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By : EmL
  • From kazfeist on February 08, 2008
    Hah! Beautiful job, so far! Can't wait to see the rest. Chapter lengths are nice and short, you've got a clear idea of how you want this to go...they're both adults and attractive: what's not to like? If you want some beta help, I'd be honored: kazfeist@gmail.com. :D
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  • From QueenofPutrescense on February 08, 2008
    Yum!
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  • From on February 08, 2008
    WTF? Nononononononoononononononono.....you cannot end it there. I demand another chapter!!! NAOW!!!

    *pouts* pretty please?
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  • From nonentity on February 08, 2008
    Whoops, that would indeed be a good reason for children not to be mentioned in the prenup. I quite like the section on her relationship with Ron, and her admitting that part of her wants to see what could happen with Ron, but moving forward with what's best for her. That Ron's not trying to be evil and selfish, just that his emotions towards Hermione are complicated. Anthony's huffiness is a hoot, and it's incredibly sweet that Draco knows her favorite chocolatier (sp?). Draco's maneuvering is well thought out. Thanks for answering the question about what his ultimate goal is, btw.

    You actually write quite cleanly--I thought your fic was beta-read. Your pacing is quite good too. Every scene is either characterization or pushing the plot forward.
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  • From eileenmilner on February 08, 2008
    thoroughly enjoying the story. I love the way you are showing
    Draco's very Slytherin side. Brilliant, look forward to reading
    more. Best wishes,
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  • From chickaboo on February 08, 2008
    Poor Hermione, you can practically see her head still spinning. lol Great updates and I can't wait for more!
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  • From QueenofPutrescense on February 07, 2008
    Hooray for all the updates! Great job, I love these stories too and your writing is wonderful - it's very funny and has great pacing. Sigh, I wish you could write it as fast as I can read it. :)
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  • From Jerrillith on February 07, 2008
    Good start, I can
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  • From pattilarr on February 07, 2008
    I saw this at the 1st chapter - it got my interest.... I'm hooked!!
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  • From nonentity on February 07, 2008

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  • From Emmylovedraco on February 07, 2008
    Wow'' great story please update soon
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  • From nonentity on February 07, 2008
    A courtship starting before the marriage law takes effect. Huh. I love Anthony Goldstein as a contender for Hermione's affections. And there's no such thing as too many marriage law fics. ;-) I'm glad elopement was considered an option, and Pansy is actually considering the politics. Pansy should probably be described as "perfectly annoying" instead of "perfectly boring"--she's too screechy to be ignored!
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  • From Laurachan on February 07, 2008
    Interesting beginning ^^ I hope to read more soon!
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  • From chickaboo on February 07, 2008
    Great start, I can't wait to read more! I love the marriage law fics and I'm excited for another one. Hope you can update soon!
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  • From bananasforyou on February 07, 2008
    that is good so want more please!!
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