aww, the bath thing was such a sweet gesture (not that Lucius would ever admit it!) Can't wait to find out who's doing the blackmailing - or for Hermione to say "sod it" to polite society and tell those horrible women where to go!
    Brilliant story! thank you for writing it!
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