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Reviews for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From onduril on July 02, 2008
    So, your German ain'tthat bad. At least the words were right and the word order was also ok.

    This chapter was really interesting. I mean I thought about some of the questions you have answered now.
    But I still am asking myself about the real heir, of if the Veil really made Lucius the heir of the Malfoy fortune. I mean, you wrote that Lucius remembers a break in his family during the time he and Hermione are now.
    And I hope that you have a good solution for that.
    Can't wait for the next chapter.

    Have a nice day/week and enjoy life.^^
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  • From stormflora on July 02, 2008
    Another awesome chapter! Just out of curiosity, how many chapters will there be? Or if you want to be a little more vague...are we about half-way? Past half-way?
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  • From sheherazade on July 02, 2008
    That was a totally unexpected chapter! I love the image of a frustrated Lucius rolling up at his bordello to take his tensions out on an obliging woman or two. Can they really all enjoy it? I wonder if any of these women might be the 'weak' that they are meant to embrace??

    Well, Hermione's in for a spot of education now *can't wait* Heh, heh.
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  • From sheherazade on July 02, 2008
    Oh wow, what a chapter! First of all, the sex scene was utterly, mercilessly exquisite; I was crouched over the screen, salivating away, when Hermione says, "That was an excellent shag". Lolololol, sooooo funny. I like the idea of her being afraid to get too lost in the emotional side of the physical bond - I can imagine she would be just like that. Lucius will bring her round, I'm sure.

    And then the Prophecy. How very interesting! What is this weakness that they must embrace? Will they maybe find an ancestor of Tom Riddle's hanging around the Regency precincts?

    Well, I'm on to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - jami on July 02, 2008
    I love this story. I cannot wait for the next chapter! Please update again soon!!! ~Jami
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  • From angelprince on July 01, 2008
    How can Lucius think his behaviour is justified? He claims that he only spanks his employees but he draws the line at anything sexual and then he tells Hermione that spanking is one part of the sexual relationship he'd like to explore with her. The man is a dog! Aint he great :D

    You can put away the noose. I enjoyed Lucius and his reasoning in this chapter very much.
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  • From Damiana on June 30, 2008
    Chapter 27

    Is something missing in this sentence?---"It was a popular idea and the women had been very pleased it and with their new master."

    "I
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  • From Citten on June 30, 2008
    so just add some gram-crackers and some chocolate, lots of chocolate in the next chapter and we will be one roasting smore and forgiven. but you better be making it good! :) so two out there questions the malfoy family is schooled in french--personally i love it! :) second does hermione speek french? (okay image the eyebrows wiggling) so on with the show! right? :)
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  • From on June 30, 2008
    I'm intrigued by the LOAN plot. I look forward to more :) Very interesting chapter. Thanks!
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  • From Scarybearhair on June 29, 2008
    Aw LaBib, it
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on June 29, 2008
    CH 27 -

    Wow, so Lucius has been patting the derri
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  • From ANON - Jesse on June 29, 2008
    As always you have written a great chapter!! I love how you are adding a very intriguing plot.. and everything seems well thought out.
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  • From mlui on June 29, 2008
    Ch 27 - I can understand how Hermione is appalled. I would be appalled somewhat, but not to her extent. If he'd just talked to her before about how he was feeling...but then again, Hermione might not be so receptive then. Great chapter, please update again soon!
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  • From blueartemis on June 28, 2008
    I really liked that. They truly needed to talk. God, I'd be ready to kill myself if boring perfunctory sex was all I got. And it would make me feel like some receptacle instead of a partner, so I totally understand Lucius. Hermione is in for a big surprise, I'm sure, when she realizes how much she can enjoy some non-vanilla sex.
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  • From TheLadyMiya on June 28, 2008
    I think this chapter cleared out a lot emotions! I'm Hermione told Lucius why she is so... innocent... and... well... why she holds back. That Margarate-girl was funny :P Poor woman, don't even have two braincells that can play :P Oh, I hope there will be some spanking in the next chapter! But I wonder if Lucius knows who the master is... hmhm.. it will be interesting to find out. If Lucius hadn't said that Abraxas had died, I would think the Master was him. Then you could do this Star Wars-thingy out of it! Hehe, or maybe not :P
    Ah, lovely chapter! Now I'm sleepy (it's almost midnight in this part of the world)
    byebye
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