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By : graballz

From ANON - tas on July 25, 2008
Hey Grabby, finally read the third installment. I read the 'magical wand' part and a big smile lit up my face, thinking of a certain Coven member and our chats we used to have. You sexy scenes were very .... hot. You should definitely have the boys and their toys in a later installment. lol. Loved the story. Even your end notes were storish with its length. lol. I had found myself skimming by some of those parts so I can get to the next chapter - what with all your cliffies?!

Miss you (god that sounds loverish doesn't it? lol).
~tas
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From gorgeousbowneyes on March 24, 2008
And that's the end of this story! I absolutely can't WAIT for more! LOL I glanced at some of the AN Note to someone else and saw that Roozette wants Harry and Draco to take of the world with flying demon monkeys, or something to that extent, and I could help but imagine Draco with mussed hair and a black witch's costume crying 'fly my pretties, fly!' and Harry sauntering in behind him in some tight black leather outfit and a collar wrapping his arms around Draco's waist as Draco cackled madly..... LOL. Very Wizard of Oz Wicked Witch of the West/East? I can't remember which one it is that wants to kill Dorothy exactly. Thought I had to share my mental imagery, lol.

Well, I'm off to read the other story I originally found on the new page, the Die one, and I'm hoping you don't mean kill them off literally lol.
~gorgeousbowneyes
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From gorgeousbowneyes on March 24, 2008
OH MY GOD HOW DID I NOT SEE THAT THIS STORY WAS UPDATED??????????????????????????????? I was looking through the 'new' stuff, and I saw This is the way we Die and I was like OMG OMG OMG Graballz must back or something how come I haven't seen the updates for This is the way I Fall??? I've been trolling the new section like every day!!! I must have missed it somehow! OMG I am sooooo excited to see this back!!!

Great news that you're no longer depressed! I hate depression, it seriously messes with you, my doctor thought I had it for a while there, but it was more like chronic fatigue and the anti-depressants didn't do a thing for me so I just stopped taking them after about three months. But I kept going back and saying I swear there's something physically wrong with me I can feel it and for about two and a half years I've been going around like that going in and out of the doctors before they finally found out what was wrong with me a couple of weeks ago - I have Poly-Cystic Ovarian Syndrome, which is where one or both of my ovaries don't release an egg properly and it gets caught and then makes the ovary get bigger and blocks the release of them, which also accounts for my missing periods, which they first tried to tell me was stress/depression/eating disorder related, but I was like I'm not stressed, I'm not depressed and although I look like a stick and wear size 6 clothes I actually eat like a horse, junk food all the time, kfc maccas, etc, im just a really active person. URGH! I kept telling them something was wrong and they just kept sending me away saying it was something else and now coz they missed it for so long, I'll probably never have children because it got so bad. Sorry I can't believe I just vented all that, but I dno I guess I needed to.

As for me mentioning you fic in a looking for ficz, I seriously can't even remember doing it, although you're welcome! I defs would suggest these ficz to anyone looking for a good read, im trying to force my good fanfic buddy to read them as well but she's too busy writing her own stuff lol.

And yay! They're going to save the plane and there will be no rotting corpses to think of! Go Harry! Go Draco! Go Ron! Can't wait to see what happens after they get to England. Oh and I loved the chapter title btw. I'm reviewing from the 2nd last chapter, and I'm just about to go off and read the last bit, then go over and read the new fic!

Happy Easter, good to see you back and writing! I'm also back at writing a little bit atm, I've got a new story up called Lord Voldemort's Slave, which is fully finished and written, just not fully posted! I'm excited to actually have it finished lol!

~gorgeousbowneyes
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From MisstressNicole on March 23, 2008
Dude, I meant to tell you when I called you while I was in Atlanta. I just remember as I read chapter 15...again. The walk that extends toward the plane (I may be wrong as my sister pointed out it could be the brand but it's what the flight attendent called it too) its a jetway. ^-^! I know I'm a dork but you love that about me.
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From vampirekisses on March 14, 2008
Such a great story! Loved it as much as the others.
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From DarQuing on March 14, 2008
This story sucked ass! You have no business writing!

J/K ;)

I liked it. It was a very good story. I can't wait for the 4th story in the series. :)
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From thrnbrooke on March 12, 2008
Sooo need chapter 16!!! I just bet she loved getting her "wand" back! It had a case!!! How wonderful!!! I loved it!!!
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From QueenB on March 10, 2008
Ch. 15 YOU didn't know Latin was a dead language?! Hoookay. Whatever.

Hey, I noticed Draco didn't give back that dildo. I'm betting that wasn't an oversight on his part. If that woman doesn't demand it back, I'm sure he and Harry will have a lot of fun with it. Of course, they'll have to deal with Molly Weasley and the uncomfortable presence of Arthur Weasley. But if the mood strikes...

I don't knew where all this talk of Demon Monkeys originated. But it didn't work for the Wicked Witch of the West; it won't work for Draco. Monkeys are probably easily distracted and get into food fights with each other. ;P

Great story and I'm looking forward to what happens in London.
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From Roozette on March 10, 2008
Queen: What do you mean what the heck about my Demon Monkey idea!!! I LOVE Demon Monkeys! Between Jumanji, Pirates, and the Wizard of Oz.... lol. No, the idea came to me when Gabz referrenced one of the "Things not allowed at Hogwarts" icons. The one promising not to take over the world with a band of Demon Monkeys is my fav and now the idea will not go away!

Ooosss... but Gabz, I agree with Queen's review. I loved the double dirty talk on the plane! Ron and Draco is a "wand" fight? PLease, no contest. Draco is far prettier. He would win. Although ROn is stockier, so maybe his girth... oh, eww, eww, eww. No thinking of Weasley like that! *hits herself with an Obliviate*

lalalalala the world is a beautiful place!

Kisses!
Roo
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From Roozette on March 10, 2008
YOU'RE BACK!!!!!! Oh my darling, how I have missed you!!!

And what's this??? Not one, but two chapters!!!!! Yeah! Oh God, they're back in the UK and... "This Is The Way I Break?" That sounds ominous. *glares threateningly* WHAT do you have planned for our boys? I like how you concluded this story. However, now I am really anxious for how Draco is going to deal, because you KNOW Ron will want them to stay at the Burrow. Ick and Ack.

But... Draco and Harry interraction on the plane? Can you say "aww..." So excited they are plugging through. You must update right away!!!

Kisses!
Roo
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From QueenB on March 09, 2008
Ch. 14 Even stellar sex can use a little variety every now and again. Toys, costumes, new places and positions just add such a wonderful dimension to things. Brownies with chocolate chips are good. Add whipped cream, ice cream and a cherry on top and you're really in business.

I nearly wet myself laughing when Ron was boasting about his wand being bigger than Draco's. The double entendre was priceless and, in another situation, I'm sure Draco would have had something very, ahem, pointed to say as a rejoinder.

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From gorgeousbowneyes on March 03, 2008
Hey,

hows it going? I haven't seen an update in such a long time, I was wondering if you're ok since you were on a road trip or something. You're probably just having fun and having a life, lol! I haven't been on AFF in such a long time either because this hasn't been updated and I have no wish to start following new stuff!! lol.

neways just thought id drop u a line and see how things are going, i really do miss reading this story!

xoxoxo ~gorgeousbowneyes
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From SParker on March 01, 2008
Well I'm just coming into this at #13 sans Author's Note, but I'm enjoying this
and rather pleasantly surprised you can write like this. What I mean is I've
encountered you when you review other people's work [..tad overzealous..] & your
earlier stories.

So to see such serious works, threw me for a loop, ''Is THIS the same Graballz
who reviews???''..you get what I'm sayin'? O_o

ANYway, you have def' evolved into an author worth noticing and recommending to others. I'll stop right there before I ramble.

By the way, I get the suspicion that the girl who gave Harry her *ahem* 'magic
wand' on the plane, was you? :-)
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A little question, I don't know how some authors feel about another author's story
being mentioned, but...were you by ANY small chance inspired by Gloria B's
story, 'Never A Memory'? Because she does an AWESOME story of Draco being sent to
America with amnesia [..with religious tones..] and pulls it off.
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From alleycat88 on February 17, 2008
OH NO! then i shall wait my love! I hope you get it fixed soon!
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From Roozette on February 17, 2008
It's karma. That's what you get for mocking Harry and his merry band of Demon Monkeys.

Gabz!! NO!!! *insert mental image of me shaking my fist at the sky and wailing in anguish* Man that sucks about your laptop. I feel for you babe. Mine went down for about a week once and between school and the internet... I was ready to pull out my hair. BUT... you're on a cross-country thingy? How fun is that! Are you by yourself, with your bf, your family? How's your daddy recovering?

Have a fun trip and know we will miss you loads and loads. I promise not to throw any random shoes or books at you in the mean time. *blows kisses to your laptop* Hope everything gets resolved soon.

Kisses!
Roo
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