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Reviews for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From ANON - Utopia on May 25, 2008
    No update today? I need my BtV fix! I'm gona have withdrawel symptoms at this rate! Hope everything's OK, and it isn't anything serious causing the delay! And if it is something serious, don't worry about it, post when its all sorted!
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  • From ANON - Josie on May 25, 2008
    I've noticed you tend to make Lucius more brilliant in advanced magic then you do Hermione (the wandless obliviate) Not that I am complaining, I love anything that makes Lucius more hot, but Hermione should be as advanced too!! In some areas at least.. (I'm talking about magic, not what you're thinking) lol.
    Hint hint for another story where Hermione has some ultra superior advanced magic stuff!
    Loving everything so far!!!
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  • From ANON - Josie on May 25, 2008
    oooh back in time!! This plot is so fantastic I'm hyperventilating, LOL.
    But I hope, despite former really bad relationships, that Hermione won't let anyone, Lucius too, step all over her. I KNOW you never do a doormat-Hermione, but it just felt like when she broke down and cried and things like that that she'd be so vulnerable and week. But she's showing her true colors now, I think, hope..
    GREAT JOB.
    (I'm reviewing in my ultra bad hangover, and will probably for the next few chapters, so they won't be good) lol
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  • From ANON - jw on May 24, 2008
    ch 19 - (looks sadly at end of chapter....) is that all there is? sigh... like Lucius, I am resigned, but where is he taking her to calm down her nerves? to the brothel where she can talk to the 'professionals'? looks like he's going to have a tough time getting her to marry him. I'm still looking forward to your time-travel/paradox explanation about Lucius being his own gggg-grandpa! thank you very much for this chapter; you always keep me on edge.
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  • From blueartemis on May 24, 2008
    So he's dragging her off to get married? Hee. And I love the way she thinks, her mind is so much fun. I'd be living in the Malfoy library as well. Although I might be more inclined to having my way with the Master of the house.
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  • From ANON - doodle on May 24, 2008
    Bluestocking - great word. My best guess is Gretna Green!
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  • From ANON - Josie on May 24, 2008
    oooh make Lucius laugh more! I love a laughing Lucius and I don't care what kindof laugh it is; happy, evil, sarcastic WHATEVER :D
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  • From ANON - Josie on May 24, 2008
    It's amazing. You're amazing. I have no questions about anything, nothing's confusing me, and that's a compliment. You always explain everything, every little detail. I'm a silly perfectionist and I want to know everything.
    Details like the hair and grass tickling him, the smell and scenery, not all authors (especially fanfic authors) have details and explanations in their stories like you do. BUT it's only chapter two, so I will read on!! (and continue to review ;))
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  • From ANON - Josie on May 24, 2008
    Wow, FANTASTIC. I love it!
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  • From tambrathegreat on May 23, 2008
    Oh, you bring us to pleasure and let us ache. I wonder why Lucius is being so patient? Will we see a less reticent Hermione in the next chapter? I hope.
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  • From amyfeddy on May 22, 2008
    I almost didn't continue reading after I saw your little comment. But then I thought why punish myself, when I would much rather have Lucius punish me. And even though there were no lemons this chapter still delivered a good set-up for future lemons.(please I beg of you, gimme gimme gimme)I also love your hermione and lucius together and alone. I totally get the way she feels while buying clothes and having someone bug the shit out of you. Write on, I truely can't wait for more.
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  • From stormflora on May 22, 2008
    Well I it's high time I de-lurked and gave you a review, so here goes...

    I. Love. This. Story.

    Is that enough?! Haha no but really, I often find some writers' dialogue jarring to read but yours flows so beautifully that it honestly feels like these characters are acting out the scene right in front of me (Ha I wish! Mmm Lucius...). The other thing I adore about your story (apart from the vivid descriptions, twisting plot and excellent characterisations) is the way you insert little snippets of historical vocab - I especially liked the "crack" one in this chapter.

    Eagerly awaiting your next installment,
    A (hopefully) Lovely Lurker / stormflora :)
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  • From Pumkin on May 22, 2008
    so loving the story. i can't wait to see what you do next. please update soon.
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  • From Scarybearhair on May 22, 2008
    Grrrr
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  • From angelprince on May 22, 2008
    Damn Hermione. What's wrong with that girl?

    Thanks for another evil cliffie, Labib.
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