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Reviews for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From ANON - Jesse on August 08, 2008
    Hey!!! I read the story for the mystery!!! ....... *giggle*snort*giggle* all right fine... I don't read your stories for anything besides the smut. Sheesh! Is this such a crime! No! I don't think so! ;) Anyways I look at the plot you give your stories as the extra whipped cream to the already perfect banana split. We are already quite happy with the banana split but we could never say no to extra whipped cream. Especially if it is Lucius who is holding the can of whipped cream!!!!!!! Now please excuse me while I go gorge myself on a banana split. YUMMY!!!
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  • From Phreakdom on August 08, 2008
    It was great to see Hermione
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  • From ANON - doodle on August 08, 2008
    What do you mean when you use "switch"? I think they are both dominant when they need to be. It is much more fun to let the other be in control some of the time.
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  • From amyfeddy on August 08, 2008
    It could be said that while the submissive is on the receiving end of the punishments, they are the ones who are really in control. That being said I think Hermione was the one in control, from the tickling to riding Lucius to completion. Love your lemons, bring more and we can do something fabulous with them.
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  • From sheherazade on August 08, 2008
    Lol, 'my complexion will darken if I don't keep my bonnet on'. It's a good thing Lucius knows her better than that.

    I wonder what Hermione's research will uncover - in fact, I'm looking forward to more uncovering in general ;).

    I'm glad Lucius got an explanation of The Wizard of Auds, even if he did worry about losing face. I think he needs a bit more knowledge of Muggle culture if he isn't going to fall victim to many more of these misunderstandings.

    The story is moving on nicely - I do have to wonder what Lucius had in mind when he mentioned re-enacting one of the more outre paintings though...
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  • From Damiana on August 05, 2008
    Chapter 33

    A cooling off period?! You must be kidding!

    Hmm. *drifts off dreaming of a smorgasborg of smut*

    Hehe. Ok, ok. I have to admit that I would be disappointed if there wasn't a plot to go along with all the sex. It keeps things from getting repetitive and your plots are loads of fun!
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  • From TheLadyMiya on August 05, 2008
    Haha a "sm
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  • From ANON - Slytherin-Princess on August 05, 2008
    Blackmail....how apt of a chapter name. With what must i blackmail you with to get you to revisit the wall of paintings?? HUH????

    Ok you asked for it!! I WANT LEMONS!!!!!!!!! *throws herself on floor and beats her fists with the energy of a petulant 6 year old!*
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  • From blueartemis on August 04, 2008
    I like plot advancement as much as the next reader. But I must say, I love lemons with Lucius. Anyway, the mystery deepens, and I like to see what happened there with the Malfoys and the Squibs.
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on August 04, 2008
    Wow, so this whole thing with the Squibs goes deeper...I'm very intreiged...The whole blackmail plot is very original as is the plot, you have a vivid imagination, LaBib.

    Poor old Luci, the wizard of Oz, god it still makes me laugh.

    Yep, my red shoes do have a habit of sometimes getting me what I wish for. They have 6 inch heels and I love them LOL call em my dazzling heels. Oh to wish though...*sighs* I know what or rather WHO I'd wish for =)

    A great chapter! I look forward to the next one!


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  • From ANON - The Green Fairy on August 04, 2008
    Divine story! I am one of the dreaded lurkers that molest your hit counter and evaporate, and I have finally deigned to leave a review. Okay, here it goes: what an intelligent and may I say tastefully lemony story. I have some ideas of where you're going with this,but no true clue. The plot is magnificent, and I am even more pleased that there is, in fact much of it to be found in between the (delicious) lemons
    and UST. Your Hermione and Lucius are such a realistic and relatable couple, it makes the story so much more profound. I am especially impressed that you make your noticeably different from your other fics. So I must say it is a rare and delightful surprise to find a writer such as yourself hiding behind the terrible smut that clogs AFF. I can't WAIT for thenext update, and I am going to thumb through your other fics to sustain me.

    L'amour

    The Green Fairy

    P.S. I LOVE dominant Lucius, he makes me shiver.
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  • From Clare1984 on August 04, 2008
    Of course you need a cooling off period - don't get me wrong, I love Lucius but Hermione does need to be able to walk and having a small break from the lemons make them that much sweeter next time round. although, lemons aren't really sweet are they? You know what I mean!

    Another ace chapter. No wonder Lucius had a skip in his step although I loved that he got worried about having hurt Hermione. That possessive nature coupled with a tender loving side just makes for an even better Lucius.

    More intrigue with the squibs. The storyline is just so good, it just amazes me how you come up with all this. With those two working on it, whoever the blackmailer is better run and hide cos Hermione and Lucius are gonna get you!

    I did realise cookies and cake weren't really gonna cut it. I can imagine the guards aren't the most eloquent of creatures but they aren't copulating anywhere near me. I know what has to be done though. I'm just going to have to take the job in hand... wearing protective gloves and chanting 'naked lucius' in my head the whole time, followed by several showers. I could stretch to a sponge bath but that's gonna require a hazmat suit. But, it's a sacrifice I'm willing to make. I can handle the skinny ones, it's the hairy, sweaty ones that make me cringe! naked lucius, naked lucius, naked lucius, naked lucius...
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  • From Visitkarte on August 04, 2008
    Lucius is apologising! And he feels embarrassed for not knowing a muggle book
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  • From ANON - Jesse on August 04, 2008
    Wow!! I really can't believe you left us like that! I hope you know how evil you are. But anyways.. the plot is getting interesting and I want to know more.
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  • From ANON - doodle on August 04, 2008
    I can not figure it out. Thank you! I love stories that twist and turn never revealing themselves. I wonder if the veil created a new world for Hermione or simply arranged the world to fit the new needs?
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