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Reviews for Nights of Gethsemane

By : starcrossedkayla
  • From Icrushedskullsat6mos on May 12, 2008
    I went to your LiveJournal and *squee!* It's amazing. I tip my hat to you.
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  • From Icrushedskullsat6mos on May 11, 2008
    Love this chapter! It made my heart sing--Snape obviously cares about Harry, even if he tries to pretend otherwise. It was cute enough to make me squee! I thought for sure that Snape was about to join Harry in beating the shite out of Avery. Avery gives me the creeps, by the way... And I think the Imperio curse can last for a great deal longer than a week... But in this story it's different. Ok. I can accept that. I really enjoy reading this story.
    By really weird in some parts, I just mean that some parts seem awkward-not in your writing style, but just in the situations that take place. I'm really easily embaressed for characters, so I felt really oddly when Harry was having the mini identity crisis. What's up with training naked? I have to say, it doesn't sound comfortable AT ALL. Nope. :)
    But anyway, I look forward to your next chapter, and I hope Avery doesn't get to lay a single slimy hand on Harry! He's property of Snape! Although...when he eventually escapes, it's going to be REALLY awkward with Ginny...
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  • From insane8veggies on May 09, 2008
    ooo! please continue! your story kept me awake all night and now ive nothing to do...
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  • From alleycat88 on May 09, 2008
    Very smart. Let us see whether or not their plan worked....More please!
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  • From KarenLioncourt on May 08, 2008
    Eeeee! Cliffhanger!
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  • From Icrushedskullsat6mos on May 08, 2008
    NO! That was the biggest cliffie of the century! Amazing writing, I love the story, I can't wait to read the rest of it. Some of it comes off as really weird, but I've gotten past it and it's awesome. I hated Snape before this story, but I think I actually like him now. Anyway, good luck with the story! I've got to go make dinner! Byes!
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  • From GOD on May 04, 2008
    NOOOO! YOU DID NOT JUST LEAVE IT OFF LIKE THAT!!! AHHHH!!!!!

    Omg, i think i'm seriously going to die....yup...there went my heart...i'm dead...you and your demonic cliffy killed me...

    *is dead*
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  • From Rosei on May 04, 2008
    Chapter 26


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  • From Alexiel86 on May 03, 2008
    i love your ff! every chapter is better than the last one and i hope for a soon update! i want to know what will happen with harry!!
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  • From freewater on April 30, 2008
    I waited until I got to the last chapter before reviewing and now I'm DYING for more. I can't stand not knowing what Avery will put poor Harry through, and I love how Harry is starting to feel something for snape but can't tell, and Snape, when Harry's licking his fingers snaps at him to stop was so cute. I hope you have lots of time on your hands because I don't think I could handle it if you didn't update this. Good job on this great story :)
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  • From Kalisti on April 29, 2008
    thats an evil cliffhanger! great chap! can't wait for the next one!
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  • From cravedom on April 28, 2008
    Great chapter! I really enjoyed the flirting between Harry and Snape while training, of course they would not call it that but to me it was.

    The end of the chapter when Harry was thinking that he really should have made sure Snape enjoyed sex so he would not leave him behind so easily brought back to my mind that he is so young and inocent in so many ways. I have gotten so busy looking for romance in this story that totally forgot the situation Harry is in and how strong he is for not craking under it.

    Now of course I am eager for another chapter but afraid to know what Avery is going to do.
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  • From KarenLioncourt on April 27, 2008
    A week... wow. If Harry misses Snape now, I can only imagine how he will feel after Avery has been "taking care of him" for a week...
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  • From alleycat88 on April 27, 2008
    Oh no.....this is bad. Please update soon!
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  • From Caldonya on April 27, 2008
    Oh NO! Poor Harry! and poor Snape too. I am only Hoping Harry dosen't catch something from Avery that Snape cant fix. Great long Chapter.
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