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Reviews for Circumstances of Change

By : SummerRequiem
  • From ReighHPFiction on August 12, 2012
    The extremely quick pace of this fic makes it difficult to believe. Also, I dislike it when people think that not being the perfect Gryffindor automatically translates to tons of piercings and tattoos. Let's face it, Harry Potter and Hermione Granger just aren't the type. You've taken them so entirely out of character that the story is just extremely unreadable to me. You really should put an OOC warning on this, because it's out of control.

    I mean, I've read stories where they take Harry from the character he is, to an entirely new person. But those authors took the time to sit there and develop his character properly so that it was a believable change. This story goes from one wildly out of character moment to the next. What, after six years of hating one another and treating each other like shit, The Silver Trio and Harry/Hermione suddenly are friends?

    Also, why do Harry/Hermione just take their word for it and trust them right off the bat? It's not in their nature as characters to do so, and it would be inherently stupid of both of them considering the war that's going on around them.

    I like Weasley bashing, and Dumbledore bashing, so that wasn't the problem. Even though I love Dumbledore in the real books. The story just makes no sense, because you haven't taken the time to do any proper character development.

    I'm sorry if this came off mean, because I didn't mean it to. I just really needed to voice the way I feel about this story, and this is what came out. I guess I was expecting a lot more, and I was disappointed. Because the idea behind this is a good one. The execution just left a lot to be desired. It isn't labeled as a crack fic so, I can only assume you were entirely serious when you wrote it.
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  • From thrnbrooke on March 11, 2009
    I am sooo going to miss this story!!!
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  • From Vittani on March 11, 2009
    Ok for some reason I'm sure I've missed a few chapters, cos I cant believe its the end already. Pouts. Really enjoyed the story. ^_^
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  • From Selera on March 11, 2009
    I only have one problem with this.. otherwise it's a lovely story.. it's seriously anti-climatic.
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  • From ANON - Lauren on January 08, 2009
    Your story is great I would love to know when you update. Could you please send me an email

    L
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  • From ANON - Michelle Wolf on January 05, 2009
    very nice and lots of fun. if you are not opposed to it i would like a more detailed sex scene next. Lily, James, and Sev threesome; never saw that coming but it is believible. bugger about the beinging Voldemort's gradson though. hope your arm heals up. i had the same problem awhile back. i'm a novelist and i was denied the one thing that brought me pleasure, writing! *weep* take it easy and be careful! if you care for a chat email me wingshinigami@gmail.com or find me on facebook! ^_^
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  • From foxeechik on October 11, 2008
    keep goin! i'm likin it!
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  • From atheenalupin on October 08, 2008
    wonderful as always! oh and by the way i like the way the characters change so often it gives them more an element of real life if you think about it because no one has the same personality their entire life because they grow and expernse deffernt things just like this characters!
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  • From Carmeleyes23 on October 08, 2008
    Get better soon!! Take care of the arm and wrist ok? Love the chapter
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  • From bananasforyou on October 07, 2008
    nice!
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  • From thrnbrooke on October 07, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 16!!
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  • From slashslut on October 07, 2008
    oh my god, you're just going to leave me hanging like this???!!! evil, evil. im DYING to know what happens next!!!!

    please add me to your email update list: pwfan626@aol.com

    read ya later!
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  • From erospandora on August 21, 2008
    Hey nice story, just wish i could figure out why dragon, and harry are already saying Love...


    ~Eros
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  • From ANON - Tsuki on August 16, 2008
    I can't say much about the story, but perhaps a bit of con-crit would work? =)

    Firstly, the story's rushed, you're bunching up craploads of ideas and such together. Plan it out, take your time writing it, it'd make it much easier to read.

    You have a few grammar mistakes here and there, mostly simple things, I'd suggest using a spell/grammar checker before posting.

    The plot and characters are completely random. Their personality varies slightly each chapter, and so much of is is unrealistic. Not killing him because coming of age was an important day? Voldemort would do anything to kill him, why should birthdays matter? I highly doubt that Lily Evans, somehow the daughter of the dark lord, could be powerful enough to put a memory charm of the greatest wizard of all time. Harry calling Snape "dad" after just reading that letter's just bizarre (note the random personality changes), continuing to call him Sev, being closer to him, and slowly working up to it would make more sense.

    Hope you don't take this too badly.
    -Tsuki
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  • From ANON - qwerty on July 28, 2008
    Good chapter!
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