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Reviews for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From bluezauza on April 26, 2008
    Just wondering! This is the past ..right? Or some..parallel world? Because if this is their past, won't they change it? I mean , we know there were Malfoys in 1870, in London and they were rich and powerful wizards well known by the wizarding community!Aren't going to change things? Is she going to be Draco's great-great-great grandmother?? (Merlin forbid!)
    Anyway , poor Lucius, i feel sorry for him! Hermione is really very smart and all but she is a bit annoying, lol. She is right he is so bossy ,and he needs to learn how to respect her, and of course he will fall in love with her and she will be the boss in this relationship,( some how she always does) ..but, she needs to start to respect him a little bit too! She doesn't own the credit's for cleverness !Bloody Gryffindors!! LOL
    God's i love this story!
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  • From Scarybearhair on April 26, 2008
    Oh wow, so the shopkeeper knows their names and called Hermione, Mrs. Malfoy. Now that
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  • From on April 26, 2008
    Haha! Hermione making up his mind like that!! too funny!! I loved it, although I am ready for some HG/LM action!
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  • From ANON - jw on April 26, 2008
    ch 15 - I really enjoyed this chapter!! I'm sorry I can't put my finger on what specifically I liked about it, as I enjoyed everything - the banter, Lucius being impressed by Hermione outsmarting him with the ointment, the look at the "old" Leaky Cauldron, the truth about the cheap perfume and his night at the bordello, and the hints of future sex. Very clever way to get Lucius all the Malfoy money in this time, although I wonder if he can remember enough Malfoy family history to verify the story - Lucius as his own great-great-grandfather? time paradox? I won't even begin to try to figure that out, I'm just along for the ride. Thanks for the new update!!
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  • From ANON - doodle on April 26, 2008
    Great new turn in the plot. I can't wait for more.
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  • From pittwitch on April 26, 2008
    LOL -- Hermione should have been a Slytherin. I think Lucius should watch his back (and his front) from now on. I knew those stripes would "count." And, a nice twist -- Lucius recognizable as a Malfoy. Is there really another Malfoy or is the alternate reality's magic accomodating their arrival. So much to anticipate.

    BTW, having spent a goodly portion of my adult life in, around, and under cars, I'd be WAY more subtle than a brake line -- ;)
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  • From Heidi191976 on April 26, 2008
    Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From sheherazade on April 26, 2008
    Oooh, they were so close...all that lovely ointment-slathering, then the kidskin gloves ('quite the kinky addition' indeed!) and all the eyeing up of each other's assets and then...Hermione puts numbing lotion on his tool! How very, very naughty of her! I should think Lucius might want to pay her back for that. I can understand why she did it (sort of), though Lucius' was coming on strong enough to overpower the most uptight of witches. Still, the tension lingers in the air very tantalisingly!

    It's interesting that the wizarding world in the late 20th century was like something out of Dickens (I think that's what appeals to me about it) - I was almost expecting them to get into Diagon Alley and find it like bubonic-plague-era London but it makes sense that the wizarding world only started to lag properly behind Muggle society after the Industrial Revolution, when new technologies caused a terminal rift between the two.

    I am loving all the attention to detail - I hadn't heard of a jarvey, but now I will use the term whenever the opportunity arises!

    This is such a treat. Keep it coming!
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  • From Phreakdom on April 26, 2008
    I think I was just as surprised as Hermione and Lucius when they were addressed as Mr. and Mrs. Malfoy in the apothecary, well done! Lucius is such a terrible tease. I loved how you didn't make Hermione give in right away. Her strong will is what really makes her character I think. I'm excited to see what happens once they reach the solicitors.
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  • From ANON - Rini on April 26, 2008
    Crap! forgot to leave my name with the anon one above... am such an idiot... well now you know it was me. and you have two extra reviews!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 26, 2008
    Oh and adding to above, I think that "Lucius' endowments" should just be "Lucius' endowment" because you're just talking about his penis and comparing it to Ron's and Roger's right?
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  • From ANON - Rini on April 26, 2008
    Thank you for the jargon by the way, it was much appreciated!


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  • From Lauriurix on April 23, 2008
    ohhhhhhhhhh :O

    interesting devolpment (:

    so know they're on terms :O

    hehe cant wait to read more n___n
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  • From angelprince on April 23, 2008
    Hey Labib! I'm all caught up now. Bring on the smut.

    I can't believe you turned Lucius into a near Weasley. (shakes head)

    Oh yes, and the spanking of that toned, dimply ass was a nice touch. Very nice, indeed.

    I guess we all knew Hermione would give in. What was she doing in that bath while Lucius was getting up close and personal with the wallpaper?
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  • From on April 22, 2008
    really good job on this! I like the story. Can't wait for more. and don't you love Lucius in period clothes!?!?! YUMMY!!
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