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Reviews for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From tambrathegreat on June 07, 2008
    I get off work, on a Saturday, and I get the bestest present ever... Another chapter and was it steamy!! Lucius is the best at making Hermione realize she is a woman under all that bookish swottiness. And Hermione really can hurt Lucius. Let's hope she won't want to, at least emotionally. A little spanking never hurt him, did it?
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on June 07, 2008
    The long wait for lemons is forgiven as this chapter made the wait worhtwhile. Sensual, tender, at turns humorous, but above all exciting, erotic and explosive. All the things needed for a fantastic night of loving. Thanks for offering up Lucius in the hipbath...i suppose someone else could have a turn now....LOL. Looking forward to more and eventually finding out what happens (if you can get them out of bed for any length of time).

    Lady B
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  • From ANON - Josie on June 07, 2008
    AAAAH YOU TEASE!
    I KNEW IT, I had even prepared a review in my head scolding you for leaving the chapter with a cliffie and only a teaser!!! But, that review got lost in my head because of how great this chapter was, even though you're a huge tease. I saw the whole chapter playing before my eyes, not just bits and pieces, the Whole thing! It was wonderful. Loved everything about it, I won't even go sulking in my corner again, lol.

    But happy birthday LaBib! Hope it was as wonderful as this chapter was.. Well, I hope my birthday will! *sigh*
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  • From ANON - Rini on June 06, 2008

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  • From Scarybearhair on June 06, 2008
    Aw this was a wonderful chapter! I mean there were so many things I loved about it. I loved how Lucius just whipped Hermione up in his arms when she was standing too close to the fire, concerned for her safety. I was laughing too, when he was going to dunk her in the tub. Then he washes her toes and her ankles with the squishy soap. *swoon*
    You also described it so wonderfully when he backed into to her, so she could wash his hair. *sigh* ~.~
    The sights and sound of the bathtub are right there!

    This truly is one of my favorite stories of yours. Everything is so perfect. I can
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  • From stormflora on June 05, 2008
    Hello again! I haven't read any of your reviews, but it kinda sounds like you're under pressure to provide some lemonpie. Now don't get me wrong, lemon's my favourite type of pie, but I don't just read your writing for the smutty goodness (as deliciously written as it may be), I read it for the wonderful verbal interplay between the characters and well, just the excellent standard of writing in general. Also you need all the anticipation and suspense for the lemon to have maximum effect!

    stormflora :)
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  • From ANON - Utopia (just not logged in) on June 05, 2008
    500!

    Can I hae a random posey of pretty flowers?

    Good grief! The bloke caresses his shoes lovingly?

    Can't the man just ask nicely and say please? For all his gentlemanly ways his manners need work! He's like a spoilt brat at times!

    lol: crimson periscope!

    Andy has washed my feet once - and got kicked in the face or it. Tickly feet give really nasty jerking reactions. Lucius is a brave man.

    No, men don't go for brains. I think it wounds their egos when a woman is smarter than them.

    Shampoo does come in solid form! And I swear by it! A company called Lush make bath stuff from all natural products and it's all veggie too! I love their Godiva solid shampoo and it makes my hair lovely! They do a solid conditioner too. I don't know if they have USA shops, but they do have internet sales.

    Every bloke turns into a cat when you wash his hair for him! lol!

    awwww. nice apologies from both, and a nice clean air for loving.
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  • From angelprince on June 05, 2008
    LOL at Lucius and his crimson periscope.

    So that's what bathtime is like when you don't have kids? Nice!

    Chapter 23 is 'The One' you say! Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. Let's hope Hermione doesn't spoil it for us. She's starting to annoy me a bit. I get that she's been hurt in the past but she needs to just stop thinking so much and take her medicine.

    I wonder if Dr Lucius makes house calls....
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  • From sheherazade on June 05, 2008
    I just knew that Lucius would be a hoot in the bath - 'tootsie toil'; classic!

    He's very likeable now, what with all these new-found honest impulses and moral scruples. I'm always somewhat relieved when Lucius (or Snape) confess to not being involved in/enjoying rape. Hermione still can't quite get her head round it - making slightly aggressive comments like the one about the leg-humping dog. Oh, she is SO in for an education of a different kind. Heh.

    Marvellous; my favourite chapter so far, I think.
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  • From Pumkin on June 05, 2008
    it better be happening in the next chapter. please keep up the good work. happy birthday.
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  • From Tenar10r on June 04, 2008
    *GAH!*
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  • From bluezauza on June 04, 2008

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  • From ANON - doodle on June 04, 2008
    Crimsom periscope made my day. As a teacher it drives me nuts when a student asks if they "can" go to the restroom. Yeah for correct grammar!
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  • From AndreaLorraine on June 04, 2008
    Oh, Hermione and her diversionary tactics. And you and your painfully (for the reader) prolonged foreplay! It's a testament to your talent that you've gotten us all to wait 22+ chapters for smut without anyone lynching you (said with much love of course). People get pissy with me if I make them wait TEN chapters...I guess we're just not the PWP type.

    Who among us wouldn't want to be Hermione right now? *sighs as her eyes glaze over*

    Oh...what? Oh yes, review. I love Lucius's seductive behavior in this chapter. I can definitely picture him like a big cat, rubbing all over her in all the right places. If Hermione doesn't loosen up soon, I'm gonna bean her. Good background on her sexual hang-ups...maybe I'll go and bean Roger Davies, instead. Ron is just...Ron and it isn't our fault that as a character he tends to be a little inept. But there was no excuse for Roger's cruelty.

    Have I mentioned that it tickles me that you have 'HUMOR' listed as a warning in the story description?

    Well, I'm waiting for you to set the bar... *grin*
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  • From tambrathegreat on June 04, 2008
    Happy Birthday to youuuuu! Be glad you can't hear me singing. Yummy. Lucius in full prowl. Poor Hermione doesn't seem to know what hit her. Next chapter I think she will get an inkling. Man, Ron and the other dude were just jerks. Lucius has his work cut out for him.

    I did like pouty Lucius when he thought she implied he was easy. What I always say is 'a pouty Lucius is a sexy Lucius.'

    Delish chapter. I can't wait for more.
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