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Reviews for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From CoCoM on August 03, 2008
    Okay, I have to admit that I was ready to slap Hermione's face in this chapter. Her insistence that she wouldn't try anything different or what she perceived as "perverted" was irritating the hell out of me! I was cheering when Lucius laid into her about just taking him for granted as such and only wanting her pleasure from missionary style couplings and made the comparison with her only having one book to choose from. She desperately needs to loosen up and enjoy her gorgeous sex god husband already!
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  • From CoCoM on August 03, 2008
    Things are getting more and more interesting with the Veil...I am anxious to see where this is all going. Oh and of course to see which painting Lucius chooses! Hehe
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  • From CoCoM on August 03, 2008
    Yah for kinky picture sex! I was also cracking up at all of Hermione's names for Lucius's "dingle-dangle"!
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  • From CoCoM on August 02, 2008
    LMAO! No dry knickers indeed! I must admit while this was very steamy and fairly sweeet, I am hoping to see some of Lucius's kinkiness rear it's head.
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  • From CoCoM on August 02, 2008
    What I wouldn't give to be in a bathtub with an aroused, naked and very wet Lucius Malfoy! *fans self* Love the image of his gorgeous hair being washed....again, what I wouldn't give....
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  • From CoCoM on August 02, 2008
    Well, as long as it will be SOON I suppose we can forgive you.....*sigh*
    Loved Hermione's retort to Lucius's slightly condescending remark about her having wine. Sassy Hermione is my favourite!
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  • From CoCoM on August 02, 2008
    Lucius + Hessians = Orgasm! LOL! Seriously though, Regency era clothing for males was (and is) so attractive.
    Also, the pictue of Jason Isaacs was Gorgeous! Thanks for posting the link.
    Loved that they have gotten married and then hopefully Hermione will let Lucius have his way with her. *giggle* The rings sound lovely and so clever that Lucius incorporated snakes into their design.
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  • From angelprince on August 02, 2008
    Wizard of Auds!!! Too funny.

    I like that Hermione never took the shoes off. Nice touch! I always wanted 'Dorothy Shoes', but never got them. I tried out for the part of Dorothy in our school play (I think I was about 8 yrs old). I got cast as a Munchkin instead. But before you laugh, I will proudly state that I was the only Munchkin with a speaking role. "We welcome you to Munchkin Land."

    Anyways, I'm loving this rather possesive side of Lucius. I don't think Hermione should clear up their little misunderstanding. He's much hotter this way. So were the lemons!!!

    As for what went on between Lucius and myself at the ball.... well, a lady never talks ;) ;)
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  • From CoCoM on August 02, 2008
    LMAO! Hermione freaking out because it is daytime and they can't possibly have sex because it isn't dark was too much. And Lucius saying how much she needs him....hello! That has been glaringly obvious since the beginning. I am hoping that she follows through with her promise though.
    BTW, the link for the picture was 100% drool-worthy. I believe I felt a bit faint actually after my initial ragged intake of breath, followed by lack of oxygen as I couldn't get my brain to kick into gear...Absolutely gorgeous!
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  • From TheLadyMiya on August 01, 2008
    Oh, that was some lovley smut! But I'm too tried to enjoy it so I'll just re-read it another time :P I wonder when Lucius will have the courage to tell Hermione that he loves her... hm... have Hermione told him already? I can't seem to remember... I don't think she has... ah, well. It's just so obviuse that they love each other! It's so cute :) And the way Lucius misunderstood the song Hermione was singing was just funny :P Hehe...
    great chapter!

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  • From CoCoM on August 01, 2008
    Love this turn of events! How did anyone know that they were arriving? I am so curious to find out. Either way it is good that they will not have to scrounge around for things anymore. I am also eagerly awaiting their step in the next direction of their physical relationship. The UST is starting to get to me! LOL
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 01, 2008
    Woha... I wait vor the update! Really. I love your Lucius/Hermione fics. They rock! But I am wondering how the threats against the Squibs can continue when the uncle is dead? Unless he wasn't he only one behind it...

    May be the money that was transfered from his accounts was used to decourage possible future spouses for the Squibs? Anyways, I don't think that standing orders exist in the wizarding world? Plus, Lucius and Hermione would have relised that there were transfers from their account?

    Questions over Questions... *think hard* Update Pleeeease!

    Sabine
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  • From CoCoM on July 31, 2008
    So pleased to see that Hermione is finally starting to relent. It is a bit silly to think that she went 10 whole years with no dating or intimacy due to having her heart broken by two twats. But now Lucius is here to save the day and make crazy, kinky, sexy love to her! LOL! I am loving the image of him in Regency garb. Since I was about 12 years old I have been obsessed with this time period and am excited to see the marriage of two of my passions in this fic.
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  • From Citten on July 31, 2008
    BEAUTIFUL!!! I loved it! Poor lucius is he truly that insecure about his feelings to not be able to admit that he wanted and loved until that moment? Well I guess it just hit him. Well that was a powerful and wonderful chapter and GREAT lemons! I really look forward to the next chapter, I also would love to see lucius
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  • From Tenar10r on July 31, 2008
    Lemons so lemony we won't un-pucker for days!
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