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Reviews for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From ANON - Coraline on February 16, 2008
    WOW once again I'm captured by your story!! Can't tell you how much I've been looking forward to this one,
    you have a gift for writing!
    Well I'll retrive back to my lurking position ;) Just wanted to let you know I love all of your stories XD
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  • From Scarybearhair on February 16, 2008
    This was wonderful LaBib! I keep laughing at all the bickering going on between Lucius and Hermione. She certainly didn
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on February 16, 2008
    ooooo i wonder where they are? update soon!
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on February 16, 2008
    great, wonderful, fantastic!! love the new chapter. i enjoy the way you write these two characters, your descriptions bring them to life for me. I also like that although each seems to irritate the other in some way...which is natural in some respects for this couple, each also is scared/worried about losing the only connection to the past (future?). Will do my best to patiently wait for the next installment, although its hard as i am curious to know what happens next.....until then, Happy Writing!!
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  • From Utopia on February 16, 2008
    4

    Oh, the
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  • From sheherazade on February 16, 2008
    Ah, Lucius is hilarious in this - I do like his noble asperity and his sly efforts to wrongfoot Hermione, the question mark woman.

    So now we know that they are trapped in the past, from their encounter with a fichu-wearing farmwife (gotta love those fichus!) who thinks Lucius is a Frenchie! Horror of horrors! Loved that little scene; very funny.

    So now they are quietly sizing each other up as potential bed partners, while still sniping at each other. I can't wait to see what happens to them in their new world - and of course, Lucius in particular will fit right in!

    Lovely long chapter; update soon.
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  • From Utopia on February 16, 2008
    Where did my chapter three review go?? I think my browser might be playing up on me. Oh well, I
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  • From calaminehorn on February 16, 2008
    I can imagine the expression on Lucius's face, and his subsequent disgruntled attitude upon his less than hospitable reception. "Frenchies!" that cracked me up. Obviously something tragic (or at least emotionally damaging) happened to Hermione in the past for her to have such a changed disposition. Or perhaps Lucius was just inaccurate in his first assessment. That seems unlikely, however, as I'd consider him a good judge of character. He's well versed in dealing with people and being able to read them is no doubt a talent he'd find useful and therefore would have cultivated.

    This is shaping up to be a truly great story. I have no idea what's going to happen, or what has happened and will be revealed, and I'm trying hard not to think on it. I love being surprised, and anticipating the plot will only make the wait for updates all the more painful. It's so different though, and I'm so excited about where it's going! Is this the past, an alternate reality? All the possibilities are so delicious! What will happen next? I'm dying to know! I understand why you're spacing out your updates... but that doesn't mean I have to like it. I'm indulging the impatient child within, and that child wants more!

    Lovely, promising chapter. Can't wait to see where your plot is going.
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  • From tambrathegreat on February 15, 2008
    I just love the banter, it's like an evil Death Eater version of a forties-era movie. Actually, the whole first part of the chapter reminded me of a movie called "It happened One Night" with Clark Gable and Claudette Colbert. Check it out if you haven't seen it. It's cute.

    Lucius, is of course, Lucious in your story. Hermione is just too cute. I can't wait to see what happens!
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  • From Damiana on February 13, 2008
    Oh chapter 3! Short of an ode, here's a review...


    Hehe! "Damned twittering" Now we know that Lucius isn't a morning person... also the "moos" made me laugh out loud (despite expecting them a little...) And I think that the expectation of Lucius' hair as cow feed is even more hilarious.

    "He shook her like a little rag doll, angry with his stinging face, his cow-licked hair and most of all the tiny batterer being treating to a taste of his uneven temper." --> ...being treated to... (Unless I mistak eyour meaning, of course.)

    What a fantastic chapter! The plot hasn't really thickened yet but I can already tell that it will be delicious... hmm...Lucius en Sauce...


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  • From ANON - skydancer on February 13, 2008
    *snort*..... a roadmap..*giggle*.....
    The backstory on Draco, Snape and the rest of the family was well done.
    Being from Canada, I must say I wish Narcissa all the best and hope she enjoys her new home

    sky
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  • From Scarybearhair on February 13, 2008
    Hahaha
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on February 12, 2008
    Ha! lucius is so arrogant! update soon!
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  • From dolphindreamer on February 12, 2008
    I must say I loved the ending of this, especially the quip about his pretty light grey eyes. Very funny. I do hope Lucius warms up to her soon, it seems as though hermione needs someone as she seems extremely unconfident of herself at the moment. Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Ravenna on February 12, 2008
    Draco making potions for Muggles...easy to imagine since he must find it a great joke to play on them. LOL. They're bickering, but I feel like it's a touch and go kind of bickering where each of them is trying to learn something about the other. I am glad they're finally moving else I am sure Lucius would have attracted another cow they're way with his hair.
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