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Reviews for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From ANON - pittwitch on April 14, 2008
    The alliteration may thrive, but only in print. Don't ask me to say the words out loud, lol.

    Hit the bare arse -- most definitely, and screw the wand Hermione, bare-handed baby!

    Naughty naughty miscounting of the "funds" -- could get you in serious trouble!

    May I please have "scrambled eggs" for breakfast tomorrow? Hungry witchy -- hungry, hungry witch.

    Poor baby, has a little "hang up" problem with his trousers, eh? I'm sure it can be soothed.

    Teased, tired and temperamental -- whose alliteration is rolling now? Temptress taunting with titillation.

    Knitting pattern drawn by a drunk -- ROFLMAO -- now I know you're peeking in my house. Had to quit knitting ;)

    I think he deserved more teasing ... but then again that's just a witch's POV.


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  • From Clare1984 on April 14, 2008
    ooh yeah, damn that was good! I usually prefer Lucius to be the spanker instead of the spankee but I am now a convert!oh to have that gorgeous guy laid out bound to my bed - mmm!

    Is Hermione gonna have a crisis over her feelings about this? Hopefully Lucius can help her sort that stuff out - I'm sure he would have some interesting stories to help her see it's not a bad thing.
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  • From baseballmom69 on April 14, 2008
    Found this story this morning and am instantly hooked! Had to read all you have on here before reviewing but...Gah!! I have always been a big fan of regency romances and add HP to it? You are simply wonderful!! Keep posting as fast as you can and I will read it as fast as you put it up. Your Lucius is beyond words and I want one! Thanks for this so far.
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  • From Tenar10r on April 14, 2008
    Fun!
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  • From wickienchen on April 14, 2008
    did he deserve punishment or pleasure?

    god, that was so hot!!!
    i`m going to love the chapter when the two of them will finally get to it... *gg*
    vic
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  • From genna on April 14, 2008
    I like this Lucius. He emotes, is calculating, and is dominant. I think this is one of a better Lucius' portrayals.


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  • From Heidi191976 on April 14, 2008
    An excellent chapter. I can't wait to read more soon.
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  • From sheherazade on April 14, 2008
    Lucius is so naughty! I bet Hermione didn't even stop to consider that he might actually enjoy it. Wonderfully vivid and detailed account; both points of view vying for who was getting the most pleasure from the experience. Though my money would be on Lucius.

    Fancy acquiring a taste for caning from juvenile punishments - I bet he doesn't use the rod on Draco for that very reason.

    I can't see these two keeping out of each other's clutches for much longer, frankly. (Hopefully).
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  • From chickaboo on April 14, 2008
    Oh goodness honey. That was so HOT!! Honestly, I just wanted to reach out and do a little caressing there. lol Really really great update hon, I can't wait for more...PLEASE update again soon!!
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  • From Lauriurix on April 14, 2008
    lurker came out of the shadows =P

    well i dont know i always read the updates of this fic but i never comment :P

    but i gotta tell you i like it, the way u describe their situations and how they behave >:] specially Lucius =)

    and well cant to wait to read more and to see Lucius n Hermione finally getting some of their own ;)


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  • From ANON - jw on April 13, 2008
    ch 12 - phew, I'm glad she didn't try to leave and go it alone. she really does need to thank him a bit more for what he's done for her; this is an awfully big bind they're in, and he has been the one to get rid of the dead bodies and thugs, and obtain money. I'm curious as to how Lucius will advance their relationship, although I don't think she is angry enough to give him any really heavy whacks on his bum. and I know that you'll surprise us all, as you do in each chapter! thanks for updating.
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  • From StrikerXF35 on April 11, 2008
    Yay, I think I have now read (or have downloaded to read) every story you have posted.
    Favorite author award :P, cant wait to see how the story flows.
    One minor point though, when Lucius is interrogating the innkeeper, he Accio's the house deed, is the deed magical? I was under the impression that only items from the magic world or with innate magic would respond to the Accio command.(darn, more rereading to check...Fun!)
    Please correct me if I am wrong, or you could just say since its AU that changed :)
    Cumpulsive
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  • From Damiana on April 11, 2008
    Chapter 12

    A spanking!!! No wait...Oh...How does one name this?

    Hmm...It's as though Lucius flagelates himself mentally...Still, Hermione will be the one witha sore backside (and it doesn't seem as though she's enjoying herself).
    Hmm maybe she did enjoy it a little...

    Hehehe. "At first I was going to truss you up like a Christmas goose" He would have deserved it too!

    He wasn't really counting when he was thrashing her so, Lucius may be surprised at the number of hits he'll be getting! Erm. You know where I stand on this one. Spankings all around! Will she be leaving him all tied up for it?

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  • From dolphindreamer on April 10, 2008
    I was going to name myself belle from beauty and the beast (she always was my facourite) but I'm already signed in. Loved it as usual. Personally though I think Hermione should use some of her cunning and smarts she's renound for and instead of spanking him then she should either
    A) trade it for a favour
    B) Be able to use it at a later time, the poor girl is probably dead tired and exhausted in all forms by this point.
    Not only would it open lucius' eyes a bit more for her potential as other than a person from his time and sex object but more of an equal as it shows a slytherin aspect. Your chice though, keep it up!
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  • From Clare1984 on April 10, 2008
    Ooh, I hope Hermione goes through with it. Hopefully she'll enjoy the power and regain some trust in Lucius. Of course if just the thought of it is turning Lucius on, he won't be able to hide his reaction like Hermione could. Damn, it's gonna be good. I love it!
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