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Reviews for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From ANON - jw on July 10, 2008
    ch 29 - aha, the red-circled names and number of LOAN entries match - so was Uncle Malfoy secretly a source of help to displaced Squibs? I cannot guess that LOAN stands for and will add that to the long list of mysteries to be revealed. :=) I'm so glad the newlyweds are getting along, enough to have a 'painting' in the next chapter. squeee!! thank you for updating, and glad you had a good visit on the 4th.
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  • From angelprince on July 09, 2008
    You evil cliffie master! Need more lemons, please. A little missionary is fine but (insert yawn here) variety is the spice of life. I bet Hermione turns into a real little nympho by the time Lucius is done with her sex education.

    Does Lucius know more about their predicament than he's letting on? It seems he never tells Hermione the full story until she confronts him. Sneaky Slytherin!
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  • From blueartemis on July 09, 2008
    People only like missionary sex? Hee. OK, well, that gives some clues there, and the Squibs are starting to be ostracized, but how are they going to turn that around? I'm sure you will give us a wonderful explanation. Boy, if I had to do all that stuff Hermione is doing with stuffy rich housewives, I'd probably start murdering them, or become a cat burglar and steal their jewelry.
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  • From Scarybearhair on July 09, 2008
    Woohoo! This was another lovely chapter LaBib!

    So Hermione is bored to death hanging out with all those snobby purebloods. Can
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  • From amyfeddy on July 09, 2008
    I can't wait to find out what painting he picks out. I loved everything they confessed to each other. It's about time, especially for Hermione. She usually so outgoing with her thoughts, but all of the shit going through her head and not coming out of her mouth was getting old. I love this story, I check this site many times a day just to see if you have updated, it frequently makes me laugh out loud, especially Lucius. The way you write his dry wit is just great. I will patiently wiat for more, apparently I got a little too close to veil as well, because wow that is the most I ever written about any story ever. What can I say that is the effect your writing has on me. Am I next in the spanking line? I'll be good (or bad) which ever Lucuis prefers.
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  • From Citten on July 09, 2008
    let the fun begin!!! i will be waiting for the next chapter happily! :) glad to hear you had a great Fourth of July holiday with family! they always have the best memories and can have the best time! hope to have more soon! ;)
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  • From Citten on July 09, 2008
    let the fun begin! i will be waiting! :) glad to hear you had a great four of july holiday with family! family is always wonderful times and memories! hope to read more soon! :)
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  • From on July 09, 2008
    Oooh I'm stoked to read what comes next in the mystery plot. I won't make guesses, I'd rather watch it all play out. Thanks for the update!
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  • From tambrathegreat on July 08, 2008
    Oh, good chapter. I am intrigued abou the Squibs. It seems that the last Malfoy scion was very interested in bloodlines. Or, is that the Veil working again? I feel for Hermione with the prodigiously boring teas and the invitations to the ball. She's so intelligent and vibrant, she must feel stifled and quite bored. I wonder how Lucius could help alleviate that boredom? Hmm... it sounds like he has idea, at least in the next chapter.

    I do like your characterization of him. He's autocratic and overbearing, but really struggling with trying to be better, at least with Hermione. I'm not so sure about with other people, yet. He does have a way of justifying everything. The Hermione as a pureblood is a perfect example. Yes, he's correct that it will make her life easier, but if they have to complete their lives in the past, no one will know she's a Muggleborn, and therefore he won't have changed his family history. It seems like he missed that mark with that, and I hope it doesn't come back to bite them on their butts... Although, biting Lucius' butt wouldn't be such a bad thing, if you think about it.

    I love how Lucius is going about protecting his family's holdings. I do wonder if things would be different if the wizarding world weren't so segregated. It does seem to engender a little bit of snobbery and inbreeding.

    BTW I should have my chapter posted on Miss Patil tonight. Thanks for the great read I really enjoyed the chapter.
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  • From Clare1984 on July 08, 2008
    now, I do love your story cos it is so good and I can't wait to see what happens next. I don't really have any theories cos I'm just enjoying the story but all the little clues that you drop in just add to the intrigue. It really is awesome.

    But damnit I want some of those lemons! Missionary sex is all well and good but not for our favourite couple. They are both too damn fiery to settle for that. So bring on the lemons... and make it juicy! Ok, I may have got carried away slightly but I can't help it - it's all gorgeous Lucius' fault. Roll on next chapter and I won't be skipping any of it!
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  • From TheLadyMiya on July 08, 2008
    Hehe, I don't envu Hermione a bit. Sitting there, having to listen to all those Purebloods gossping... oh, my... I do feel sorry for her. I'm glad she got something out of it... Hm.. I wonder what those LOANS are... perhaps the old Malfoy was helping the Squibs... or perhaps he "took care" of them... I don't know what I shall think. I still think Squibs are important (since they keep comming up in your story, I guess there are important in some way...). Hehe, if it aren't a Squib, then perhaps it is a house-elf who is the Master. He or she wants avange for what the wizards had done. I could totally see that happen. I mean, Dobby could probably have done something nasty if he got enough. Thankfully, Harry was there to save him but... perhaps there is another house-elf who wasn't so lucky. Haha.... well... I don't think it is a house-elf, but anyway.
    Hm... I start to think about the old Malfoys sons again... what if one of them was a Squib... how would the old Malfoy (I don't remember if you have given him a name or not) have reacted? I can see two ways, either he helped his son run away or something, faking his death, or he killed his son because he couldn't stand the shame... Because one of the sons is believed to have died? Right? I'm quite tried so perhaps I'm mixing this up with another story...
    HAHA, oh, I don't mind having some smut for the next couple of chapters ^^ Mystries is all well and good, but what would life be like without a little sex? So bring on the smut!
    Great chapter! take care!
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  • From Heidi191976 on July 08, 2008
    This was a great chapter. I look forward to reading more soon.
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  • From ANON - Rini on July 08, 2008
    Hi LaBib

    My internet has been down for the past week
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  • From mlui on July 08, 2008
    Ch. 29 - Lovely chapter as always! It's an interesting connection if all of them are Squibs.
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  • From Malfoysplaymate on July 08, 2008
    I can not believe you did this to me. I personally feel lemons should be in EVERY chapter but thats just me. Great update!
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