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Reviews for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From AndreaLorraine on February 21, 2008
    Clairvoyant? I like that. I have been known to be somewhat good at sniffing out plotlines, since I imagine so many of them myself...but I am freakishly patient so I won't pester you with questions.


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  • From ANON - Violet Eyes on February 21, 2008
    another excellent chapter. can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Coraline on February 21, 2008
    Now see that was some great advice about the other window for reviews!!
    Well I can tell you how thrilled I was when I discovered the new chapter you've posted, which is by the way keeping me up too late since it's 25 min. past 1 am (I think that's what it's called, can't really figure out the whole am/pm thing. Since we don't use it here in Denmark)

    But I love you for making me staying up cos of your great stories!! anyway I'll go back to reading now :D
    OH god I love your depiction of Lucius LaBib!! I LIKE being rich *muhaw*
    He's so snooty XD just like we love our conceded "hero"
    and I keep thinking "Saint Hermione" yeah I'm reading "The Wedding" once again XD
    Well hunger certainly got the better of her ;)

    I loved it, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter

    Yours truly the lurker
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  • From Kooldragon400 on February 21, 2008
    Wow...you are so good! I wish I could captivate an audience as you do. You could probably compete with JK herself! And this storyline is so hypnotizing!

    Being in the past must be frustrating! Oh my! How will they get themselves back into the future, providing it's within the story's plot to allow them back? Will they be able to save the world from the sheep? I do hope so! For all his boyish angst I sort of enjoy Harry Potter's character. Ron...I could do without...
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on February 21, 2008
    Wonderful, more info on where they are which is great. love the use of the word 'popinjay' i never would have thought to apply it to lucius but it fits. I like the fact that your story has fantastic detail put into it and the vocabulary you use is extensive and enjoyable instead of reading the same describing words over and over again. i had a good laugh over hermione trying to fight off the woman trying to come on to her (him?)..lol. keep the chapters coming. Happy Writing!!!
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  • From skydancer on February 20, 2008
    As always....I bow to the gifts of your great plot bunny!
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  • From AndreaLorraine on February 20, 2008
    Ah, I do love Lucius and you sneak into his head so well. Your characterization and the way you portray his reasoning are dead on. The narrative is great, interspersed with subtle bits of humor that make reading a complete joy. 'Tutu on a mountain troll', 'any female port in a storm', 'he might choose the cow over her', 'was there such a thing as a dead zombie?' - classic, exactly my sense of humor.

    This is a very unique plot. I'm dying to know where and when they have been deposited. Both Hermione and Lucius keep experiencing a strong desire not to separate; IS it just the threat of the new place, or does this world have a magic of its own? Also, is there any possibility of return? There must be - Lucius and Hermione return and defeat the New Wave Master & are the new heroes of the wizarding world! Or, per Hermione's reasoning that she could change the future, they prevent the New Wave from ever happening. After falling madly, if grudgingly, in love in Quakerworld, of course.

    Right. Yeah, this is a sleep-deprived review. Sometimes those are the best kind, though. In the words of Tim Gunn, carry on!!!

    (I don't have to tell you to make it work because I know you already have)
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  • From blueartemis on February 19, 2008
    I love the sartorial discussion, it was amusing.
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  • From Damiana on February 18, 2008
    Chapter 4

    Huzzah! A new chapter!

    So now we know that there's something between the French and the English (which leans me towards the "back in time" side of the fence) but we also heard the poor woman in the house say Silas protect us...(which tilts me back toward the alternate reality)... decisions decisions...

    And then there is the issue of language; Lucius was able to understand quite easily when the woman and her children spoke so Middle English this is not. The fabric's homespun nature suggests that this society is pre-industrial and that they aren't just in a remote part of the countryside.

    Ok...I don't want to over think this so I'll stop now and see where things go from here.

    Lovely chapter LaBib. Very enjoyable, as always.
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  • From throughvioleteyes on February 18, 2008
    The bit about the cow in chapter three was hilarious, and then Hermione being ready to hex it into hamburger patties. I laughed pretty hard.

    So, what year did they land in? Is Harry still alive? Did Ron die? I hope so, I don't really like Ron's character. Is Draco still alive?

    Oh, and thanks for reviewing my story.
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  • From Malfoysgirl on February 16, 2008
    Just love how pit Hermione and Lucius against one another before you get them actually together. It's awesome. Please add more soon
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  • From blueartemis on February 16, 2008
    Hee.
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  • From blueartemis on February 16, 2008
    Lovely, and I like that he managed to be chivalrous, even though he was annoyed.
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  • From blueartemis on February 16, 2008
    Cool. Thanks for the email, I was glad to see a new story, and this one started with a bang, I must say.
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  • From ladyravenna on February 16, 2008
    For a chapter that seemed to not move very far, I think I learned a lot. Lucius is biased and fashion sense. Hermione has transfiguration talent. Of course I find it amusing that Lucius is wearing clothing transfigured from forest detritus. I just imagine him thinking about the fact that "I am wearing leaves on my head..." LOL.
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