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Reviews for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From teenyboppersc on February 04, 2008
    WELCOME BACK!!!!!
    i can not wait for the plot to thicken!!
    do you know how often you'll be posting??


    I'm an AVID fan!


    Harley
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  • From AndreaLorraine on February 04, 2008
    A very original start. Well thought-out, great descriptions. I've always wondered what was beyond that veil, so I'm looking forward to your interpretation.
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  • From ANON - ashmo21 on February 02, 2008
    Are the monsters like the ones from Resident Evil? Anywho, This fic is awesome so far. I can't wait to see where you're taking this!
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  • From ANON - skydancer on February 01, 2008
    Wow....you really squeezed loads of stuff into that first chapter! I look forward to the next chapters and the bits of back-story. Interesting theory on the Squibs. ( go Filtch go!!!!)
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on February 01, 2008
    please update soon!
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  • From Malfoysgirl on February 01, 2008
    Great beginning! Please add more soon
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on February 01, 2008
    great beginning!! can't wait to see whats next! happy writing!
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  • From sheherazade on February 01, 2008
    Yessssss *conducts full orchestra in symphony of celebration* (then remembers has no idea how to conduct orchestras - ah well - the occasion merits it anyway).

    I really wasn't expecting it to start like this! I was expecting brittle comedy-of-manners, but this was intense, dramatic and intriguing. I enjoy having my expectations bucked as well, so it was good for me - and one wouldn't guess that you don't normally 'do' dark.

    I am absolutely fascinated by the New Wave Master, and the possibilities that are opened up by upfront conflict between the Wizarding and Muggle worlds. Indeed, my current story is going to include a bust-up between Magic and Science. Who would win that war? I often wonder. I'm also avid to know if we might know who the New Wave Master is... Hmmm.

    Lucius is wonderfully calm in a crisis, though Hermione (if it's her) seems to have lost it a bit.

    And my final comment - I LOVE the idea of finding out what's beyond The Veil. I don't think I've read a story that delves into that before.

    Original, exciting, and I want to read on straight away. Thanks!
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  • From Scarybearhair on February 01, 2008
    Squee! As you know, I have been eagerly awaiting your new story for some time now, especially since you have dropped little tidbits here and there about what is going to happen. So YAY!!!!
    Anyway, I will calm down now. (I
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  • From ANON - equinox on February 01, 2008
    Very intriguing! I've been waiting for another one of your stories :) I look forward to see where this is going, thanks!
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  • From ANON - Lissa on January 31, 2008
    Oh this definitly sounds promising. I'll be checking back regularly...

    Certainly an interesting plot. I love the fact that you've written it ahead of times. A longer wait, but it's nice to feel secure in it's continuation.

    I hope the updates are close to daily. Can't wait to read more.
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  • From Kooldragon400 on January 31, 2008
    Oh my! How very Hitler-ish of the Master. How very sad. I do hope there's a light at the end of the tunnel? Even a dim glow? THis is going to prove to be a VERY interesting story. I look forward to it.

    And I am assuming that this poor woman is Hermione? Of course it is...

    Keeping going my friend, you have a magic with words that shouldn't be contained...
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  • From ladyravenna on January 31, 2008
    A futuristic tale, interesting. I can't wait to see where this goes. I love your stories. There's so much realism and believability in the characters.
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  • From ANON - willow on January 31, 2008
    I'm so happy to read another one of you wonderful stories! I love your stories! Can't wait to read more!
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  • From Damiana on January 31, 2008
    Woo! a new fic!

    Oh! It sounds exciting and apocalyptic!

    I've been eagerly checking your page in anticipation of your new story. It's here! It's here!

    *throws a party*
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