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By : graballz

From Roozette on February 10, 2008
*deep cleansing breath*

Ok, I apologize for the book. Seriously, this chapter was VERY well written! I could SEE Draco flouncing off to the bathroom. I could SEE the LOOK on Harry's face as Draco rejected his presence. I could HEAR Draco crying into his pillow. I could SEE them cuddling on the couch. Itch-Bay!

But I get it. When distressed I like to throw things. Or break things. I throw a right temper tantrum before locking myself away and hiding from reality. So I feel for our boys. Scot used to bemoan the fact I have rather precise aim. *smirks* But I am SO GLAD Draco and Harry realize they are stronger together than apart. And Harry being able to sleep now that he had his Draco with him? Can you hear me saying "awwwww...."

And, silly girl, we Coven members don't give up on each other over one little disagreement. Of COURSE I still lvoe you! Now, go make our boys better and I'll call off the contrat on your head *evil smile*

Kisses!
Roo

PS.

SOOOO glad your daddy is ok!
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From Roozette on February 10, 2008
*grabs laptop*
*ponders*
*puts laptop down*

*grabs book*
*throws it at Gabz*

WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO OUR BOYS!!!!!!!
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From bananasforyou on February 09, 2008
wow poor draco. and poor tina. a shoot to the cunt and your to blame. that was so hilarious!
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From QueenB on February 09, 2008
Ch. 6 I can understand how Draco might rage out of control over such a subject. I hope Harry will smooth things over. But he's not the subtle Slytherin that Draco is. If the two had come earlier, they might pass off his words as drunken sputterings (like Tina, the bitch). However, this is going to be hard to cover.

That line about scraping the uterus out of the panties is gold! I may have to pilfer that one for my own use. ;D
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From QueenB on February 09, 2008
Ch. 5 I loved the talk between Harry and Draco. Even being lovers for a long time doesn't prevent misunderstandings and arguments. I just hate stories where people become lovers and just flow so easily together that they're always HAPPY. That sort of thing makes people sick.

The conversation later about whether they wanted to go to the party or not is priceless and also the sort of thing you expect from couples. "Do you want to go?" "I don't know. I do if you do." "Well, do you or not? I don't mind staying home but if you want to go, that's fine." "No, it's okay." "Well, what do YOU want to do?" etc., etc., etc. It drives me mental when I hear would-be customers doing it on the phone. Grrrrr, arrrrghh.

And, yes, I want to see Draco in that bra! Hey, maybe Harry could get him drunk and then put the bra on him when he's unconscious. No, that would be cruel. One of their friends could do it and take pictures! Or Draco could just don the bra himself in a moment of drunken partying. Oh, the posssibilities...
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From thrnbrooke on February 09, 2008
Sooo need chapter 7!!! Poor Draco! They sooo need to leave for their vacation and have an awesome time! (Glad your dad's okay!)
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From DracaMalfoy on February 08, 2008
Draca definitely said that you can't rape the willing. I remember saying that to you on YIM.

Glad to hear your dad's okay! *huggles* Thanks so much for all the heart felt birthday wishes. Go see my new post!

All my fangirly love,

Draca
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From MisstressNicole on February 08, 2008
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Misstress Nicole
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From potterlover on February 08, 2008
i actually laughed over the bon jovi reference. i'm totally obsessed with bon jovi, right down to the tatoos and absolutely loved the reference. yes, the title of the song is you give love a bad name. it's the first song i ever heard by him and have been addicted to him ever since. i just now sat down and read pray and dance back to back to catch up to this story. i love the way you write. it can be funny or emotional or powerful. i think you are fantastic. i just want to say thank you for writing such wonderful stories
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From Roozette on February 08, 2008
*lessens intensity of glare*

Ok, I forgive you. LOVED the party scene. Tina cracks me up! She reminds me of my cousin. If she were real, I would get her drunk and take her cosmic bowling with my friends!

As for my poor Draco *cuddles* Yeah, I knew going out after such an emotional interaction with Harry would probably end in tears. Damn it, now he's going to be all self conscious and defensive around his friends until he gets over his embarrassment. And shutting Harry out? *glares again* I get it, because I totally do the same thing, but it's HARRY! Come on! Harry hugs are magical! oh god, did I really just write that?

Moving on. Sorry about your daddy! I'll keep my fingers crossed that recovery goes so fantabulously that he sets new world records.

Kisses and Loves!
Roo
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From Roozette on February 08, 2008
*gives rabid fangirl death stare* (patented) What do you mean you can't tell me?!?

Fine. *sulks* I'll wait. Gabz, I seriously loved this chap!! The interaction between our boys was beautiful! And each conversation build upon previous conversations, reaffirming their commitment while they help each other recover from past issues. Woot for you!

Family Guy reference? LMAO! I remember that scene!!! Great parody of a...erm...parody. And yes, being drunk dialed was hilarious! I was reading that scene, getting ready to cuddle our boys, when Tina called. And I cracked up. I was out drinking and playing darts with some friends once and we all got just a little too out there and ended up calling quite a few people. The bartender loved us, but our friends were... well, the morning after was rather blurry actually. And I ended up sleeping with an ex *hangs head in shame* Promise me you won't let our boys do silly stupid acts of sexual deprivation with OTHER people no matter if they imbibe alcohol or not!

Kisses!
Roo
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From gorgeousbowneyes on February 08, 2008
OMG!!! Just found this lol. I've been just about as busy as Harry was with study and all, probably comparable as I only ever see out the window of my study wall and the ceiling of my bedroom atm. Study takes up waaaaaaaaaaaay too much time. At least I don't have a bf to neglect though, kinda bitter-sweet thought there. lol.
NEWAYS OFF OF STUDY

to the fic. I really really love that you are continuing this and that there is heaps more to come from the sounds of it!!! I absolutely love love love these fics. I can't wait for u to update. I was all like OMG i can't believe Arthur did that, and poor Narcissa, when I read about what happened to her. I've always liked Narcissa's character, especially as someone who didn't know what she was getting into when she married Lucius, or as a cunning manipulative bitch who's a perfect match for Lucius. She's very elegant in her own way, with her platinum blond hair, trim physic, etc. So to think of her as a young girl being raped by someone much older like Arthur Weasley is absolutely abhorrent.

So will they actually head off to Brazil? Will we see them at the party? I really hope so. More drunken people, lots of laughs. You know what I was thinking as we were getting into this, was that *possibly* someone from their past like Hermione or something should fly over and try to patch things up. And then as we got more into the story and it was revealed what Arthur did, I was thinking well mb they'll fly back to London for a time so Harry can storm up to Arthur and say something like 'is it fucking true? You bastard! How dare you even consider yourself a human being! You deserve to live in a hole in the ground, the house you have and your wife Molly are way too good for you, you don't deserve it! And your kids don't even know! How do we know you didn't do the same thing to them when they were twelve or sixteen!!! You freaking pedophile!'
LOL sorry kinda got into a rant there. rapists and pedophilia is a sore topic for me, I hate them so much they are the scum of the earth and should have the lowest most harshest place in hell reserved for them. I think it's even worse than murder because of the ongoing psychological trauma it causes a person.

OK well, eagerly awaiting more of this fic, I do so enjoy reading it, there's so much shit on the internet these days that calls itself fanfiction, I think the quality is going downhill, and it's nice to see a change in that when I read your fics! They get me re-enthused and re-motivated to read more fanfiction.

Great Chapters!
~gorgeousbowneyes

PS Extra long review considering I missed the first four chapters!!!
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From DarQuing on February 07, 2008
The first part of my review is for the first two fics in the series: Those were very good. There were some very hot scenes in all of them, especially the tango. Though, I can see why you might consider 'Patent Leather Miniskirt' to be a bit campy. :)

On to my review for this story: You are an evil, evil woman! :P Good story, but evil plot complication. :P
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From bananasforyou on February 07, 2008
wow that arguing and throwing stuff. then harry holding him, wow. kind of romantic in a sick kind of way.
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From alleycat88 on February 07, 2008
Wow...that story....it makes sense...but I think too much like Harry. I just cannot imagine Arthur Weasley raping and molesting ANYBODY! It makes me sad to know he did. I can understand why Lucius hates him now....I would too. But Molly? That was her cousin?! Does she not feel any injustice at all?! I mean he RAPED her! How could she stay with him?! Anyway excellent chapter! Can't wait for more!
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