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Reviews for Taking Advantage

By : EmL
  • From LydiaBright on February 09, 2008
    Absolutely loving it thus far. I'm amused at your chapter titles as well, though I wish the last chapter was just a little longer, mostly because I just want to read more!
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  • From calaminehorn on February 09, 2008
    She updates quickly, Hallelujah.
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  • From shelagh on February 09, 2008
    Great work Em. I love the story and look forward to your next post.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on February 09, 2008
    This is great fun and I love that she is falling into his clutches so nicely. lol I can't wait for their wedding (night) and the weeks after. Please update soon, okay? Thanks!
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  • From Utopia on February 09, 2008
    My beta lives with me, but as she's a tad poorley I'm having to catch errors completely on my own, and that's a lot harder than it sounds! Especially as I'm dyslexic and it looks perfectly fine to me; yet I can beta someone else's work 100% because I don't know their writing style so intimately... but I found reading the fic backwards helps as it removes the context of the sentences. I start at the beginning of the last sentence and read to the end, then the start of the 2nd to last sentence and read to the start of the last.. ect.

    I thought you said this was going to be stereotypical? The only stereotypes I spotted were that Pansy was annoying; that Ron hasn't pulled his head out of his backside; and that Ginny knew it all along! The whole Malfoy-secretly-loves-her-but-is-acting-like-he-doesn't is new for me, its frequently the opposite way around; their elopement before the law is new; leading Skeeter to do their bidding is new (they normally avoid her like the plague). I have a hatred of stereotypes - and I certainly don't hate this!!

    My only complaint is that there are just 10 chapters and that I am waiting impatiently for 11, 12, 13 and beyond!
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  • From ANON - distinctlyME on February 09, 2008
    omg....wow. yay!!!!!!! I just started reading this today. and I have already read everything and am addicted to say the least. I adore, I love it, I cherish it. and I can't wait until the next post. I'm just begging to the depths that you won't make me or any of your other adoring fans wait too long.

    p.s. Rons a right arse who needs to learn how good Hermione was to hold onto. stupid git. and Draco, oh draco *love sigh* if only he were real and not fiction and my name were Hermione Granger. oh the things I'd do to him. but shhh don't tell me fiance on me. lol
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  • From miahdrake on February 09, 2008
    I really enjoy this story! And I REALLY like the fact that you update regularly.
    I can't wait to read more.
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  • From miahdrake on February 09, 2008
    I really enjoy this story! And I REALLY like the fact that you update regularly.
    I can't wait to read more.
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  • From chickaboo on February 09, 2008
    Oh yeah. Take that Ronald Weasley! lol That was great, I can't wait for more!
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  • From EmL on February 09, 2008
    Woops, it didn't occur to me to add the other diners' reactions. That was a good idea! I was so focused on getting them into the dark hall for more making out before I sent them home to fight with Ron that it never even crossed my mind. I have been planning Pansy's cah-razy reaction from the beginning, though, so we'll get some reaction at least. I think a fleet of howlers is in order, and if I didn't like kitties so much, I'd consider having Pansy go a little Fatal Attraction, but I'll definitely take any more good ideas you have. :)
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  • From whogirl on February 09, 2008
    YAY! They kissed! oh, I can't wait to read about them in the restaurant and what everyone's reaction is. Thank you so much for frequently updating this :)
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  • From lily69 on February 08, 2008
    I just read this for the first time tonight...I like it! I love how Draco is using his Slytherin ways to get Hermione. Keep up the great writing!
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  • From chickaboo on February 08, 2008
    Well, you may have never written one, but that was a wonderful first kiss. Well done. I can't wait for more, this is a great story!
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  • From ANON - Lisa on February 08, 2008
    Good story, I can't wait to read more. I always love it when the man chases the woman.

    I like your title for the last chapter, too. "The one..." I'm scenting a Friends fan.

    If you labelled all your chapters like that, it would be a lot easier when going back to find the particularly delicious parts.

    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Genevi on February 08, 2008
    About the kiss... No need to worry anymore it is perfect as it is! It is as I think a first kiss between them and in these circonstances should be! By the way, I am out of order here but I must say that I like your story very much and I await eagerly each chapter!!
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