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Reviews for Hungry Thirsty Crazy

By : AndreaLorraine
  • From kazfeist on July 21, 2008
    A wonderful update...I really like how you're bringing Lucius along emotionally. Even though the timing is sort of compressed (all in two weeks), the intensity of all the emotional breakthroughs seems 'right'. Well done! :D
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  • From kazfeist on July 21, 2008
    Narcissa's read the book, and figured things out, and she's retracted the divorce proceedings. :D
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  • From kazfeist on July 21, 2008
    "He's got hair like gold and eyes like the sky, and a really big package. You'll make lots of babies with that one." Or words to that effect (my mother was from Venice, and we spoke Italian at home, while I was growing up, until she died when I was ten). I had to stop and review. A lovely story so far. You've made Lucius' situation one full of poignancy and pathos. Well done! :D
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  • From elladee on July 21, 2008
    What a great way to end the chapter! This story gets better and better with each chapter. I'm looking forward to the moment when Hermione and Lucius can finally stop holding back (Healer Smythe's package will make sure that happens soon I hope)!
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  • From AlexandraMalfoy on July 21, 2008
    I have no idea what you did since the last chapter but it certainly paid off. It was fantastic. Sensua, hot, sexy, and definetly worth waiting for. Oh finally they got their stuff together. I can't wait for the exploration of the 36 condoms! 36? I guess the amount lasts two nights? Or will Lucius make us laugh with being a little clumsy and destroying one by one? Oh I can see that scene, both in bed, both needy and turned on beyond imagination and then none of them capable of putting the latex over his crown jewels. Hilarious!
    Well whatever you will come up with I'm going to check it out and I'm sure it will be cool.
    LOL, Alex
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  • From ffpoisongirl on July 21, 2008
    I can't tell you how happy I was to see you had updated. It really shows you that spent a month writing this chapter; it was done very well. I have to say, I'm a little jealous of Hermione (and not just for getting Lucius); Crookshanks loves her when she comes back from a trip. My cat pees in my room and ignores me. He's a charmer.
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  • From LadyofClunn on July 21, 2008
    Now that was hot. I can
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  • From helenesnape on July 21, 2008
    Whoo! That was HOT! While it was exciting to see them finally get some action going, I am really glad you have decided for them to be safe about it; HIV/AIDS is definitely not a disease to be cavalier about.

    Bravo to you for making their protection have such an interseting mix of muggle and magical means. I'm supposing this will mean more in-depth lemons in the upcoming chapters? Although, I certainly enjoyed the lemony goodness in chapter 14.

    This is an excellent story. I have been waiting a long time for this update. It was great! Thanks so much! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on July 21, 2008
    This was a great chapter FBS. I'm so glad they got the go ahead, I do actually love your story, it's mix of heartache and romance is exactly my kind of story. I cannot wait for the next chapter!
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  • From Heidi191976 on July 21, 2008
    This was a great chapter. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - Jesse on July 21, 2008
    BRAVO!!! Great chapter!! I am so pleased that you updated and that chapter made up for the time it took you to update.
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  • From ANON - Anguloce on July 21, 2008
    oh my god absolutely delicious! your writing is nothing short of intoxicating.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 21, 2008
    OMG!! That was soooooo worth the wait; god I love this story!!!
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  • From ANON - ChaosProphet on July 21, 2008
    great chapter. relatively light-hearted, sweet, very sexy. i enjoyed how you broke things off between hermione and ron - it seemed both realistic and true to JKRs characterizations. ending it on condoms and magical safe-sex spells was great - is that a subtle promise for more lemons in the next installment??? heres hoping for a romantic dinner followed by great sex, and lots of it!
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  • From sweething10 on July 21, 2008
    Good heavens are you good at this! LOL! I absolutely love your Lucius. So thoughtful and caring. Who knew the big bad Death Eater could become a loving human being? Ron really pissed me off, but I'm glad because it gave Hermione the push she needed to continue on with Lucius. Way to go Smythe for sending that package. I can't wait to see Lucius's response to a condom! LMAO!
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