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Reviews for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From ANON - Rini on June 14, 2008
    Wow! Jason Isaacs 6-6-63, I have two friends who are born on the same date different year. Weird
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  • From chickaboo on June 14, 2008
    Doohinky? Dingle-dangle? Okay, it official. I have got to stop drinking anything when I read this story. I'm not kidding. Scalding hot tea almost through the nose is not a laughing matter....unless it's happening to someone else, then I'm all for it. lol Great update, I can't wait for more!
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  • From Phreakdom on June 14, 2008
    Some men do have a habit of disregarding personal space, though I admit I've never seen Lucius as the type. Hermione's musings on Lucius' assets were great, I don't think I'd be able to pass up a chance to ogle all that gorgeous flesh first thing in the morning in all its naked glory either. Lovely chapter, I can't wait to see what types of sexual shenanigans those two will get up to next.
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  • From amyfeddy on June 14, 2008
    Ohhhh I so want to know what the picture was doing. I can't wait for hermione to get braver, there's nothing hotter than unplanned daytime sex, especially if there is someone in the other room who might hear. I don't know where that came from. Update soon, oh and Malfoy Industries was kind enough to replace the chair with one that turn into lucius if I need it to, I haven't sat in it yet. ;}
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  • From tambrathegreat on June 13, 2008
    Well, I wouldn't condemn him as being self-serving. I mean, Lucius is going to include Hermione in these acts, isn't he? I'd say he's giving greater service than expected, if only there were more of him to around for us fangirls. Yummy Lucius and his nearly sentient, one-eyed monster. Great images, and the humor was just right for the mood of the chapter.
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  • From blueartemis on June 13, 2008
    I'm guessing Lucius forgot that Hermione has a rather prodigious mind? The imagination is one of the sexiest things there is, and if she is willing to stretch hers, he shouldn't be surprised. Anyway, I love that he was pleasantly surprised. I'm looking forward to them trying out those paintings.
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  • From ANON - Jesse on June 13, 2008
    I have to say I am disappointed in that chapter. It seemed to be a 'filler' rather than an actual chapter. I was looking forward to something to happen.. anything! However, I will be anxiously awaiting the next chapter.. so as disappointed as I was in the chapter, your writing is amazing and I love the story.
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  • From ANON - mandi on June 13, 2008
    I love this story. I check back with AFF nearly every day looking for updates. Great work.
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  • From TheLadyMiya on June 12, 2008
    What a lovely story. I have to say that you are one of the few authors who can write a good Hermione/Lucius. I'm more of a Hermione/Tom/Voldemort of Hermione/Severus fan, but I think your way to write about Lucius and Hermione are very... unique and interesting. And this plot is very puzzling and thrilling. Time travelling is always a very interesting subject and I think you explain everything just fine :) The fact that you also spend time adding old english words are just... well it makes the story more alive and funny.
    I guess a lot of people have said this to you, but it was about time Hermione and Lucius had sex! I have been reading this story on my free time the last few days and I thought it would happen a lot sooner! Ah, well, there is nothing like a litte UST.
    Have a nice evening!
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  • From Belas on June 11, 2008
    Wonderful story! I like the premise of the Veil possibly being either a massive time-turner or doorway to parallel dimension. I also enjoy the way you write Lucius... In fact, I can honestly say that it was original having HIM be the one to pass-out at the end (ref. Ch.23), instead of having Hermione doing so - very refreshing. Hahaha! I look forward to reading more when your life, time, and muse permit an update.

    Thank you so much for sharing this!

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  • From Utopia on June 10, 2008
    *dribble*

    Too good for words, I can't say anything that would actually do 23 justice.
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  • From ANON - jw on June 09, 2008
    ch 23 - ahh.... I see you had a lovely bday playing with Lucius, commanding him: "Up, periscope!" (snert!) the scene was absolutely perfect, except for his horrible sense of timing. NOT a good time to ask about contraception!!! I was afraid that the chapter would end right there with another fight, so I was relieved that they went on. phew! thank you, and may you enjoy many more bday celebrations and years with your own Lucius!
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  • From ANON - jw on June 09, 2008
    chapter 22 - squeee!! my bday is 6-3 too, so you just gave me a bday gift. (ahem... the gift of living vicariously thru Hermione....)
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  • From sheherazade on June 09, 2008
    Mmmm, lemonicious. Ha ha at 'berried' treasure.

    It's good that they had the conversation about children, though I'm not sure about the timing of it.

    I liked the smooth moves from bath to hearth rug to bed; Lucius hasn't lost any of his bedroom artistry during those 12 years in Azkaban.

    Well, it was worth the wait! I know I'm going to love hearing about their adventures both in and out of the marital bed now.
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  • From ANON - Rini on June 09, 2008
    Oooh! Chocolate, lemonade and a wink
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