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Reviews for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From Heidi191976 on August 04, 2008
    A great chapter. I look forward to reading more to see if Hermione and Lucius figure out who the blackmailer is and to clear the Malfoy name.
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  • From ANON - Rini on August 04, 2008
    I love it how even though he
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  • From angelprince on August 04, 2008
    I still have absolutely no clue where this is going!! I love that!! There's nothing worse than having a story all figured out in the first few chapters.

    Still, the smutty bits alone could carry this fic far. Very far.

    Bring back the hipbath. There's fun to be had with that.


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  • From Utopia on August 04, 2008
    Well, I think it's book five. Nope, correction, it's book 6 (The Killing Dance) It's about chapter 30 ish. Opens with a sobbing-her-heart-out Anita.

    Somebody fill Lucius in on what Herms was on about! Oh, never mind, she does later down. Though, I've images of tWoO being like the monster book of monsters and having testicles so LM can hex them off... can you tell I've not had a cuppa yet this morning?

    Blackmail... oooh, the plot thickens like a non-newtonian fluid.

    Oooh, retail therapy, just as good as sexual healing! lol!

    Welcome to the tribe! lol! Cracking phrasing there!

    Whats up with the pale complexion? Eh? Eh? Nowt wrong with pale and interesting! *huffs*






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  • From Citten on August 04, 2008
    oh! this next chapter is going to be G O O D!!!!! well they now have more information but fewer answers then before. (sorry i am so distracted about what lucius is going to do!!!!!!!!!!) ......oh i almost forgot --where--did hermione go really cause you have to know that she really did not go to the wand shop that would just be crazy. well as alway in time right? :) cant you update sooner than a week?! :)
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  • From chickaboo on August 04, 2008
    Good lord those pictures of Lucius nearly gave me heart failure. lol Great update, and as always I can't wait for more!
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  • From CoCoM on August 04, 2008
    Lucius's misunderstanding about the "Wizard of Auds" is so amusing! Did you think of that before you started writing this story or did it come to you as you were going along. Either way, I am impressed. :-)
    Now...WHO is doing the blackmailing???
    I cannot wait for your next update and hopefully some more exploration of the naughty paintings! Whoo hoo! *giggle*
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  • From on August 03, 2008
    Ooooh I have a theory which I will keep to myself. I do really enjoy the plotty bits. I am excited for the next chapter. Thanks for the update!
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  • From ANON - Scary B on August 03, 2008
    LOL! Oh no LaBib, when I made that comment about The Red Shoes I had only read the title of your chapter, so I wasn
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  • From amyfeddy on August 03, 2008
    While I LOVE the smut, the story line has me quite interested as well.Ilove the way they are becoming so comfortable with each other as well. But I have a feeling that you like to write the smut as much as we like to read it, because this chapter was so much shorter than the other smuttier ones. As always I wait patiently, as if I had a choice.
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  • From AndreaLorraine on August 03, 2008
    Ah, poor Lucius, I can just imagine his mortification. Hermione did a good job of assuaging it, though. She stopped him before he could really become angry with himself and definitely soothed his ego (and piqued his interest) with her assurance that she enjoyed every moment of his jealousy.

    Welcome to the tribe, indeed. That's one tribe I wouldn't mind being a member of...by marriage. :)

    I love how Lucius is ready to go at the drop of a hat. When is Hermione going to cave to his daytime advances? She's really missing out.

    Do I sense some romance in the air? Walks in the rose garden, sudden apparitions to gazebos...

    And the mystery...the Armbrusters shed some light on what's going on. It makes me wonder if there is some kind of anti-squib network or 'club', for lack of a better term - like an early, rudimentary gang of Death Eaters. Right now they're trying to purify the wizarding race through bribery and blackmail, and when that doesn't work we all know what happens. I still say that the New Wave Master must be a wronged squib; perhaps he or she is proving to the wizarding world that one doesn't need magic when there is technology, and through that gaining power over the world that subjugated them. If Lucius and Hermione can curtail the anti-squib movement now, perhaps it will have a domino effect for the events of the future and much of the HP universe we know won't happen. But then what does that do to the timelines? There I go confusing myself again. Hehe all right, I think I'm done with my weekly dose of conjecture.

    Waiting patiently for another piece of the puzzle...
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  • From Phreakdom on August 03, 2008
    Welcome to the tribe, indeed haha. I enjoyed this chapter very much. Informative but not overly so, I liked that you didn
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  • From tambrathegreat on August 03, 2008
    Okay, I'm not at work. So I could look at that picture. Yum. The Wizard of Auds is still cracking me up. Will Hermione let him in on the joke, or will she let him suffer more?

    I see Hermione handled that well and delicately for Lucius' bruised sensiblilities. And Lucius is bending in his regard for Hermione, I see. I wonder who will say 'I love you' first. I think it will be him. He's such a romantic.

    Yes, the similarities between Lucius and Hermione are striking, aren't they? I'm glad they are getting to know each other well enough now to realize they aren't so different.

    Oh, my. Now I'm wondering if one of the Dursley's is the Master guy. It could be Dudley being controlled by a squib. I think I read somewhere that Muggleborns in the HP world came from an ancestor being a squib. Maybe Petuniais really pissed about Lily and siezed and opportunity. I also think you've introduced the character that is blackmailing, I just can't guess who yet.

    Great job, and I will tell when I get a new chapter done on my story.
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  • From CoCoM on August 03, 2008
    Aw, I love sexy, jealous, forceful-while-still-loving-in-spite-of-himself Lucius! VERY nice.
    It was interesting to hear the story about his uncle in the previous chapter. I am still looking forward to finding out if Lucius has taken his anscestors place or if he is in fact his own anscestor....it is all a bit confusing. Sort of like a bizarre episode of wizard "Doctor Who."
    I was giggling over the description of puce. Anyone who is an avid reader of Regency novels I am sure can relate.
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  • From CoCoM on August 03, 2008
    Finally Hermione!
    Very interesting developments with the thirty years worth of Squibs names, etc. This is a very clever plot line.
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