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Reviews for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From Scarybearhair on March 05, 2008
    Oh Lucius just throw Hermione on the bed and make her scream! She
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  • From ANON - pittwitch on March 05, 2008
    Poor Lucius, having to suffer the indignity of undergarments all for a pugnacious little kitten. Dear me, whatever shall he be forced to do?

    Hermione attacking the book, even Debrett's, was so true to form.

    Write on dearie, write on. Thanks for sharing, Pitt
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  • From Utopia on March 05, 2008
    mmmmm nice picture... but I see him with broader shoulders, and minus those lovely snug britches... mmmmm.... naked Lucius *swoon*
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  • From sheherazade on March 05, 2008
    Ah, good thinking, faking an identity from Debretts. I've got a feeling Lucius is going to slope off and eschew business in favour of pleasure, that bad man.

    Oh my, this chapter was seething with sexual tension. I love the way you ratchet it up and up until they are about ready to burst. It is hot already, without fingers being laid on (other than the arm-smacking). I did enjoy Lucius embarrassing Hermione with his erection and perving on her Tahitian Sunset undies. Lovely stuff!
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  • From MsMischief on March 05, 2008
    Definitely worth a review picture and story. I love reading Lucius's inner monologe, just fascinating. As for the picture wow wow wow...
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  • From dragon37 on March 05, 2008
    A very lovely picture. As usual a very good story, and I really can't wait to read more.
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  • From dragon37 on March 03, 2008
    Like all of your other stories, This one is starting out to be a marvolous story. I hope you update soon.
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  • From Damiana on March 03, 2008
    Chapter 6

    Hehe...Rocket powered brooms...fire away then!


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  • From Delfin on March 02, 2008
    ohh i like how this story is going =)

    im mostly SS/HG pairing but love also to read HG/LM >:]

    well done n written =D
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  • From AndreaLorraine on March 01, 2008
    I love Lucius and his 'lord and master' routine, but it's going to get them in trouble at some point...he should, perhaps, keep a lower profile, but that's probably very hard for him to do.

    Hm, all this new vocabulary is interesting, indeed. I'm hoping that they won't begin to lose their memories of their own time.

    Don't know why Hermione's so caught up on the bed - she already slept spooned with him in the middle of a field, though I guess that was fully clothed and they were both still in shock at that point.

    Oh, I'm seriously doubting Hermione is going to react well to Lucius undressing her. And I just know he's going to wake up with morning wood. I'm really rooting for him to last long enough that he doesn't have to make use of a brothel, but it would create such drama if he didn't. I'm torn.

    Congrats on writing a period piece that keeps my interest - they aren't usually my cup of tea. Your interaction between Lucius and Hermione is so engaging, your trips into Lucius's head are always entertaining and insightful, and I'm extremely curious as to how this is going to turn out and if/when they will get back to their own time. Holy run-on sentence Batman! What I mean to say is that you reeled me in expertly and I'll be here til the end.

    P.S. - I'd just like to let you know that I plan on telling several people that they smell like a whore's armpit in the near future. :)




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  • From tambrathegreat on February 28, 2008
    So, the plot thickens. I'm now wondering about the nature of the magic of the veil. I know you said they wouldn't run into Sirius, but it might be interesting for them to encounter a fully acclimated Sirius, just to see what they might (will) become if they remain. Cool story. It has all the elements I like: time travel, wizardry and romance.
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  • From skydancer on February 28, 2008
    beautiful! Love the "back in time" and asimilating into the era concept! briliant!!!

    thanks
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  • From goldspleen on February 28, 2008
    hi, So you put them in bed together ! thank you so much, i love you for that :)Fantastic chapter , as always.
    I wish I could see him in those silk shorts^^
    ~J.
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  • From blueartemis on February 27, 2008
    I would say that he had better things to think about other than his cock, but hey, I would be wrong.
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  • From curikitten on February 27, 2008
    Hmm... what are the chances he wakes up between the legs of Aphrodite, though? Poor thing can't even wank without causing a disturbance. Lucius' experience at adapting to, well, anything, coupled with Hermione's analytic nature make them decent partners, but Hermione's Gryffindorian inability to read subtle cues will definitely be a source of frustration for dear Lucy, as will his Slytherin aversion to blatant honest prove completely confounding to Herms. Poor dears.
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