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Reviews for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From ANON - Angel_mary89@hotmail.com on August 16, 2008
    Wow, I am really looking forward to your next installment. I do believe that the magic world would be better off appreciating the Links, as you call them, instead of ignoring them. I wonder when Lucius and Hermione will be going back to their rightful time and what impact their new scheme will have on everyone they know. Keep up the good work!
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  • From chickaboo on August 16, 2008
    So I was catching up on the last few episodes of Brotherhood that I missed and was treated to the ever lovely sight of Jason Isaac's butt. It's a good butt. A VERY good butt.......................sigh. lol

    Great update! I can't wait for more!
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  • From ladyravenna on August 16, 2008
    I am inwardly laughing at the fact that Lucius is having trouble thanking the House Elves. I can just imagine the grimace on his face as he tries to spit the words out. If only I were a fly and could watch the expressions across his face. LOL.
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  • From on August 16, 2008
    I'm excited right along with Minister Stump! What a fantastic idea. I loved how you laid everything out with their ideas and brainstorming. Great chapter. Thanks for the update.
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  • From dolphindreamer on August 16, 2008
    Love the Links idea, brill! Also really enjoying how hermione and lucius are learning to deal with each others faults in positive ways. Especially love the Lynx mascot. Although I think the Squibs should be able to play quidditch, technically it's the broom thats magical, and it's such an important part of the school to exclude a house, even with other sports implemented, would put them in alesser light. Also allowing the 'Links' the oppurtunity to use magical arifacts (subtely) lets them feel like they are still a part of wizarding culture, instead of just getting suffled into the muggle world to protect the magical folk who can fly on a charmed broom. Just thought I'd mention it. Keep it up!
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  • From CoCoM on August 16, 2008
    Lucius and Hermione are so clever! And of course, it doesn't hurt to be filthing rich as well. LOL. I hope things go well with the school. I am guessing that eventually we will discover who the mastermind behind the genocide of witches and wizards is/was....or am I wrong? And I definitely am enjoying the plot here, I am.....I just may enjoy the smut a teensy bit more. :-P
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  • From AndreaLorraine on August 16, 2008
    Chapter 35

    Great advancement of the plot...this chapter shows how much you thought about this school for squibs.

    However, it did ring a few bells for me; though Lucius is trying to be generous, people could construe it as a 'separate but not equal' sort of situation. Also, calling squibs 'links' just conjures up visions of magical children taunting the squibs by calling them 'missing links'.

    It is a good idea, though the implementation may prove difficult. And I worry about the reaction of the anti-squib powers that be. Don't hurt Lucius and Hermione! T_T

    Anxious to see the reaction to their plan...it really would change their world. :)

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  • From AndreaLorraine on August 16, 2008
    Chapter 34

    Ah, my smut radar was right, hehe. At last Hermione is sold on the merits of daytime sex! Huzzah! Some lovely, sexy afternoon delight for our pair...no complaints there. I daresay Lucius doesn't have any complaints either. Hmm...right about now he may start to regret his sexual empowerment of Hermione. Though, not really since he's a switch... :) Looking forward to that, since Hermione isn't often portrayed as dominant or in charge. Great job as per usual...I shall now go clean up my puddle of drool.

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  • From Phreakdom on August 16, 2008
    That was wonderful! I love the way they
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  • From blueartemis on August 16, 2008
    That was a heck of a chapter. Almost as exciting as the lemons. I like the plan, and the fact that it will make a "useless" sector of society useful at least in the eyes of the more magically gifted just that much better. It will be quite interesting to see who is opposed.



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  • From Damiana on August 13, 2008
    Chapter 34

    *dances the lemon dance*

    woohoo!

    Ahem. Sorry. Good lemon that...

    Ok. I think I'm sated for now onto the plot! (I lie of course! Although you know I like plot as much as I like smut, possibly more...)

    As to who was dominant: I think it was Lucius. He was calling the shots in the end and although Hermione was in control of her actions she was still following instructions.
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  • From Utopia on August 12, 2008
    Hello luv, I keep reading your notes to the lovely lurkers... and I had to write this for you:

    To those of you who lurk in the dark,
    Please, step to the light and make yourselves stark!
    I do not ask for essays, just a mere phrase,
    Even the smallest comment will amaze!
    I only wish to know your thoughts,
    (And to check my writings are what they ought!)
    I write for my pleasure and I hope you find
    The time to type me but a few lines.

    And for those who always speak,
    Your continued comments are a treat!
    But move up and make room,
    As I think some lurkers will soon bloom!
    Make them welcome, for they are shy,
    And along with you, to them I
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  • From ANON - rachellehcar on August 11, 2008
    Great lemon, but I think I'm starting to look forward to the mystery aspect of the story. It's still a great story though, keep it up!
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  • From Clare1984 on August 11, 2008
    Well, that was a lot of smutty goodness! I think that's the lemon quota topped up for another couple chapters. Those picture tiles have been one of the best things about this story. Hope they'll be making another appearance soon.

    I almost choked on my drink when Lucius told Hermione to 'lick me like a lollipop'. funny and yum, Lucius-flavoured lollies. They would be big-sellers! But 'You owe me, Curly. Pucker up' was the kicker. I really laughed at that one - I love this so much!

    That spanking came out of nowhere - especially for just a little tickle! Hey - slap and tickle! lol, I'm a bit slow - the smut makes my brain stop functioning apart from at basic level.

    Anyhoo, fantastic chapter and I love how comfortable Hermione is getting with her new sexual side and Lucius with his loving side. All so good!

    I will keep you posted with updates on my progress towards Lucius - just waiting delivery of the hazmat suit and then it's off to see naked lucius, wonderful naked lucius! It's gonna be a long visit!
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  • From sheherazade on August 11, 2008
    Well, Lucius picked the activity, and the curtain-raiser too, so he has had a fair bit of dominant input. But Hermione gets control of situations by being very, very good at what she is doing, and she certainly played true to form there! So it's pretty close, I think.

    I love that Lucius has a maze - and the excellent uses to which he puts it. I was in a maze last week; shame it was full of people! Hmm.

    Fantastic smut; it's always so detailed (was going to say blow-by-blow), as if you are watching it in slo-mo freeze-frame. Absolutely nothing is missed, every sense covered, plus what's going through their mind. It is truly like vicarious shagging! And that's what we're after round here ;).

    More power to your elbow!
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