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Reviews for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From chickaboo on July 17, 2008
    Lucius is too cute. He was as excited as a kid at Christmas. I loved this update, somehow though I missed the last one as well. Both were wonderful and I can't wait for more!!
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  • From ANON - AngelMary on July 16, 2008
    Lucius tied up! Ah, the sight is unforgetable in my mind. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - AngelMary on July 16, 2008
    I don't know what to say other than that I am truly enjoying this story. Keep up the good work!
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on July 16, 2008
    This chapter was beyond hot, LaBib! Holy Severus! I love the way Lucius accepted Hermione for what she was, scars and all. God, Lord Voldemort really was a bastard wasn
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  • From ANON - AngelMary on July 16, 2008
    I am truly enjoying the story thus far. Keep up the good work!
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  • From Scarybearhair on July 16, 2008
    Aw LaBib, I
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  • From ANON - AngelMary on July 16, 2008
    I like this story a lot so far. I think your idea of pre-writing the story before posting it is great!
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  • From soldiersgirl0709 on July 16, 2008
    Why do I find the idea of Lucius standing in a bedchamber explaining "Doggy Style" to Hermione so funny? I mean I know shes innocent to a degree but for some reason the discussion seems hilarious to me. Though I will admit I have a fondness for unusual conversations, the more odd they are the more I enjoy them....just had a conversation involving the term "pork sword" with a friend....


    "You nasty man" I like that, LOL.



    So she let him spank her! About time the tight arsed little witch loosened up! question is how well will Hermione take to it when Lucius wishes to be the one on the recieving end of the swats? Will she take to it as well as she did when she was the recipient? It was sweet of him to offer her the ointment before "saddling" up....ah, love in bloom.....
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  • From Utopia on July 16, 2008
    This isn't an actual review, and I don't know of any other method of contacting you as I have absolutely no idea how live journal works!

    Basically, Snape_Goddess and I (in a Trans-Atlantic colaboration), are writing a joint LM/HG story; during which we have a French maid fantasy scene, complete with spanking. This scene is between Snape and an OFC - but it still looks like plagiarism to us after reading chapter 30 of Beyond the Veil.

    We'd like your opinion on this, and (in essence) a thumbs up or thumbs down from you on the chapter going ahead.

    Drop me an email about it, if you wouldn't mind! utopia_beta@hotmail.co.uk

    Oh, and feel free to delete this 'review' as it isn't one. Thanks for reading this.
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  • From on July 15, 2008
    I loved Lucius' easy acceptance of Hermione's scare. Kind of romantic. Thank you for the update.

    I don't really have a favourite mystery writer. I mostly just appreciate plot driven intelligent fan fiction :) Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Rini on July 15, 2008
    Oh yes
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  • From Clare1984 on July 15, 2008
    holy moly! I will probably waffle on now but nothing I say could do that justice! That was some mighty fine lemons! I mean, from beginning to end just really fantastic.

    Poor Hermione with her scar. It must have been hard to show Lucius, especially with Roger being an ass, but she obviously knows she can put her trust in Lucius and then when he kissed his way along her scar... don't you just love him.

    It's lucky for Hermione that her husband is a loving, handsome, intelligent, elegant, naughty, utterly lickable... sorry what was I saying?

    I love when you write about them in the bath together I just think it's so intimate, especially with Hermione drying Lucius off.

    God, Hermione's accent wasn't the greatest but that really didn't matter once she was spread over Lucius' lap.

    Another good chapter so roll on next one! A lovely lemony interlude in your brilliant story.
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  • From Visitkarte on July 15, 2008
    Well, where should I start
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  • From Citten on July 15, 2008
    YEAH she did it!!! well that went well. but i liked the french part. :) what is next for our lovers? i cant wait to see what you have in store for us next! do post soon my dear. :)
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  • From ANON - morganabythesea on July 14, 2008
    I have not even read the first word of this story, but just your introduction gets five stars from me. Thank you for caring about your readers and posting a story that will be completed. I am sure I will love the story because if you emphathize that much with your readers to post that intro, you will care enough to write a wonderful story.

    Thanks,

    Morgana
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