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Reviews for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From sbrande on December 02, 2008
    Oh what a marvellous story! I can see all the thought and research that you put into it, and it makes this story even better. It was rec'd by a friend of mine (as I usually read SS/HG) but I am glad I took the time to read this.

    Thanking you so very much for writing it.

    Love Sonia :)
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  • From ANON - Robyn Hawkes on November 28, 2008
    Thoroughly enjoyed the story and loved how you tied everything up in the epilogue.
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  • From soldiersgirl0709 on November 28, 2008
    Epilogue:


    Ok, somehow I missed that this had been concluded. Not sure how exactly, but I did. It started off full force with a nice, calm center and then a somewhat stormy end for our favorite couple. It was peppered with a fair amount of smut and comedy and a nice dash of mystery to go with it. I love how they ended up with a large family, I always imagine the two of them with a little army of Malfoys, not sure why I assume that not only was Narcissa a frigid bitch but also one who didnt appreciate the joys of having a brood(I speak as a mom of 3 and the joyous chaos that is my life). Excellant work and hopefully we shall see you again soon!


    Happy Writing!
    S_G
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  • From Damiana on November 27, 2008
    Epilogue---

    *weeps* I am sad that it is over but quite satisfied with your ending and your epilogue. So I guess I'm not really sad just already looking back on this story with nostalgia.

    Good job on this one LaBib! I look forward to reading the next one. :D
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  • From angelprince on November 27, 2008
    I can't believe it's done! Gone! Finnished! Over! No More! The end of the road! (sobs)

    Thank you for such a fantastic read, Labib. Loved it, loved it, loved it.

    I think my favourite parts were at the start (the boarding house and the brothel). I also learned alot too. I even used 'Slippery Sex Sap' in a sentence recently. Mum was stunned when I told her I borrowed the term from a Librarian :) Dr. Filch had me giggling in the epilogue and I'm glad Snape was mentioned. I especially liked that he was never short of a bed buddy.

    Thanks again, Labib. Look forward to reading your newbie.

    So, about that 'Smutty Thesaurus'..... LOL.

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  • From kitty08 on November 25, 2008
    well I think this is one of the best stories I ever read. I especially liked that you updated regularly and that the story had a plot with interesting themes. so I loved it and I hope you will write something new soon!!
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  • From lilbitbord on November 25, 2008
    Very hot wedding night, I'm still drooling over it, boy I'm surprised that my computer is still working with all the drool on it :) Well I got through chapter 25 so I am half way there! The story and plot are heating up, lets hope I can read more tomorrow.
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  • From Citten on November 24, 2008
    honey i loved the story!!!! i love that they have a whole hord of children ('sides they can afford it!) :) it makes me happy! :) so i guess i will just have to wait for the next great story. :) i had tons of fun reading this stroy and i may just have to read it again. ;)
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  • From lilbitbord on November 24, 2008
    Got through two more chapter!! That is 20 chapters in one day, that is a new personal record for me. Ooh things are getting interesting, I like that there seems to be a unknown force guiding them through this time up. Very sneaky of Lucius to hurry up and marry her, she was also very sneaky replacing obey with cherish (that's what I did!) Well the rest will have to wait till tomorrow.
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  • From ANON - sinbad on November 23, 2008
    I very much enjoyed your story, an excellent job to be sure. Also, I'm looking forward to your next work. See you next posting.
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  • From AndreaLorraine on November 23, 2008
    Awww. They're so disgustingly, pervily cute. I enjoyed the way you tied up all the loose ends, even giving a nod to Margaret the embroidery-talented brothel employee. Overall, just a really warm and fuzzy way to end things. It's been a journey, but always a worthwhile one! :)

    I watched the first few episodes of season 3 of Brotherhood and am completely hooked. The soft porn is just fine with me, lol. Mm mmm mmm. I will probably be requesting the DVDs for my birthday. :D

    Thanks for a wonderful story and I look forward to your next great tale.
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  • From lilbitbord on November 23, 2008
    Alright as you can see I can't stop reading this story, I am now up to chapter 18 and I must say that I am very much hooked, it is going to be hard not to continue reading this but I must stop to eat dinner and spend some time with my husband *wink wink*. I am wondering what their little trip through time has impacted the future, if they do return what will be different and what will be the same or will nothing change. Well until tomorrow (hopefully).
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  • From lilbitbord on November 23, 2008
    OOH I was able to read five more chapters!! And they were very interesting chapters indeed. I do admit I love how your Lucius enjoys his spankings, still wiping up the drool! I do say he went a little wild on Hermione but she didn't seem to mind when the tables were turned. Interesting that when they entered the Magical World that the shopkeeper knew who they were, it will be interesting to see if the "rightful" Malfoys show up or did some how when they entered this time line did they become those people. I can't wait to read more!
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  • From Scarybearhair on November 23, 2008
    What can I see about this lovely story that hasn
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  • From lilbitbord on November 23, 2008
    Yeah I found a hour to finally sit down and start reading this wonderful story. I've only got through the first 10 chapters so far, but I am so involved that I didn't even notice that the movie I was watching was over and nothing was on the TV Lol. Very interesting story line, of course I want to know what happen to the muggles to make them turn on the magic folk, especially in their own family. Whoever this Master is definitely has a bad gruge against all things magic. I am very curious why the Veil transported them to old London, I am going to assume there is a reason, but I could be wrong. Lucius seems to be adapting well in this time period. Scary moments for Hermione, still shaking because of what happened and almost happened to her. I can't wait to read more, but I can't do it right now because my son is up from his nap, maybe I can squeeze a few more chapters in tonight. :)
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