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Reviews for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From Citten on June 04, 2008
    okay!! GREAT! thank you! next PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! like now? :)
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  • From QueenofPutrescense on June 04, 2008
    Isn't it traditional to receive gifts on your birthday? Thanks so much for your generous spirit in giving us another chapter, all I can do is give you a heartfelt thank you note in return and wish that every fanfic writer had as strong a grasp of language and banter as you do... sigh!
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  • From on June 04, 2008
    My goodness what a bath experience that must be. Thanks for the update!
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  • From ANON - Pajama Pants on June 03, 2008
    Happy birthday! I think that bath water will boil if they stay in there to much longer!
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  • From blueartemis on June 03, 2008
    Very hot. I loved that. Playing in a bath or shower with your lover is a lot of fun. Although I don't know how comfortable it would be in a hip bath. I'm guessing that after next chapter, Hermione's idea of sex will have changed.
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  • From ladyravenna on June 03, 2008
    O_O So hot. Lucius is so delicious....lol
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  • From ANON - bennacienna@yahoo.com on June 03, 2008
    OK seriously, it was cute and all that there was a lot of 'plot' buildup, but I think we're all ready for the main event now. Please hurry it up.
    Cool story by the way.
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  • From Terrie on June 03, 2008
    Wow, after that hot bath, I need a cold shower!! Great story line. This idea has really intrigued me and although I'm very much enjoying the development of their relationship, I'm also anxious to see where the plot takes us. Thank you.
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  • From chickaboo on June 03, 2008
    Sweet Goddess you do delight in torturing me don't you? And I must admit that every time Lucius thinks about his "new leaf program" I laugh a bit. But Hermione referring to his erection a "periscope" made me almost snort my tea through my nose. Great update. I can't wait for the next chapter as you say that it is.....The One. lol Hope to read more soon!
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  • From Shiv5468 on June 03, 2008
    Teasing isn't nice
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  • From Jocelyn25 on June 03, 2008
    Happy Birthday and OMG yes its finally THE chapter coming up.

    Once again i have to admit how wonderfully written this story is and it really leaves me in awe.

    Thank you so much for this...fantastic fantastic story.

    Love
    Jocy
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  • From ANON - angeleye68 on June 03, 2008
    Finally, I got a chance to read this story, I have had absolutely no time and I read the first chapter so long ago and was hooked then..Now--after 22 wonderful chapters (read all in one day) I had to send a review out to you. I really like your take on the Veil and the whole time-travel issue. I love your writing and can see so many wonderful pictures in my head with the way you describe each chapter. You really do know how to build up the sexual tension between these two. My god, your Lucius does have some degree of patience with Hermione but I was happy to see your A/N that the next chapter is THE chapter for the two of them. As with all of your Lucius/Hermione stories, your focus with Lucius' wonderful backside is a delight. I have to admit that I am very fond of beautiful bottom and most definately Lucius fits that to a tee. Can't wait for the next chapter and I will have to check back everyday for to see if there are updated. Thanks for another delightful story with this fab couple.
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  • From Phreakdom on June 03, 2008
    Another great chapter! I
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  • From Heidi191976 on June 03, 2008
    This was a great chapter. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - Coraline on June 03, 2008
    Ok I haven
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