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By : EmL
  • From LizzieWizzie on September 15, 2017

    I love this story. Draco is scheming but in a very sweet and genuine way. I can't wait to see how this continues <3. Is there any way to get email notifications for this story? 


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  • From ANON - Bella Principessa on April 27, 2015
    I know it's been awhile since this was written, but I'd love to see it continue. I am such a sicker for the marriage law trope.
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  • From tanyaflorio on March 29, 2010
    please please finsih this story please!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - martha on January 22, 2010
    oooooo. Great story. This story is amazing because it takes the marriage law idea (which I love) and turns it on it's head making it origional. Please update this story soon as I'm curious as to what will happen next.
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  • From on November 10, 2008
    I just read the whole thing so far. I love the idea of this story & where it's going - BUT I see you haven't updated in a long time. Are you continuing the tale? I hope so!
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  • From margaritama on October 21, 2008
    I love how slytherin Draco is....yummy
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on April 17, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Kate on March 28, 2008
    Very nice story!
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  • From ANON - Lena on March 28, 2008
    I really really enjoy this story.
    I hope you continue writing!
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  • From ANON - A naughty mouse on February 24, 2008
    I LOVE THIS STORY!! Please update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - julia on February 23, 2008
    i love this! write soon!!
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  • From kazfeist on February 13, 2008
    Hah! No one ever said Draco was dumb! And I can't wait for Hermione to realize he really does love her. :D
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on February 12, 2008
    Hi there! First, you've got me dying to read the last chapter now. lol I still want to read all the thousands of steps in between, but you've got me all curious. ha ha ha Next, I would love to help you out with that chapter, but I am crap at raunchy. I can do tender, hot and a bit naughty, but not really raunchy. I enjoy reading it, love to visualize it, but can't write it to save my life...sigh.

    And for this chapter - That was interesting...all these years in love/lust with her and he never even tried to learn about muggles...sheesh, just like a man! lol. I loved Ginny's stance on Ron and Luna's honesty about the whole thing. I like the way you wrote their easy friendship and that she felt she could confide in them. But, it was VERY telling that she admitted to lust. ;-) Can't wait for that wedding night; he's going to rock her little world! And, I look forward to seeing how his research pans out with the Grangers at dinner.

    Thanks for updating quickly. More soon, okay? :-)
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  • From nonentity on February 12, 2008
    I don't see a problem with asking for help as long as you give proper credit and work with the other author to make sure the story's consistent in details and tone.
    I'm not sure if I commented around Ron before, but I don't think his confession is all that bad--it takes a lot of guts to talk about one's uncommendable character flaws. His big crime was not telling Hermione before that they had no chance, especially when she obviously hadn't moved on after a few months.
    I really like Draco's attempts to learn about muggles, although learning from a book is bound to lead to disaster! I also liked that that he made the efforts to resolve the situation with Pansy amiably. Melting Hermione and eating her on a cracker? I like that particular turn on phrase.
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  • From ANON - luvmonger on February 12, 2008
    love it!!! can't wait till the wedding! this is ana amazing story. as for writing your last chapter already... I think that you will make it all work as long as you stick with it.
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