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Reviews for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From ANON - Jesse on July 14, 2008
    BRAVO!!! What an amazing lemon!!! Standing ovation for you today!!! Great job on that!!!
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  • From FireQueen on July 14, 2008
    uhm
    I'm no smoker but I think I could use a sigaret right about now pfft

    I love your story, sorry I have never gave it a review before but I'm a little unsure about my english, because it's not my first language.

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  • From sheherazade on July 14, 2008
    Whoaaaaaa, whoa...*recovers from slack-jawed drooling*

    LOVE...IT! So much fun and hotness. You know, I'm quite taken with that whole French maid scenario *takes notes*.

    Gorgeous. Will read all over again now...
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  • From mlui on July 14, 2008
    Ah, her French accent is just terrible. I think she should have not reverted back and forth between French; I mean, she only said, 's'il vous plait' and 'merci' in French and that is very basic... But, I liked how she wanted to be an English tart next time. LOL. Great chapter!
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  • From Malfoysplaymate on July 14, 2008
    YAY! I got my lemonade and let me tell you it was GOOD! lol. Awesome part! Can't wait for more!
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  • From Heidi191976 on July 14, 2008
    An excellent chapter. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From angelprince on July 14, 2008
    'He had never once thought being considerate of others would include spanking harlots.'

    LMAO. That has got to be one of the best lines of any fic I've ever read. It sums up Lucius's considerate nature perfectly.

    Hermione and her role-playing was funny. I actually read that part with a Fleur-ish accent in my head. See, she didn't know what she was missing out on. I bet she's a closet masochist and her next pick of the paintings will shock the pantaloons off dear Lucius.

    More lemonade? Why I'd love some, thanks
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  • From Utopia on July 14, 2008
    I was rather tempted to giving my lecturer my take on HP genetics... and talked myself out of it.

    Oooh, can I add one to the lemon, going Monty Python? A twist of lemming!

    Awwww! Yeah, why hasn't she had it removed? Or is this Dolohov's work? Ah, maybe not.

    He he! Big bad death eater is ticklish! lol!

    I think Hermione's getting into it now... boobs on show but really bothered that he's getting a little glimpse of 'down there'. She'll be keeping her ankles covered next!

    What's up with darling? I get called darling!

    That's a very big jump for Hermione! Lucius is like a child in a sweet shop with it - and I think he's forgotten that she's new to all this and hasn't done it before. She's trying to be more fair to him, even though she's scared. He'd better realise what she's doing for him!

    Oi! Madam! Your muse is talking to mine! lol I've got something rather similar written ready for another LM/HG fic, but its Snape doing the spanking of the French maid.

    Is Hermione channeling 'phlegm' (ie. Fleur). lol. Though, her French probably isn't that bad, I think in the books it said she frequently went skiing in the French alps with her parents.

    He he! This is fun! She's no submissive! Lucius has his work cut out for him with her! She's not going to roll over and play dead for him! he he! Gotta love her backbiting and bitching! Spanking doesn't work for us, we're always slapping each other's bottoms (not too hard) at home! Takes all the fun out of it.

    Erm... how does Lucius know about French maids? Does France not have house elves? Surely a human maid is a completely foreign concept to the wizarding world?

    Awww... poor Lucius was beaten in business by his ladies. Lol! I can see a picket line with them holding signs saying 'spankings for all' and 'equality in work'. He he! I don't think the woman who let it slip to Hermione could have lied if she tried!

    Why did I expect her, on him asking if she accepted him as master, to say 'no'?

    I think EVERY straight bloke has a stocking fetish. They get one glimse of the shadow of a garter belt and suspenders through your frock and they go rabid! Lucius is no exception.

    Awww... and a happily ever after for the chapter.


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  • From Phreakdom on July 14, 2008
    Oh Lucius, so eager to introduce his wife to the joys of kinky sex. I couldn
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  • From blueartemis on July 14, 2008
    I'm not sure why he's the most interesting man in the world, but my husband likes those commercials. OK, very hot. I loved that scene. And yes, a spanked ass certainly adds some intensity to sex. Yum. I vote for lemons in every chapter. And leave it to Hermione to keep a scar like that. And I really was pleased that Lucius didn't think it was an issue, it certainly helped.
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  • From ANON - jw on July 14, 2008
    ch 30 - Hermione's "All the paintings I turned down before are back in play" - OMG! wild woman!! and very bold, to undress Lucius like that and initiate the spanking. I love the way you bring them closer together in small steps, such as her showing him the scar - and then having him show his complete acceptance of it. but for him to fall asleep in the bathtub?? LUCIUS!! oh well, perhaps he needed to rest up for the "painting." (heh!) thanks for the fun chapter, and for letting their marriage start to come together.
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  • From tambrathegreat on July 13, 2008

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  • From sheherazade on July 12, 2008
    Masquerading as a Pureblood (especially a 19th century one) must be quite daunting! From what I know of Hermione, she isn't much of an actress, so I hope she can keep the illusion going!

    Sounds like they need to somehow get involved in the unhappy situation between the young man and the Squib - in order to influence generations down the line. Now I'm wondering if they'll somehow avoid Voldemort being born, or at least have him born in an atmosphere of tolerance of Muggle parentage, and Squibs, so his impact would be substantially lessened.

    Clever, clever ideas - I love the way you play with wizarding culture.

    I also love your lemons - so delaying the next bit of plotting for one is not really cause for complaint in my book.
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  • From ANON - maddie50 on July 11, 2008
    OMG, how wonderful and sweet and manipulative! I love it. What a great way to corner and trap Hermione and yet give her what she really wants and what he really wants. That chapter was inspired.
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  • From ANON - maddie50 on July 11, 2008
    Oh the ordeal just to find new clothes to wear. Three hours must have seemed like an eternity to Hermione. Scandalous to want colored underthings, is it? Ooo she will be the talk of the town, or all the ladies will want to copy her and also has colored underthings. Her fumbling description of her 21st century bra and knickers was amusing. At the manor, I really felt for Hermione when Lucius asked about dinner and she had no clue of what was expected of her. Lucius certainly has been patient with her. The episode on the sofa suggests Hermione is not ready to follow through with her promise, yet anyway. How frustrating.
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