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Reviews for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From ANON - pittwitch on April 09, 2008
    This may be my Lynchburg lemonade talking, but Lucius is damn lucky little Hermione isn't a fangirl at this point. He'd be in for way more than a tanning of his pureblooded posterior!!!!! Slow torturous (damn, no more Jack Daniels when reviewing -- I can't even tell if I spelled that properly!) tantalizing teasing -- he'd be begging for more than a hand on his bottom.

    Whoops, damn, I said that out loud, didn't I? Shoot. Sorry. How about: GO Hermione, it's payback time?!?
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  • From blueartemis on April 09, 2008
    Hee. As much as I like that idea, I would rather Hermione leave him hanging for a while.
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  • From ladyravenna on April 09, 2008
    I am having a hard time imagining a completely meek Lucius. If any he's a very good actor. Hermione best give him his punishment. He rightly deserves it.
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  • From Heidi191976 on April 09, 2008
    Another great chapter. I can't wait to read the next one.
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  • From AndreaLorraine on April 09, 2008
    Chapter 12

    Oooh, Lucius cares what Hermione thinks and he wants her gratitude/approval. He's falling. He already decided he was going to keep her, but this hints at something deeper.

    Hm, Lucius really is in a state if he forgot to disarm her.

    I'm glad Hermione defended herself, because I can't say I would have appreciated that awakening. I'm also glad that she didn't leave. Nothing would have made Lucius MORE angry and panicked than that, so at least Hermione had the sense to stay.

    Honesty from Lucius. Good - though it's not like he had much of a choice.

    The selling lipstick to chickens line - zing! You have the best sense of humor.

    Ha. Hermione ought to know that Lucius would like her retaliation. Maybe she does and finds it too tempting to resist. Let's hope.

    "...she didn
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  • From AndreaLorraine on April 09, 2008
    Chapter 11

    Ah, so that's how they got in and that's why there was no fireplace. Sneaky sneaky.

    "Perhaps she had better be more accommodating to his absences or she
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  • From AndreaLorraine on April 09, 2008
    Ok, I've got a slight backlog of reading & reviews for you!

    Chapter 10

    I'm really wondering what happened to poor Hermione in her other relationships to make her so skittish. She can stand up to Lucius's personality, but can't bear to deal with him as a man. Most unfortunate. I hope he can restore her sexual confidence. Poor girl may have a backlog to take care of, too!

    I do so love your Lucius. He's so comfortable in his own scandalousness. Hermione is a strong woman but I hold no hope (or desire) that she can resist him. I sure couldn't.

    Another excellent chapter!
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  • From bluezauza on April 09, 2008
    oooooohoh!!!!! Some spanking for dear Lucius!! How naive can Hermione be?? HAHAHAH Lucius rules!! Bwahahaha
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  • From Scarybearhair on April 09, 2008
    Yay LaBib, another wonderful chapter! I was laughing when Lucius yanked Hermione out of her hiding spot and proceeded to spank her silly. Eeeeek! What a way to way to wake up. You can tell though it was wonderfully satisfying to Lucius. I think Hermione rather enjoyed it too, if her damp knickers have anything to say.

    Now Hermione has Lucius at her mercy, tied to the bed, and is about to give him some payback. I
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  • From sheherazade on April 09, 2008
    How well expressed all Lucius' frustrations were in that chapter - it almost seemed that he had no reasonable alternative to giving Hermione a good thrashing, and the act itself was supremely satisfying for the reader as well as the man in question.

    And now Hermione has him entirely at her mercy...oh, something tells me that tempering justice with mercy might not be a Gryffindor trait (it certainly isn't a Slytherin one). Go, Hermione, go! Heh.

    Fun, fun, fun!
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  • From Tenar10r on April 09, 2008
    Hermione so deserved that spanking!
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  • From chickaboo on April 09, 2008
    If I was Hermione not only would I go through with it but I'd be using my bare hand too....lol! Great update! I almost snorted my drink out my nose when he started spanking her. I can't wait for more! Hope you update again soon!
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  • From Citten on April 09, 2008
    well the only sucky thing about the whole situation is that lucius did not get to know that hermione was arroused by his 'little' spanking. well on some levels i hope that she goes through with it on others i dont want her to. thought this maybe the only time she will get to do it back to him. he is juat a domante by nature and i just can't get use to it any other way. :) sorry.
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  • From ANON - maddie50 on April 09, 2008
    Well Lucius really went to town on her ass didn't he? I think payback is in order. Hermione could get into the spirit of things, but nowhere near the vigor he displayed. However, if Lucius egged her on with antagonistic comments, Hermione's emotions could get the better of her. Jean
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  • From tambrathegreat on April 09, 2008
    How did I know he was going to get spanked? I do hope she agrees, a spanked Lucius is a delicious Lucius. I just love the way you write his devious mind. You are one of the best to capture his sensuality and twisty little ways.
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