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Reviews for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From Clare1984 on June 03, 2008
    holy moly! You have split me in two with this one. On the one hand, I'm thinking damn, I just wish it would happen already - serious lot of tension here! and then on the other, it's just so hot to draw out the anticipation. Lucius is definitely the master - teasing and tempting Hermione right to the edge.

    btw, I would pay a lot, and I mean A LOT, to see Lucius rising out of that tub, dripping wet. mmm, now there's an image!

    anyhoo, roll on the main event!

    PS Happy Birthday!
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  • From amyfeddy on June 03, 2008
    I so want to know waht it feels like when he rubs on the front of her to, (actually I want to know what it feels like on me) I am so excited, which may seem really goofy but the build up has been so slow and steady that when it actually happens it will be so worth the wait. Please excuse my previous tatrums.
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on June 03, 2008
    Bathtime with Lucius....a very enticing and erotic experience....can i have a turn? Another brilliantly written chapter, La Bib!! Now on to those lemons!!!
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  • From ANON - Josie on June 03, 2008
    BAH I WANTED TO READ SOME ACTION *goes to a corner and sulks*
    I won't come out until I see some action between those two!!!

    But yes, I really did enjoy starting my reviewing career. It was a little hard at first, and still is because of my tendency to babble on, there's always so much I want to say after reading each of your chapters but if I said everything on my mind it would be as long as a chapter!

    One thing on my mind though, have you ever considered writing Abraxas? I fell in love with him after reading a story on GrangerEnchanted.. I know he's old (and dead) but there's so much you can write around insanely hot, dead wizards. Hmm.. my brain is overflowing right now! :D
    Update ASAP, pleeaassseee *sugar coated smile and puppy eyes*

    PS: I'm from Iceland, so you've got a major far distance reader and reviewer!! Just sharing that info :)

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  • From Citten on June 01, 2008
    i am not going to kill you yet. you just better make i really good and LONG in the next chapter. besides i know that once you get them going they are like rabbits they just dont stop. (now it will be even more funny if they reproduce like rabbits. :) ) well do post and SOON!!!
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  • From Scarybearhair on June 01, 2008
    This was lovely LaBib, I
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  • From sheherazade on June 01, 2008
    Waaaah! What a place to stop! But you knew that already, of course.

    I love Lucius' disorderly relatives - I wonder if any of the Malfoy malcontents are going to appear to stir up trouble later? And poor thing, with his horrible historical bathroom - not the most enticing prospect.

    But what happens next certainly IS an enticing prospect - they've both wound each other up to a point where they're expecting some kind of extravaganza performance - and I think the readers know exactly how they feel ;).


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  • From angelprince on June 01, 2008
    Just had to look up what a hipbath was. Not very roomy at all. Nice, very nice.

    Lucius is extremely confident for a man who's been in Azkaban for all those years.


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  • From amyfeddy on June 01, 2008
    Nice build up, I think Lucius made a good choice seeing how poorly hermione reacted and she hadn't even drank anything yet. No hexing, i'm no trelawney but I forsee lemons. It's good that you don't give in to whining, especially since you will give us a large reward later, but only if we behave.
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  • From ANON - Jesse on May 31, 2008
    Well, SOON isn't soon enough so considered yourself hexed!! :) No, not quite at that point yet, although I'm close. ;) Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Rini on May 31, 2008
    My exam well
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  • From ANON - jw on May 31, 2008
    ch 20-21 - the wedding rings sound lovely, although I wish Lucius had gotten himself a diamond too. men in those days wore jeweled rings, I believe. the lack of bathroom - heh-heh! yeah, that was a bummer about Regency days, plus infrequent bathing habits and lack of good soap; good to know Lucius will fix that. so you stopped the newlyweds right before - I hope he sees that she's just jittery and will stop falling for her (subconscious?) avoidance tricks. thanks for addressing the question of the 'real' heir showing up - I'm sure you've got that solution already prepared!
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  • From Pumkin on May 31, 2008
    so trying not to hex you right now. the only thing stopping me is that you promised soon. update soon please before i resort to begging. wait i just did oh well i will beg please.
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  • From blueartemis on May 31, 2008
    After all the previous development, I wasn't expecting them to fall into bed, so I was actually quite amused. I love your Hermione, she stands up to Lucius so beautifully.
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  • From on May 31, 2008
    I love the sparring(sp) :)
    Two of my favourite themes...time travel and period pieces. This story is giving me such a thrill, though I don't usually seek out Lucius/Hermione. You're style is holding my attention. I am quite enthralled with your characterisations. Bless!
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