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Reviews for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From Phreakdom on November 15, 2008
    Ch. 49
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  • From voraciousreader on November 15, 2008
    Excellent chapter (49) as always! I am, however, really, really curious as to how their world has changed by their intervention in the past. I assume the Lynx academy still functions, have they been able to prevent Muggle encroachment on Wizarding lands? Been able to help with some of the wars in Muggle politics? Has a Squib ever been minister of Magic or liason to the Prime Minister for a steady contact? Right, I'll shut up.
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  • From soldiersgirl0709 on November 15, 2008
    Nice! But the candle talk had me laughing still.....the imagery of her realizing she had a butt full off crumbled wax is just too much......though a butt full of Lucius doesnt sound so bad.....give and take the good with the bad I suppose LOL.....


    Will wait for the epilogue =) Glad you got to see Brotherhood....I love Michael, he gives great inspiration to write more lusty Lu.


    Happy Writing!
    S_G
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  • From Utopia on November 15, 2008
    I thought you'd forgotten about us!

    Well, Lucius DID break the law - and those laws were probably initially set down by Merlin. I think he probably deserved going to Azkaban!

    I don't think I want to hear about the candle...

    Good grief! Lucius wants anal because his pride's taken a hit? I'd have slapped him for that little caveman speech! What a prat!

    Ugh, I HOPE that is a NEW tub of lubricant! I hope it isn't the same tub that he used with Narcissa!

    I'm really not all that into anal, but the scene was very well written.

    Awww... and a happily ever after - at least they won't fall out when Hermione nicks the covers from him!
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  • From ANON - Rini on November 15, 2008
    It
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  • From zirah on November 14, 2008
    After catching up with this story a couple of weeks ago, I've been constantly waiting for new chapters. I'm loving the story line, and your writing is amazing, and please stop the torture and update already! =P
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  • From ANON - Robyn Hawkes on November 08, 2008
    Bit confused but much happier. I assume we'll meet Draco and his family next time and learn how the squibs are doing.
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  • From SailorSol on November 07, 2008
    Chapter 48

    MUCH better, but now what? I mean, life can't be boring with those two, but what are you going to do with them now?

    I have a few ideas, if you'd care to hear them ... email me.
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  • From Scarybearhair on November 06, 2008
    Eeeeek! I am so behind schedule! This chapter was happiness though. Yay!

    I was horrified last chapter when Lucius was back in his cell. It was like some terrible sick joke had been played on him. But I knew that you would never have an unhappy ending, so while I was stunned, I knew there would be someway out of it. I just had no idea what you had in mine.

    Now that I
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  • From sheherazade on November 06, 2008
    Yessss, clever Veil! It's really quite a benign and thoughtful stone arch, isn't it? I like that, though it must be weird to suddenly find that eight years of your life have vanished.

    I loved the way they both got the 'false memories' of their penitentiary passions at the same time - very clever.

    So now we're well placed for the trademark warm-glow-inducing LaBib ending, I see... *cockles begin to heat up*
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  • From TriniMinx on November 05, 2008
    Yes, I'm happier now :o)
    I can't wait until you update again! I like "happy endings."
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  • From Clare1984 on November 05, 2008
    Chapter 48

    Ok, I get that it wasn't as angsty as your other stories but I made the review in haste - I was all caught up in their story and felt so distraught that they had been torn apart with neither of them knowing what had happened to the other. I mean, Lucius was weeping! So my review may have been a tad over enthusiastic but I just love these two so much.

    Anyhoo, they're back together! Yay! It's a bit weird with their thoughts just tumbling into their heads when they need them. Are we going to find out how they got together in this world or would that get confusing? Ugh, time travel gives me brain freeze. It's a good job you've got a handle on it.

    Those teasing memories of their adventures in Lucius's cell - damn, why can't we see them in full. Although, I suppose there is the hot celebratory, out-of-jail, back-in-the-future sex to look forward to. I wonder if those jade columns will make another visit? I seem to remember Lucius saying he still used them in the future, now present, when they were back in the past... or something? yeah, my brain's frozen.

    Roll on chapter 49, my brain should be working by then - some lemons will help get it back up to speed!
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  • From ANON - jw on November 05, 2008
    ch 48 - phew, what a relief!! I nearly panicked this past weekend when I didn't see a new chapter from you. you've spoiled us with regular postings every weekend, and I was afraid you'd gone on a long vacation. I'm sure Lucius and Hermione appreciate your hastily reuniting them! but since they changed the past, how did Lucius still end up in Azkaban? is "new timeline Lucius" still a Mudblood-hater in his "revised past"? I wonder if the fifth House is still at Hogwarts, and what other things have changed. ooh, I'm so eager for the next chapter already! THANK YOU for posting!
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  • From ANON - doodle on November 04, 2008
    Thanks for the sense of relief. I don't think I could handle having a veil in my life. Thank you for not keeping them apart.
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  • From ANON - sweettiff_14 on November 04, 2008
    Yes, I feel much better. I like how everything is wrapping up into a nice happy ending. I still can't wait for the next chapter to see just how much everything has changed. It'll be interesting to see how the school worked out.

    On another note, I think it's crazy that only 2% of people review. Just crazy. Well, I suppose if you keep begging more will slowly join the ranks of reviewers!
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