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Reviews for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From ANON - NinjaWitch on August 27, 2008
    I just finished Ch 2. This is really good, I'm excited to read the rest. I think the real question is WHEN are they, as opposed to where.
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  • From Pumkin on August 27, 2008
    i can just imagine Hermione going to talk margaret about that. the things she could learn. thanks for another informative chapter. i can guess what the next one will be about. hopefully. keep up the good work. update soon please.
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  • From on August 27, 2008
    I so love the plotty bits. The natural evolution of their ideas is such a pleasure to read. I like it when, as a reader, I feel more like a voyeur in a slice of life rather than just reading. You do that so very well. Thanks for the updates!
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  • From doodle on August 27, 2008
    What a wonderful surprise to find a new chapter. I had gotten the sense that Hermione's days were carefully structured and I delighted to read that in fact she had been recieving tutoring. As I prepare to evacuate for Gustave I am thankful that the Internet is everywhere and I can keep updated with your story.
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  • From ANON - nitesfool on August 27, 2008
    LOL>>> well i'm glad that the whole fingering comment wasn't too personal...lol. but yeah, i'mma warn u now that i'm tired, watchin a show, and anticipating a dentist appointment i gotta run to in a hour, so i don't know how good of a review i can give, but for u i'll try.... now, on with the story!owwww.... hermione's researching freaky things, why am i not surprised....EXPERT... WHAT EXPERT!!!AWWW....lucius is so insecure about his age(though he does a good job hiding it)...lol!!!!! she's takin sex lessons...PRICELESS! OH NO.... BOOTY PENETRATION!!!! i've been tryin to get my man cakes to agree to let me do it for the longest... not a dildo though... just a finger.ohhhhhhhh.... we're back to the veil again... i almost forgot about the little conspiracy it had against them...lol.... roastbeef... ur such a riot...lol!he he... the body came out the other side....SUCKERS!AH HA.... that was a great comparison.... i'mma have to give u props on drawing a parellel between the sorting hat and the veil... "DIPPING HIS WICK".... I GOTTA USE THAT ONE ON SOMEBODY AND WATCH AS THEY STARE AT ME STUPIDLY TRYING TO GRASP THE UNDERSTANDING! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH " WEAK LINKS... unless u had pointed that out, i probably woulda never caught it.ok... it was good... gotta run.... bye!
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  • From ShiningEyes on August 27, 2008
    Hiya, i've been lurking in the background reading through this - and re-reading some bits! this is absolutely brilliant. Just wanted to say that and please keep up with the not-quite-a-week-between-updates thing. It makes my day/week to find an update to a story I am enjoying so much!
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  • From Phreakdom on August 27, 2008
    Another fabulous chapter! Though I
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  • From ANON - Lurky loo on August 27, 2008
    Another chapter, woohoo!! I'm enthralled by this story, and thought this chapter moved along nicely. Good tease, by the way. And I love that Lucius' scent is Lime. Rather close to him always have an innate lemon smell to him. Guess I'll always hope for Lucius lemons, tee hee. Please tell me that the next chapter has groves of citrus. I'm so looking forward to it. Thank you, once again for the most excellent entertainment. Great diversion, just when I needed it most.

    ~Mia
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  • From Heidi191976 on August 27, 2008
    Another great chapter. I look forward to reading the next one.
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  • From CoCoM on August 27, 2008
    Lucius, a snatch!! I was laughing my butt off. Hermione is so silly sometimes but we love her. And I know I am going to be loving the next chapter if the goings ons of that painting mentioned will be making an appearance....*holds breath in anticipation* Hehehe!
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  • From Utopia on August 27, 2008
    EH! Where's my review gone from last time? I spent ages writing it! I was going to get huffy at not getting a reply - but lo and behold there is NO review! It was about a page long on Word! Stupid AFF.

    For goodness sake! Lucius, get your claws in at the Breakfast table!

    Clever Hermione! Asking an expert! Brilliant!

    TMI on the candles. I didn't want that image. Though, that's really dangerous as once something's lost up there then getting it back generally needs a trip to Casualty (ER) to remove it. In fact, there are a lot of sex-acts-gone-wrong that end up in Casualty - usually people having to have things removed from bottoms because they've lost them up there! Anything going up there has to have either a really wide bottom end so it can't enter or a handle to keep hold of.

    So, the muggle world was a mental training ground - but everything that happened there was an accident?

    I wonder if there's a bit of veil sewn into the sorting hat?

    Killing tree roots in real life is a nightmare! Doing it politically is going to be like swimming in custard!

    Ah... so there is a selfish reason for Lucius... he's looking out for his own future family - but with Hermione's muggleborn genes, will there BE any more linx?




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  • From AndreaLorraine on August 25, 2008
    I'm having a deja vu and thinking that I may already have reviewed this chapter...but who cares, if you get two reviews I'm sure you won't complain.

    Lucius in riding attire = melt. Lucius with riding crop = vaporize.

    So Hermione's gone over to the other side at last! A character as intelligent and bossy as her has to have a dominant side, or at least I've always thought so. I'm worried about this threat that Hermione received, though...shit's gonna hit the fan eventually, is it not? Well, til then may Hermione and Lucius investigate many a painting at all hours of the day.
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  • From ANON - malfoysplaymate on August 25, 2008
    Hello there! Im so happy i got a new computer! my last one crashed three weeks ago and im finally up to date with my favorite stories. As usual superb chapters! come back soon!
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  • From sheherazade on August 24, 2008
    Wow, I suppose Lucius won't be on horseback again any time soon. Though they do have all the magical lotions and potions to fall back on.

    Hermione certainly took to that role as if to the manner born, didn't she? I can quite see her as a dominatrix, actually, rather than the other way around. I like the way Lucius pretends to be sacrificing his desires to hers when all the time he has been longing for a good thrashing, the wily coyote!

    Beautifully, viscerally described; made me feel quite ouchy!
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  • From tambrathegreat on August 24, 2008
    Yes, I always like a thoroughly spanked Lucius. I'm sure Hermione does too. I like how they are 'sharing the power' so to speak. His masculine perogative aside, Hermione really does need to step in with the child-rearing. Draco was a git as he was written. She can't hava repeat of that.

    I also loved Lucius' mental gyrations on the cost of the school. That was a nice bit. I think everyone would be the same way about the money spent, even if they figured for inflation. It's just the way the human mind works.
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