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Reviews for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From ANON - maddie50 on May 22, 2008
    Poor Hermione. I can see when she feels insecure her old habits from living alone kick in; thus her haunting of the Malfoy Library; forgetting Lucius's company; and bringing a book to the table to read instead of engaging in conversation. After Lucius's initial anger and Hermione's apology, I think he dealt with her emotional state quite well. I would even go so far as to say he was sensitive to her issues of living at the Manor. The pair do have sexual chemistry, but they seem to be dancing around the issue or the timing is never quite right. There is also the issue of different expectations, Hermione thinks she wants a no strings sexual relationship with Lucius, and Lucius seems bent on obtaining Hermione as a permanent partner who will bear him an heir.
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  • From ANON - pittwitch on May 21, 2008
    Okay, so I was wondering about the wandering place of origin. Didn't want to point it out, but now, I see the method behind the madness. :)

    And, trivia question -- why did the ladies of the era carrying smelling salts?

    Ah, the squib question arises ... very promising.

    Lumps, oh yes, more lumps please?

    The only destination Lucius knew ... the brothel or the boarding house? No, wait, can't think, must WAR. Damn, Pitt
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  • From ANON - Alchemist on May 21, 2008
    I've never read a fic in this ship before as I don't see it as very plausible. However, you are quite skilled at making this work. I've enjoyed this fic very much and am quite interested to see the rest.
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  • From ANON - Coraline on May 21, 2008
    Oh GODS!!! so bloddy good! I absolutely ADORE all of your stories, and this one is just oh so good!!!!
    I keep looking if you've updated this current story, and I keep reading your other fanfictions over and over and over!. . .
    I might not say much when I read your stories, but I love them so much!!
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  • From Citten on May 21, 2008
    i could so kill you right now! i cant believe i have to wait for the next post!!! couldnt you make an exception and give us another chapter?! like now PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i only hope that my suspions of what lucius is doing are right. i so am made at you right now. i am going to die i just know it. :}
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  • From Heidi191976 on May 21, 2008
    Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more soon.
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  • From distinctlyME on May 21, 2008
    I'm a really big lurker. I've been reading this for awhile now. I think since the fifth chapter. I would read and go on, but now I've started to feel bad for not telling you how much I love your story.
    So here's a review from your lurker turned reviewer. ;)
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  • From Tenar10r on May 21, 2008
    Poor Hermione, caught out in modern underclothes!
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  • From Utopia on May 21, 2008
    But it's Wednesday... I'm all confused now.

    And I ONLY want the penis so I can carve it into an obelisk and have my other half put a water feature through the middle!

    Sod the penis! I'll go spend his money on a new wardrobe! I'm a poor student who has lived in the same clothes for two years! Quite a few items are getting on the threadbare side of things! Though, as I truly despise clothes shopping, it's not all that hard to imagine why my jeans have holes in. Its going to be Hell looking for my wedding dress - especially as all the boutique owners are just like Madam Celeste! It was bad enough looking for my prom dress at 18! *groans*

    Ooops, knickers and bra aren't the usual! lol! Hermione in a corset sounds fun (and a bit on the Kiera Knightly side of things from Pirates 1! lol1)

    Lucius likes coloured knickers, does he?

    Oooh, Lucius in more exotic clothes. Nice. Can we have colour other than black and green? A nice pale blue would look good with his colouring! You could even be daring and have him in a lilac or a pale pink! (Hey, he's proud of his masculinity and can wear pink because he isn't gay and all that strange psychology!)

    Has something put Hermione's anatomy back to it's pure state? Those look like first-time jitters to me. Would this be the equivalent of... what's the word I want, consecrating isn't it - but you know what I'm after, right? I'm having a lack of appropriate vocabulary moment.

    Awww... are only the lurkers lovely? *pout, sulk, huff*


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  • From ANON - Rini on May 21, 2008
    Wow!! Quick Update; am very happy!

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  • From sheherazade on May 21, 2008
    Is that pesky Veil playing with Hermione's libido, I wonder? Or is it just her nerves? I'm very interested in how this Veily thing is affecting them...it's intriguing.

    Loved the underwear scene! It completely makes sense that a dressmaker would be fascinated by modern lingerie and want to know more. I didn't know about the slits - this story is highly educational as well as a page turner.

    (As an aside, I'm not sure Hermione and Lucius wouldn't have known the term 'bluestocking' - I remember my mum calling me one a few years back and I knew what she meant. Mind you, we were both avid consumers of historical drama and romance, so perhaps that's just us, lol.)
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  • From chickaboo on May 21, 2008
    I so know where Lucius is taking her. And I know that he has to be pleased about it given his previous thoughts and wants on the subject. But then again I could be totally off. If so, just ignore me. lol I can't wait for more!!
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  • From Phreakdom on May 21, 2008
    Poor Lucius, I'm surprised he can even function what with the blood pooling in his nethers. I'm sure they're both heartily sick of the manipulation and I see a trip to the ministry in their future. Lovely addition as always, even without the lemons!
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  • From StarKneazle on May 20, 2008
    Oh. I like it. I think Hermione is right. The tension in your story is amazing. Keep it up because I anticipate updates and when I don't have updates I get grumpy, even though I'm horrible at updating myself.
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  • From ANON - Cat on May 19, 2008
    OMG.

    I CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE REST
    I AM SO TOTALLY HOOKED

    PLEASE ADD THE NEXT CHAPTER ASAP!
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