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Reviews for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From CoCoM on July 30, 2008
    This is a really interesting beginning. Original plot, for sure. I am anxious to se if anyone else has survived.
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  • From sheherazade on July 30, 2008
    Those ruby slippers never got Dorothy in this kind of trouble! Loved the 'Wizard of Auds' and Hermione's whole misjudgement of the situation. Poor confused Malfoy - I suppose in her way Hermione did run into some lions and tigers and bears (oh my!).

    His reaction was breathtakingly hot - that bit where he's laying down the law while also, erm, laying down is a scorcher! I had to re-read that bit several times before I could move on!

    Veeery nice.
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  • From Pumkin on July 30, 2008
    cheering and applauding you. great work. i so love to read how you keep things twisting and changing all the time. update soon please.
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  • From ANON - Scary B on July 30, 2008
    Aw The Red Shoes. That story really bothered me when I was a wee one, the moral somewhat lost in the horror of it all. I loved your chapter though!

    So Lucius thinks the Wizard of Oz is moving in on his little lambchop. Lol
    That is too funny! Will Hermione ever enlighten him I wonder? It doesn
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  • From ANON - Dragonnurse on July 30, 2008
    Hello, I have never reviewed before because I thought you had to be a member here to review obviously I was wrong. I love that Hermione is coming out of her shell more and teasing Lucius will she explain about the wizard of Oz? Please update soon, I keep a very close eye on this story and cant wait to see what happens next.
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  • From Terrie on July 30, 2008
    You shameless tease! It's about time we got an unleashed Lucius. Great story! Very unique idea with the Veil. The mystery is killing me and has been the only thing keeping me distracted from wanting lemons. I like your characterization of Lucius and the oh so civilized aristocrat but also scheming, untrusting and unwilling to be vulnerable emotionally.
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  • From AndreaLorraine on July 29, 2008
    *chortle* Poor Lucius! I hope Hermione does tell him that 'Wizard of Oz' is a song from a Muggle movie; for all the fronts he puts on, he is insecure! However, this was a most delectable consequence to a miscommunication. I wish all my miscommunications ended like that. *wistful sigh*

    Something tells me it won't be the last miscommunication they have, though...and I'm wondering, if there is a falling out, where can Hermione go? This isn't a world that's all that safe or amenable to single women.

    And if/when they return to their own time, Hermione simply MUST make Lucius watch The Wizard of Oz. I can just imagine his reaction.

    Great work as always!

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  • From ANON - pittwitch on July 29, 2008
    Snorting, guffawing, trying desperately to catch my breath ... Wizard of Auds ... poor Lucius. Lucky Hermione, lucky readers! Wooo Hooo!

    Ding dong the witch is dead (asleep) after that lemon aid!
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  • From ANON - doodle on July 29, 2008
    The ball was spot on. I think a weakness for red shoes is universal. The description of Hermione's work attire was great. Practical to a fault.
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  • From on July 29, 2008
    My goodness that was intense. Another song comes to mind. What a man... :)

    Wizard of Oz. Hee! Channelling Judy. Brilliant. Just brilliant. Thanks for the update.
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  • From amyfeddy on July 29, 2008
    I will have you know that I have to buy yet another new chair. One that accomadates the welts from Lucius and the lemons you were gracious enough to give. The wizard of Auds, that was cute. And I am loving Hermione "I wanna be fucked" that was great, and her accidentaly taunting him prancing about in the nude. Write on, can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Coraline on July 29, 2008
    Gods yes I will de-lurke!! I am just absolutely head over heels in love with your story, well to be honest with all of them!!
    I love how you write Lucius and Hermione, I must say that you made me an LM/HG shipper from the moment I started reading your stories and I THANK YOU FOR IT!!! I always pop by to see if you have updated anything yet, and I can't stop myself (no matter what the time is) reading the newest chapter ^^

    Keep up the fantastic and amazing work!!! Yes I liked no scratch that I LOVED the lemons, eventhough I didn't ask for them XD
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  • From Clare1984 on July 29, 2008
    All hail the lemony goodness! there was no messing there - straight down to business. I had a good giggle at the wizard of oz. poor, innocent Hermione - don't poke the possessive monster or it will poke you - repeatedly!

    If there was actually any doubt, Lucius is the master. I love when he is soft and sensual but, damn, nothing can beat that all possessing, dominant, forceful lover.

    He's falling for her - yay! I know he's not going to just admit it out loud but the fact that his feelings are blossoming can only be good and makes for a better relationship between them as they continue on their adventure.

    Now that their passion is sated (for 10 minutes anyway), roll on next chapter.

    Now, how nice would I have to be to these guards to get to Lucius? Would they accept cookies and a nice sponge cake?
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  • From soldiersgirl0709 on July 29, 2008
    Was she slightly tipsy when she got home? Dancing naked in ruby slippers is hilarious! And jealous Lucius is an even sexier Lucius, if that is actually humanly possible. Then again, he's a wizard, so humanity would be in question their wouldnt it?

    Oh well, lovely lemons, dearling!


    Happy Writing!
    SG
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  • From Visitkarte on July 29, 2008
    I didn't yell for lemons, but I'll gladly review this chapter. I loved it! And I hope he will not take it too hard, the thing with "The Wizard of Oz". I loved it. Hermione did the right thing to tell him how she loved it... That should count something. The mental image with Hermione with white socks and red shoes, Mmmhh
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