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Reviews for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From bluezauza on March 19, 2008
    Sweet Merlin's left ball, woman!
    You took my breath away with that performance!! I was so into it ,that when she started crying ,my hart just sunk, and i guess i felt a little guilty myself! hehe

    Lucius is just perfect, he is selfish, conniving , ruthless, arrogant wizard, but so protective of "his witch"! And very handy, to have around when in a moment of danger!! I wouldn't mind being abducted if it meant that HE would come to rescue me!!! hehehe
    A brilliant story as always!!
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  • From Heidi191976 on March 19, 2008
    Excellent. I can't wait to read more soon.
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  • From ladyravenna on March 19, 2008
    You're last little message is very true. I see Lucius as a hero yet he's making sure that he is preserving himself while saving others. It's a different Lucius from what we have seen in the books where he is focused more on himself and saving himself. Here he's saving another, but at the same time saving stuff for himself.
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  • From Utopia on March 19, 2008
    He's sending them to the forbidden forest?? How?? Does Hogwarts, and therefore a magical realm exist in this place?? I thought they were alone as far as magic went?
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  • From sheherazade on March 19, 2008
    Wowowow, what a performance! Sweet tantalisation and I could quite fancy Lucius as a redhead, I think. What a shame the cheap tarty perfume gave him away, but nonetheless the cat is squarely among the erotic pigeons now!

    That was just...special! I need more, soon.
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  • From chickaboo on March 19, 2008
    Um...so this was amazing as always! I can't wait to read more of this. It's so original and different. I hope you update again soon!
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  • From Scarybearhair on March 19, 2008
    Aw LaBib, I will give you a review since you asked. I usually like to wait until morning because I don
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  • From Phreakdom on March 19, 2008
    I've been reading this from the beginning and I have to say this is really brilliant. I think you've taken the characters and fleshed them out exceptionally. Lucius is still Lucius but he's likeable, conniving and ruthless but still charming. I also love how Hermione isn't automatically giving in to her burgeoning lust, I've never seen her as the type of person to do something like that but at the same time she's still a woman and the attention of an attractive man can still make her a little fuzzy at times. I'm terribly excited to see how they adapt to the world you've thrown them into!
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  • From blueartemis on March 16, 2008
    Hasn't figured out why he feels guilty? And I'm glad nothing has happened to Hermione yet, well, other than being kidnapped and sold by someone who didn't have any rights over her. That woman deserved everything Lucius did to her.
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  • From Utopia on March 16, 2008
    OH NO!!

    I think they both forgot that in this time period women aren't safe, and they're paying for it!

    Oh, I'm on the edge of my seat... how's he going to get her out? Did he remember her wand? What will happen to the 'bad guys'? What are they going to do about the landlady?

    Oh! What are they going to do?? What are we (the readers) going to do to fight of the suspense monster you've hatched?!!

    11/10
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  • From ANON - jw on March 14, 2008
    ch 8 - aha! Lucius will not again visit a brothel, now that he knows his dalliance enabled Hermione's kidnapping. what a perfect rescuer - a Death Eater with no scruples about zapping the baddies. here's hoping L&H don't have their "first time" in that sleazy den. thank you for the new chapter!
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on March 13, 2008
    update again soon!
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  • From tambrathegreat on March 13, 2008
    Yahoo! I've been checking everyday for an update. I love how they are being drawn into the world they are in. Will they ever find the Wizarding community?

    Lucius is so crafty, and as a sorted Slytherin, I heartily approve of his methods of acquisition. Who better to give him property and blunt that the very people by which he has been exploited? Great job. I can't wait for more.
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  • From Scarybearhair on March 13, 2008
    Aw LaBib this was another wonderful chapter, so thrilling too with Hermione being abducted! I
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  • From chickaboo on March 13, 2008
    Oh my goodness. I have finally gotten the time to sit down and read this story and I am in LOVE with it! I'm also in love with that pic of Lucius....I swear my heart stopped for a second there. *Shivers* So hot. Hmmmmmm....sorry, got distracted there for a sec. lol Anyway, this story is really fantastic and I can't wait to read more! I really hope you update again soon!
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