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Reviews for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From blueartemis on March 27, 2008
    I'm guessing that Hermione doesn't stand a chance in hell. And I love Lucius's determination to have her in his life. I really like that. And I'm a bit jealous.
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  • From Damiana on March 26, 2008
    Woohoo! Many chapters for me because I've been so busy with school...

    Chapter 9

    "When he had made his silent point and Hermione
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 25, 2008
    I know that I haven't reviewed before now, but I just have to say that I love your stories to no end. Each day I can't wait to check and see if you have posted, and on the days that you do, I practically leap from my chair with the excitement. The pairing of Lucius and Hermione is something I am new to. Although I love this pairing dearly, my favorite couple (which I have read their stories for 5 years) is Severus and Hermione. Which brings me to why I am reviewing. I was just curious to see if you would ever delve into the realm of Severus and Hermione?

    But back to the story at hand! I love it! It's just as awesome as your previous stories! I'm dying to see how Lucius handles Hermione and what it will take for him to get her to love him. Another thing I was hoping to read about was Lucius' fetish with his dildo's, which you have previously used twice in stories. I have to say that out of everything, those scenes were my favorite, and I'm not really sure why.

    Cheers to you and your amazing stories, and I just can't wait for the next installment.
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  • From Heidi191976 on March 25, 2008
    This was a great chapter. I can't wait to read more soon.
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  • From Scarybearhair on March 25, 2008
    Hahaha I love it! Lucius has Hermione all worked up doesn
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on March 25, 2008
    Another awesomw chapter..i swear the more you write the better it gets =) i see lucius has definitely decided to 'keep' hermione...yay!! (then again i kinda knew it would go that way otherwise the story would not be posted here...lol) i understand hermione's apprehension in getting close after her previous romances hurt her and left her feeling undesirable. i kind of hope that she eventually tells lucius cause i would love to see him flaunt their eventual relationship in front of her exes. of course, thats a long way away yet. i also see that although she can't admit her attraction, the fact that she wants to go 'home' with him speaks louder than any other words she could say as deep down she knows its not just for safety's sake. i can't wait to see how lucius breaks down her walls and builds her up again....keep it up, this is a fantastic story, oh and how long before we find out about whats going on back in the world they came from?
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  • From sheherazade on March 25, 2008
    "Take me home, Lucius." That sounds encouraging.

    I like Lucius' way of thinking, which is much clearer and more practical than Hermione's - he's quite right that they could be stuck there forever, and in that case, why not come together as partners in more than shared experience of the future? OK, if he actually looked like a troll I could see a dilemma there for Hermione, but...he doesn't. Well, I suppose the angle of him being an evil Death Eater might be slightly off-putting to somebody like her. But not for long, I'm guessing. (At least, hoping).

    He's so devastatingly witty and calculating in this, as well has having a great eye for fashion. What's not to like? Heh.

    More soon, I prithee.
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  • From chickaboo on March 25, 2008
    Goodness I love this story. Well, Hermione's in for it now. Lucius with an idea is like a dog with a bone. She'll never know what hit her. lol I can't wait to read more! I hope you update again soon!
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  • From tambrathegreat on March 25, 2008
    I like your take on Lucius. It's much the same as mine. I'm thinking Hermione is protesting too much. I hope not for long thought.
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  • From ANON - doodle on March 24, 2008
    I grew up reading my mother's Georgette Heyer books. This is so much better. I do like your use of smell...ordor as a trigger for reactions. The whiff of a remembered smell can take me back whenever or wherever I was when I first noticed it. I eagerly await your update.
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  • From ANON - LilyValentine on March 23, 2008
    Have to say, I love all your stories, but this one is an interesting twist on Lucius/Hermione. You're really portraying the past well and the idea of the new wave problems sounds very scary.

    Only thing I wondered is that from your previous descriptions, I believed the muggles under the influence of the new wave master were like mindless automatons blindly doing the will of their master in destroying magic people. In that case, how could Hermione have heard her parents discussing how to ambush her, as being mindless they wouldn't plan it, just attack? Or am I wrong and they do have intelligence left enough to plan an ambush?

    Other than that, can't wait for the next chapters as always :)
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  • From ANON - tambrathegreat on March 23, 2008
    So, that is how the Malfoys got their money. Hmm... sounds like a certain President I know of whose father became wealthy by bootlegging. Great story. I can't wait to read more!
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  • From AndreaLorraine on March 20, 2008
    You put me to shame. I feel so inadequate after reading this chapter!!! I should just hang up my metaphorical quill...but then my head would probably explode from all the ideas I wasn't exorcising.

    Wow, the chemistry was almost burning up the screen of my laptop. Absolute hotness. I may or may not require a cold shower.

    I'm glad Lucius was able to stop himself, but Hermione sniffed him out...stormy seas ahead...

    And Lucius isn't as morally bankrupt as she thinks; I hope she can see that. Granted, he is still Lucius, but some people *deserve* to be dropped in the middle of the Forbidden Forest.

    Just an extraordinary chapter. Keep it up!
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  • From LadyFabulous on March 20, 2008
    Wow, what a chapter! This is a story with a very unique plot that has totally sucked me in.

    It seems Lucius is well on his way financially. Though I do believe he will have to work hard to gain Hermione's trust (I hope she confronts him about the Lilac perfume). The silent protest of tears from Hermione was beautifully done. It was a really powerful moment that seemed to hit the characters very hard. I really felt Lucius' shame and regret at his unintentional loss of control.

    I like the way you have portrayed Lucius in this fic. His supreme arrogance, magical talent, confidence, and his ability to act in an emergency is well written and believable for someone with his past.

    I thank you for always delivering quality chapters that create truly excellent Lucius/Hermione fanfics.
    Update soon... you know I check almost every day...
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  • From blueartemis on March 19, 2008
    I could see Hermione being upset about the stink of cheap perfume, but how he didn't guess she figured it out is beyond me. By the way, their scene together in bed was really hot.
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