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Reviews for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From sheherazade on May 10, 2008
    He's doing a sterling job there - OK, the Disapparition in the library might have looked like a stumble, but even that worked to his advantage. Hermione realises that she would be lost without him, even if she has every book in the Malfoy collection for company.

    I like their scene in the old lodgings - they seem very evenly matched, and are able to be completely honest with each other (must be an unusual feeling for Lucius). Mind you, I don't think she's taken on board Lucius' plans for her womb yet, has she? Could be controversial!

    Great work!
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  • From ANON - Rini on May 10, 2008
    Ohh, I wasn
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  • From Lauriurix on May 10, 2008
    interesting :)

    i like it :)

    lazy lurker ya know :P

    but i do enjoy reading this story!
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  • From jessirose85 on May 10, 2008
    Great chapter...please update soon xxx
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  • From ladyravenna on May 10, 2008
    I nearly forgot what I had asked you in the last review. LOL. But now I remember, and I guess I will have to wait for the answer to show up in the later chapters. I liked the light humor in this chapter. Lucius being jealous of a book, it's so laughable.
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  • From ANON - tambrathegreat on May 09, 2008
    I wonder why Hermione would think the Malfoys came to England during the Revolution? Lucius' jealousy over the books was funny. I can see him being quite put out that Hermione wasn't, well, putting out. What an intriguing universe you've created. Will we ever know what happened to Draco and his family? I hope nothing bad. I also like the idea that Lucius might be his own great to the x grandfather, and that Hermione might be his grandmother. How's that for incest? Great job as always.
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  • From Phreakdom on May 09, 2008
    That was lovely! Lucius does indeed seem the type to get miffed over coming second place to a book. I thought it was spot on for Lucius to follow Hermione back to their last residence, as sweet as it may seem it's also a little devious. No matter how far she runs, Lucius can always track her and I doubt he'll ever let her forget it. Even without the lemons, this was a wholly enjoyable addition; I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From Citten on May 06, 2008
    boy i sure hope not! well now i hope that who ever that other heir was i dead or had an accident because it could be really disastrouse if not. now i know they have said that they are already married but will happen because they know they are not and well i dont think lucius is the type to just over look bastard children, nor is the socity they live in. well we now know who build the malfoy family library. :) please update soon i am going to go crazy!!!!! i cant belive that you just left us hanging! :[
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  • From ladyravenna on May 05, 2008
    Aw Lucius sleeping with a book in front of him makes him seem so cute. I like the image. I wonder if there will be any complications with the inheritance since technically Lucius and Hermione are from the future and took the money from the intended Malfoy heir of the period.
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  • From wishywashy on May 04, 2008
    i'm a little confused. is L going to be his own great-great-great grandfather? is this like a paralell universe? and they have no clue do they? ehh, either i love it and i eagerly await the next chapter. i have a bad feeling the next chapter is not going to include any sex for L and H.
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  • From tambrathegreat on May 04, 2008
    Woo Hoo! He's back and in working order! Things are really going quite easily for them. I wonder if the veil was prepared for their influx, and if so, what impact Hermione will have on future Malfoy's ideologies if any. Love the half-sensitive Lucius, and the VERY sensitive (at least sexually) Hermione. Great job as usual.
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  • From Scarybearhair on May 04, 2008
    Hahaha
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  • From ANON - mariteri on May 03, 2008
    The story is going swimmingly! It would be a trip if Dobby were there at the estate. Great going and update where and when you can.
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  • From ANON - jw on May 03, 2008
    chapter 16 - yup, the bibliphile is adding to the Malfoy library! three hours.... Lucius was very patient (or asleep), for that much time. I do wonder if he'll remember enough of his family history to remember what happened to his "ancestor" and if there is a real nephew still to arrive, and if the portraits will know what's up. his own great-grandpa... thanks for the new chapter!!
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  • From blueartemis on May 03, 2008
    Lucius was wondering the same thing I was. Which is totally cool. I would seriously get lost in a bookstore. It is one of the reason my husband and I carry cell phones.
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