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By : graballz

From QueenB on February 07, 2008
Ch. 4 Death Eaters, houses, family lines...it's all getting rather confusing for me. Then again I've only read one or two of the books. Still, Draco's reaction would seem to indicate the vengeful rage isn't something the Weasleys have a monopoly over. After a display like that, I wouldn't have been surprised if Harry had run away to let Draco cool down. Guess Gryffindor courage counts for something.
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From QueenB on February 07, 2008
Ch. 3 Dum dum DUM! Okay, I wasn't quite expecting something like this. But, while it makes Arthur Weasley a bastard, I don't see how it can deflect on the rest of the family. If Harry is willing to be fair, he won't carry any animosity over to Ron, Bill, Fred, George, Ginny and the others. After the initial shock, he'll try to do his best to be kind to Ron, especially if Ron doesn't know.
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From QueenB on February 07, 2008
Ch. 2 I don't mind sex in the closet although I always thought it would be rather awkward. There's also the problem of getting sticky stuff all over your clothes, ugh. But I suppose the boys were careful. That was smoking! I look forward to more whenever you get around to writing it.
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From Roozette on February 07, 2008
Merciful heavens! Could Harry be any more thick?! His reaction was perfectly understandable, but still.. Narcissa was a child!! And saying that all Death Eaters were rapists...um, hello... insult Draco's family much? And poor poor Draco. Confiding the most painful of familial secrets and getting that reaction. *Cuddles them both* Are they going to end up skipping their vacation and simply spend the nine days hiding out together cuddling?

This chap was very well written and sad to read. *glares at your muse* I know you said they were done with their lives in jolly old England, but is Harry going to confront the Weasley's? Or kill them? Whichever.

You must update immediately!!!

Kisses!
Roo
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From QueenB on February 07, 2008
Ch. 1 I remember at the end of "This is the Way I Dance" you had Draco wearing women's dresses when he and Harry went out dancing (and Harry screwing him while he was wearing only his dance heels, oh baby). Are we going to be seeing some of that again because Brazil is THE place for hot, scantily dressed women. Hubba hubba.
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From thrnbrooke on February 07, 2008
Sooo need chapter 5! But you would expect it from a DE not a mild mannered father of 7. But then again I read that some serial killers hide behind normalcy. Poor Draco!
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From MisstressNicole on February 07, 2008
Okay, so let me get this straight. He raped Narcissa to get back at Bella for wanting to stop Molly from getting with Arthur. Boy you really know how to throw in the twist. I think I would have been more satisfied with you saying he fancied her and she turned him down and he decided to take it anyway. But what you presented, my dear, leaves more questions then answers. And I noted that you titled it Draco's Version which leads me to think that you'll have another version or prehaps the truth presented in another chapter. I loved how you had Harry and Draco both having tantrums only to have the Slytherin's win out. But in the end it was really Harry that won because he got to hold the blond and calm him down, even if it was only to make him stop screaming. That's love. They're in love. They're so cute together. Oh, and I hate the cliffy and the short chapter.(just thought I'd let you know.) And I agree with Harry, it seems a little farfetched that Arthur would do such a thing but Draco is also right. I mean Harry should have chosen his words more carefully. I don't see Snape or even really Lucius raping anyone. Voldy and Pettigrew, yea. But not Lucius or Snape. Now the question here is, if Harry didn't love Arthur would he be so quick to deny it?

Nikki
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From bananasforyou on February 06, 2008
omg poor narcissa. omg awesome fucking 2 chaps and yea im back!
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From Roozette on February 06, 2008
Have to review one last time. So... because I love you tons and tons, I had to read your reviews. *shrug* I told you I have emotional issues.

I LOST it when I read thrnbrooks note. After that fabulous round of closet sex all she san say is "Now they have to do laundry!" Oh, I love her. Truly. I was so entertained by that.

Anyways, *cuddles Harry and Draco* best of luck with the next chapter!

~ Roo
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From MisstressNicole on February 06, 2008
I find that hard to believe. The bomb that Draco dropped that is. I'm going to have to read the next chapter before I make a solid decision. I mean I just can't believe that the sweet man that I've come to know through the movies and fiction would commit such a crime. As for the Slytherin tacts implored by both Harry and Draco. I actually though Harry was going to fall for the psudeo tears and laughed out loud when he said: "Tell me anyway." And then I got to the cliffhanger and was like, Now why the hell did she leave it there?

A/N to Nikki: If the he's delivering Sunday shoes he's got the wrong house. Lol. But the porn mags? He's definately got the right house. I wonder if the mail man really thinks that. I mean, is he really waiting for me to invite him in for a hot and sweaty round of fucking? Lol, I guess I'll have to ask him next time I see him.

And as for our game of IM tag, you're it. I feel like you're avoiding me. You've posted on the forum, updated you story but haven't been on IM once. Was it something I did? *sniffles*

Nikki
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From Roozette on February 06, 2008
Oohhh.... *nods* It actually makes a lot of sense. I mean, there had to be something more between the Malfoy's and the Weasley's than sheer dislike. Lucius actively tried to kill Harry for goodness sakes, and he was STILL more civil to him than the Weasley's in public. But oh... learning this the night before vacation. Yeah... not so good for our boy's love life. *glares*

Although *looks shifty* Ron has NEVER been one of my fav characters. And Ginny... not a fan. Molly has too many issues as a mother - why else would all her children try to leave her so fast and so far away? Poor Narcissa. There is no shame whatsoever associated with the crime, and I am very proud of her for rebuilding herself and establishing her own family.

As for your note... when I first read I was right(ish) about the angst, I was like "What? Harry is going to take over the world with demon monkeys to free Draco?" LMAO!!! Oh my poor poor boys. *glares again*

*looks shifty*
*winks at your muse*

Come on, you know you wanna fix it...

Long live the Coven!
Roo

PS.
We're not voyeurs. We're....umm... simply making sure they don't hurt themselves. Right. *nods* Some of those positions can be awfully contorting... We, as loving fans, are duty bound to drool..err... assist. Yeah.
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From thrnbrooke on February 06, 2008
Arthur raped Narcissa? Holy moly!!!!
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From alleycat88 on February 06, 2008
OH my god...WOW! Seriously? Im in shock....I need to know the story behind that. Good chapter dear.
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From MisstressNicole on February 06, 2008
Me? Stop reading? Because of angst? Not likely. There's something about this series that has enthralled me. Wow, I never knew that sex in a closet could be so fucking hot without them being locked in. LMAO, I am not a fangirl. Okay, so maybe a little. I loved the way that Draco fucked himself on Harry's cock. Impatient much? That's alright I don't mind. That was absoultely the stuff wet dreams are made of. LMAO, it's true. I wake up soaking wet, needing bob or the nearest man. *giggles madly* I wonder what the delivery man would do if I answered the door ass naked with an invitation for him to join me. Man, I love fanfiction.

Nikki
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From Roozette on February 06, 2008
lol - Oh my that was fabulous. I really wish we Coven girls could have installed a camera in their apartment by now. Not that, you know, I endorse voyeuristic tendencies or anything...

hehehehe.... Ok, I'll trust you with our boys. I don't know why, but I had the oddest thought about this story. Well, two, actually. First, I was trying to determine the angst (I worry!) and thought, "Hmm... wouldn't it be funny if Draco was arrested for drug smuggling?" Then when I got to your 'Things Not Allowed At Hogwarts' I thought, "Hmm... wouldn't it be funny if Harry decided to go after world domination with a band of flying monkeys in an effort to free Draco?" Yeah, I have emotional issues.

LOVED this chap. Being the dirty fangirl I am, I read it twice. Can't wait for Brazil!!!

Kisses!
Roo
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