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Reviews for This is the Way I Fall

By : graballz
  • From pittwitch on February 14, 2008
    Really should have been sleeping, or workiing, or something productive, but damn, got all wrapped up in someone's story! Will be waiting for the resolution of their little "situation". Not planning a Lost spinoff are ya?

    BTW ... quadruple gold stars. Dead on. ;)

    Thanks for sharing, Pitt
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  • From Roozette on February 14, 2008
    *sigh*

    Logged on to check on our boys... and no new chapter.

    This is me. Going to bed. Sad. Pathetic. Waving morosely at the computer in a desperate bid to ensure Harry and Draco know I am thinking of them.

    *sniff*

    :(
    Roo

    PS

    Plane crash = bad. Just in case you forget.
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  • From Roozette on February 13, 2008
    OK, so... Harry is going to go to the cockpit (hmmm...that's an awkward word ;P), discover what is wrong with the engine or whatever, and magically fix it. Draco, being the supportive boyfriend that he is, will stun the pilot because he annoys him, and sit there chatting with Harry while alternately filing his nails and making out with Harry. Depending on his level of unhappiness, Draco may Imperio the "staff" into waiting on him and Harry hand and foot. Ron, upon waking, will stumble into the bathroom where his head will get mysteriously flushed into the toilet and he will emerge with a blue face. *nods* That's about right.

    Oh God!!! I love it when Harry takes control. Rowling made him too much of a pussy most of the time, much as I adore him, and in the movies...well, Radcliffe has a perpetually vacant expression on his face. Is it any wonder I love my Draco? He at least has levels of PASSION in his facial expressions!

    Ha! I never thought of the fact they wouldn't have their wands on them. Damn muggles! Wait... This story gets more gripping as it goes! And, hey, if you get writers block... there's always Harry taking over the world with a band of demon monkeys!

    Kisses!
    Roo
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  • From gorgeousbowneyes on February 13, 2008
    Two chapters!! Argh, I really shouldn't be reading this right now, I've got so much work to get through, but oh well, it's good and I can't stay away!!!!

    I'm too tired to analyze this all that much, other than I really like it and can't wait for more. Oh and I didn't know the african-american guy was Muslim too, and you're right it would help a little with the middle east, but i don't think it would achieve all that much. I think no matter what we do there is going to be war there, and if it's not over land or oil, it'll be over water or some such thing. I'd explain my reasoning behind that more if my brain wasn't soooo exhausted, just that iran/iraq are like surrounded by these two big rivers and if they get into drought like us in Australia are, they'll be fighting each other for water.

    anyways, awesome fic, can't wait for more!
    ~gorgeousbowneyes
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  • From bananasforyou on February 13, 2008
    oh no i dont hate you just bc the cliffie and the plane...AND FRASIERs on right now i saw how you said something about boys. i looked up and their he was! more please!
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  • From thrnbrooke on February 13, 2008
    Soooo need chapter 12! What did Harry figure out?
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  • From bananasforyou on February 12, 2008
    im sry but god i hate you right now!!wtf happened!!!!
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  • From tiapotter18 on February 12, 2008
    omg what a serious cliffie! how cud u?!? at least u have a short deadline for the next chapter. when draco was talking abt the turbulence, i almost thought he had a scary dream, like in final destination, when the main character had that dream abt the plane. lol i loved that movie. cant wait for that update :D
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  • From Roozette on February 12, 2008
    *ponders*

    You already know we would all kill you if you DARED to pyhsically hurt our boys.... So.... Ah damn it. Screw optimism. Give me the next chapter!! *glares*

    However, in this chapter... *coos unbecomingly* Draco and Harry linking their hands together without a second thought? LOVED it! And Harry sitting in the middle because truce or no truce they might kill each other? I laughed! I really appreciate how you have the boys falling back into their routine without thought for Ron's perception. THAT shows the solidarity of their relationship more than anything.

    *whistles*
    *twiddles thumbs*

    So... when you uploading?

    Kisses!
    Roo
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  • From alleycat88 on February 12, 2008
    AH! Don't kill them! OH no! How DID Draco know!? How odd....its like final destination all over again! Lol. Sorry id dint review on the last two...school is a pain and has kept me from my real life..Thankies for updating!
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  • From QueenB on February 12, 2008
    Ch. 10 Please, let's not have a plane crash. That's just too melodramatic.

    "The blonde glared at Ron ferociously during Harry
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  • From QueenB on February 12, 2008
    Ch. 9 Actually, Draco and Harry's attitudes were rather startling. I don't like the idea that being in love means you turn your back on everyone else in your life. The fact that he was willing to turn his back on Ron and walk away from him even with his mother being sick was shocking and made me feel a trifle ill. Draco's response that he wanted Harry to go to England was just as surprising.

    Harry made friends in America; in spite of his upbringing, he's actually a very outgoing, gregarious person, making friends easily and quickly. But keeping them is the difficult part and he managed to do so even though he was part of a prophecy and taking part in a major war. Allowing his love for Draco to supersede everything else afterward was rather awful of him.

    Your lover isn't supposed to take the place of everyone else in your life--your mother, father, friends, family, etc. That's not what love is. It puts all the burden on them to be the focus of everything and everyone in your life and it isn't healthy.

    It reminds me of Homer Simpson declaring that the one thing he could give his wife that no one else could was complete and utter dependence. Marge replied that that wasn't a good thing but her husband disagreed. He couldn't afford to mess up with her because he'd be dead! THAT'S what love should be?!? You have to have it or it kills you? Screw that.

    So I'm glad they're going back to England; I'm just sorry it was Draco's decision.


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  • From thrnbrooke on February 12, 2008
    Oh this is not good! Do they have their wands on them? Sooo need chapter 11!!!
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  • From MisstressNicole on February 12, 2008
    ....

    And that is not speechless silence. That's angry silence.

    *fumes*
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  • From Roozette on February 11, 2008
    No no no no no. No awkwardness or anything. I thought this chapter was really well thought out and organized. I thought the conversation between Harry and Draco went brilliantly. Harry offering to walk away from Ron without even saying goodbye was JUST the reassurrance Draco needed that Harry was not diminishing his role in his life. Well played.

    I can see how the chapter seemed off to you, but I feel it is only because the ocnversation in itself was tense and uncomfortable for the people in between. There was a slight withdrawal from Harry after learning Ron and Hermione were engaged, and his pause over learning about Ginny? WHAT was that????? BUT the scene flowed well. It was just the emotions involved that made it seem slightly surrealistic - which, I imagine, is slightly how our characters felt.

    NO you may not stop writing this. I wouldn't want to kill you sometimes if I wasn't so invested in this story! Hmm... that sounds weird. Ah well. I think this story line is progressing beautifully and not that Harry has redeemed himself in my eyes I am quite eager to see them in Europe.

    I dreamt about this story last night. *sigh* Yes, yes I did. Dreamt that Harry was up visiting Molly while Draco waited in the living room with the rest of the Weasley clan. Things got tense, but rather than start a fight Draco simply left and flooed to the Manor. Harry came downstairs and was all hurt and angsty and refused the offer of spending the night at the burrow to follow Draco. Basically.... you MUST continue this story or... *ponders* OH! I'll hold a vote and have the other Coven girls attack you! Yep! Buhuhhahahaha....

    Loves you!
    Roo
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