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Reviews for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From Scarybearhair on June 09, 2008
    Squee! The chapter we
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  • From ANON - pam on June 08, 2008
    Hi LaBib,

    Just wanted to drop by and say that I love your stories. In one of the reviews, i read you were celebrating your birthday in the Cheesecake Factory in San Fran? I just wanted to let you know that I'm in the area as well. I live across the bay but I work and went to school in SF.
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  • From blueartemis on June 08, 2008
    OK, that was really hot. I enjoyed it, not only because of the sex, but because of the growing affection and respect (yes respect) they have for each other. I can see it, and it really was worth the weight.
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  • From angelprince on June 08, 2008
    (Shakes snoring man beside her)

    "Are you awake?"

    "I am now!"

    "Excellent." Sounding a little like Monty Burns.

    "Umph, what are you doing? I'm sleeping!"

    "Well, just lie there and let me have a go."

    ....................................................

    (Several minutes later)

    "Yes, yes, yes, oh god, Luuucius!"

    "What!!"

    Oops.


    Well worth the wait Labib. I'm hoping Lucius puts his morning erection to good use.
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  • From ANON - pittwitch on June 08, 2008
    Absolutely delicious, piping, steaming hot, on a sterling silver platter. What a late night snack!
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  • From Tenar10r on June 08, 2008
    Thank goodness for extra towels! (No dry-cleaning guarantee indeed!)
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  • From on June 08, 2008
    A lovely wedding night, it played out beautifully. Enjoyable read. Thanks.
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  • From Citten on June 08, 2008
    :) hahahahaha :) i think you just like to keep us on our toes! :) but i know that those 22 chapters worth was worth the last two chapters, maybe even three! :) well the contrceptive question could have come at a better time but hey what can you say. i like what was said and that they explained things to each other so there was no misunderstaning--cause i hate it when that happens and there is no need for that in many cases. well that was wonderful and now i will be waiting for the next chapter happily!!! :)
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  • From Phreakdom on June 07, 2008
    Lovely addition dearie! I must say that if I had a man like Lucius I don't think I'd ever get out of bed or the tub or... well you get the idea. The lemons were fabulous, very well written. I liked that Lucius was considerate enough to consult Hermione about contraception; it just wouldn't do for Lucius to get her sprogged up before telling her his stance on half blood babies. I couldn't help but giggle when Lucius fainted though. Overall, this update was brilliant and I can't wait to see what the deal with the Veil is.
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  • From chickaboo on June 07, 2008
    That was perfect. I loved it! And now that Hermione knows what sex is SUPPOSED to be like, well....let's just say Lucius is probably going to be given a run for his money. Which will most likely work in his favor, she'll be more open to his more....creative.....ideas. And let's face it....the man's an artist. Incredible update, I can't wait for more!
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  • From amyfeddy on June 07, 2008
    What about my computer chair, are you going to pay for the cleaning. That was so worth the wait. I hope there is more in the future and not another 23 chapters, but even if it is I will read and wait. But probably not patiently, we both know how Iam prone to tantrums. Thank you mistress for the sweet release.
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  • From Heidi191976 on June 07, 2008
    Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From Pumkin on June 07, 2008
    finally. great work. it was just how i though it would be. can't wait to seee where you lead them next. update soon please.
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  • From ANON - angeleye68 on June 07, 2008
    Brava! Can you hear the applause? Well done, this was well worth waiting for. I also like the little bit of humor, even at the expense of Lucius' ego, but then again it can take a hit or two-- LOL!

    Everything from the bath to the bed was wonderful..Hmmm, a sated Lucius is well worth waiting for. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From distinctlyME on June 07, 2008
    Jeebus. My knickers are ruined thanks to Lucius' expertise.

    Good Heavens that was sexy. My libido is in over drive right now. I really must go bother my fiance.

    Thanks Lucius. Thanks LaBib. ;)

    hehehe
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