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Reviews for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From wishywashy on January 31, 2008
    i love it already. so much mystery. i want to know more.
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  • From StarKneazle on January 31, 2008
    This is amazing! I have never read anything like this before. It is really amazing, from the descriptions you've written to the idea of an all-powerful Muggle Voldermort taking over and brainwashing Muggles to kills all the magic people is such an amazing idea. I loved how you described everything. It all just fit.

    Everytime I read the word 'sheep', though, I thought about that B-horror movie "Black Sheep", which is about cannibalistic sheep in New Zealand.
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  • From Utopia on January 31, 2008
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    Mmmmm - wonderful start!

    So, a maniac worse than Voldemort has decided to kill off Magical folk, but not squibs; I wonder if if is a squib who's had opportunities denied, or a jealous Muggle (eg. Petunia jealous of Lilly - but worse)?

    Fluffy has been copied and his DNA tampered with - interesting from a Biologist's POV, that's taken some doing! DNA is a well-guarded molecule, practically wrapped in bubblewrap and cared for by a small army of enzymes... I'm very intrigued, it takes some nasty chemicals or radiation to alter DNA.

    So Lucius has been using his Slytherin skills and kept on the run as much as possible, and evidently Hermione has used her brain to do the same. What have they seen? What have they been subjected to? What have they learnt? What are they going to do now they're through the veil?

    Is Sirius going to turn up? Is it a door to the Afterlife? A time machine? A safe haven for magic folk?

    MORE MORE MORE!!
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  • From Citten on January 31, 2008
    YEAH! a new story! i will be waiting for a new chapter. i love that you post your stories after you have already finished them and then post them so we get regualar updates and so we can enjoy the story. the veil is an interest concept in your view i cant wait to see where you are going with it. i wonder how they will feel when they know who the other is. hehehehe. the new bad guy is even worse then voldemort was at his hight and that is saying something. so when you posting next? :)
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  • From ANON - mariteri on January 31, 2008
    Nice start. I'm curious already and that's just what you want in a reader. Though have to say I'm a bit confused. Is the woman supposed to be Hermione? And if so, why doesn't Lucius recongnize her? She's one of the Golden Trio after all. Are they going to be seeing Sirius? That would be cool. Just a thought. Good luck and update as soon as you can.
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  • From ANON - Sass on January 31, 2008
    I really love the beginning and I hope you had a lot of fun writing it.'
    You are one of my favourite authors and I hope to hear and read a lot more from you.

    love Sass
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