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Reviews for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From purefaith91 on November 06, 2010
    It is possible for the Veil to put them in that particular time to accomplish "saving" the magic world without directing HOW they accomplish that special feat. Or the veil could simply know how they will act and so put them where they needed to be and gave them what they would need to follow their destiny. It does not have to control their every move and it is still possible that they NOT do what needs to be done to do the saving. Very interesting. p
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  • From purefaith91 on November 06, 2010
    Ch.17: Lucius may be in stalker mode, but I believe that he is paying dearly for whatever he may get in the end. It is just amazing to me that he keeps coming back for more, even if they are the only ones from their time. I would have set her up in some other place by now if I were Lucius. Usually Hermione is good to a fault; however, she is snotty and rude here. Where was her apology to him for sitting in front of him reading? And after he pointed out to her that she never thanked him for anything he did for her, she finally said thank you for him getting the wrinkles out of her dress. There was no thank you for the book store or the books. Just bad manners all the way around. p
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  • From purefaith91 on November 05, 2010
    For someone that is so smart and experienced, Lucius appears to never actually think through what he says in conversation. To tell her that they would have killed her? It is a good thing he is so gorgeous! p
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  • From purefaith91 on November 05, 2010
    ch.11: Lucius is constantly thinking about how to protect Hermione, physically and emotionally. It is too bad that she does not know of his actions. Also, he takes such "pleasure" for being right about the muggles, but maybe they would not have been so intent on killing the magical beings if they had not been hunted by magical people so recently...wonder if that will ever occur to him (or Hermione). Excellent! p
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  • From purefaith91 on November 05, 2010
    ch.10: I love when Lucius looks at things from Hermione's point of view as he did the torture and Ministry. Knowing that he was ultimately taking care of himself, it is good to see that he recognizes the effect on another. Also, it is very interesting to see things from his point of view (only killing "bad" guys, not being so aggresive with Potter, etc.). It makes it easier to see him on much more human terms. p

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  • From purefaith91 on November 05, 2010
    Ch.9: (I remembered, finally to put the chapter.) Lucius is always Lucius, but if he is on your side, who could want anything else? HG is not going to be happy when she finds out that while she was being kidnapped and assaulted, he was seeking relief with a ho somewhere. p
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  • From purefaith91 on November 05, 2010
    Is there a reason that they could not go to the Malfoys? If they are all magical, you would think that they would understand being sent back or some other explanation and one would expect that LM knows enough of their history to prove it to them. Of course, if they are not rich yet and he is the one that amasses their fortune (that he inherits in the future), that would be kind of cool. And what if he and Hermione had kids back then and no one knows that she is not pureblood, and it is discovered that she "muddied" their family tree hundreds of years ago... Anyway, reading on... p
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  • From purefaith91 on November 04, 2010
    I would never have expected Hermione to be so self righteous as she was with Lucius and the procurement of money. There was a time she would have been plotting and telling Lucius ways to get it. Just goes to show how life can drag a person down and obliterate their self confidence. It kind of makes me feel sorry for Lucius, which is a rarity for me.
    There are so many ways that this could impact the future that they just left. I can't wait to see what you have done with them. p
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  • From purefaith91 on November 04, 2010
    If they did go to the past, Hermione may be able to be of significant use to Lucius as she should be able to recognize the eras that some of the antiques she worked with were originally. Very interesting. Maybe they will be able to find the Manor since it had been standing for a thousand years or some such thing. p
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  • From purefaith91 on November 04, 2010
    Very interesting so far. Wish that there was someone around to care for Hermione. I know Lucius will end up with her, but he is so self involved that he still will not recognize what is going on for her. He has a chance to have family still out there, while Hermione really does not.
    Wonder if they are in purgatory or only on another spiritual plain. Looking forward to where you go with this. p
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  • From ANON - Illuminare on August 07, 2010
    Enjoying the wonderful vocabulary and build-up of erotic tension! Bravo! Illuminare x
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  • From ANON - Glotip on July 25, 2010
    While I skip some sections of your stories, I must say your LM tales are a work in erotica , full of feeling and decadent. Thos one of my favorites since it has a decent ineresting plot. Your writing is smart and articulate and let's not forget the inherent humor and mischief. Good work
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  • From crysta656 on April 26, 2010
    I just couldn't help myself, I had to start reading this one again! I think that this one was my favorite out of the whole story. It's so....can't think of a word.... I guess so "unLucius" to try to save someone else, especially if it means his own death.

    Anyway, just thought to let you know that I love this story and will probably read the rest of it through the day. Great job!
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  • From ExperimentalMe on December 11, 2009
    Thank you, thank you for such an original, sexy and exciting story! You are truly a master, weaving plot lines deftly and keeping to cannon characterizations. I loved every chapter. This is at the very top of my all time favorite list. And I do appreciate that you keep to your promise of finishing every story. This one was sublime. I love that you use big words too - educate the masses for they shall lift us all up as a community. Bravo!
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  • From Kayrox133 on October 29, 2009
    Thank you for such a good story. I am curious how the Veil played a role in their situation and wonder if they will ever run into anyone else from their time.
    By the way, the picture of a shirtless Lucius was wonderful. You made me and my coworkers very happy to drool over the Luscious Lucius.
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