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Reviews for The Lion and the Serpent

By : emilywaters
  • From SoftObsidian74 on February 16, 2008
    Dammit Draco! Uggh..I hope he's gonna be alright..those Gryffindors are in for a world of hurt when Harry finds them. I'm glad Calixa cares enough to go rescue him. She's a rather complex character I think. You had me cracking up when Harry told Draco no rose petals....another great chapter. Update soon : )
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  • From thrnbrooke on February 16, 2008
    Should have taken the collar with him. I'd have made it into a bracelet or something. Draco has too many enemies. *sigh* At least Cali is wearing her bracelet. It should go off. Harry go prove you're not working for Voldemort! Go save them!!! Sooo need chapter 24!!!
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  • From QueenB on February 16, 2008
    Ch. 22 Trust a Slytherin like Calixa to feel no gratitude that she's not rotting in a cell someplace. Since she feels that Harry is a menace no matter what, maybe he should slam her in a dark crypt if only to keep her from plotting again with her little gang.

    She is probably wrong about his sentimentality in sparing her, however. Harry may be adhering to that old adage: "Keep your friends close but your enemies closer." Now that Calixa's friends know he's on to them, they may be far more reluctant in future to get involved with her. Let's see how she deals with being the lone outsider. (And I wish Draco would just keep away from her! Didn't her botched assassination plot show what a twisted little loser she is? Sheesh!)

    I almost forgot about Harry's family, the Dursleys. They're easy to ignore if an author doesn't write about them directly. Thanks for the reminder.
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  • From QueenB on February 16, 2008
    Ch. 21 I can understand why Harry would have scars, given everything he's suffered. But the enigmatic comment about family makes no sense. Harry has no family who has survived Voldemort and his cronies...does he? And is he seriously trying to claim that the first and only person he's ever fucked is Draco? Somehow a virginal Harry doesn't fit with the creature you've created here. I can't believe he would hold himself from pressing the flesh even if just to relieve an itch.

    Still, if you are trying to create the idea of a Harry so obsessed with Voldemort and so tightly reined in that he reacts only to cruelty and brutality, then a life lacking even in basic sexual contact would seem to fit. I hope that's something that would be corrected in the future--not necessarily with Draco.
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  • From QueenB on February 16, 2008
    Ch. 20 That was a weird and awkward conversation. For a moment there, I was worried that Draco was going to start tickling Harry.

    I wonder what it was about touching Harry that set him off. Then again, that could be it. It's one thing to offer comfort to his property if that keeps Draco from whining or hurting himself. It's another for Draco to be playful as if Harry were a friend...like Ron.

    Hmm, was that it? Did the comfortable cameraderie remind Harry of Ron? The fact that it's the man who tricked Ron into killing himself might be the trigger that enrages Harry. I hope he doesn't take that anger out on Draco.
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  • From thrnbrooke on February 15, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 23! She's right and she's wrong. I don't think he's the future Dark Lord. I do think he'll take out Voldemort.
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  • From Nikte on February 15, 2008
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on February 15, 2008
    So delicious..you came up with a perfectly plausible and sound foundation for one mother of a S&M relationship. Harry's mark craving power/pain/cruelty, the bond demanding obedience and punishment when necessary, and Draco's Mark demanding pleasure in pain ::fanning my little pain slut self:::

    It's funny, as much as I hate Calixa, she does know and understand Harry's darkness, although she misinteprets his motives and intentions. I hope Harry can control himself and Ms. Cain and her group stay out of his and Draco's way. I've never been a fan of submissive Draco, but this Draco is so tragic, open, and frankly sexy as a submissive that it's impossible not to like him. And yay! for happy endings.
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  • From Dezra on February 15, 2008
    Damn, now I feel bad for Harry. Is there going to be a happy ending to this?
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on February 15, 2008
    I LOVE this story so much Emily : ) Thank you for writing, please keep writing it. So Draco was Harry's first? Wow, what a first and what a way for it to go down. Poor Harry. It's interesting that he refuses to feed the Mark's demand for cruelty/pain/power...I'm sure sometimes he will fail at that. Their relationship is quite interesting now to say the least. There's this dark sexual undercurrent that's fascinating to watch to see how it plays out. Yay for the hair grabbing and Draco's "thank you" :o. I wonder what Hermione would think of this development and wonder what members of the Resistance have planned..I guess they can't do much, but something tells me danger is lurking close by. Can't wait until your next chapter...
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on February 15, 2008
    What the hell just happened! Draco must have hit a nerve....was it the fact that Harry just realized how vulnerable he is? Or maybe something Draco said about the final battle and Voldemort? I'm dying to know what all that was about...and WOW at Harry taking Draco to bed and holding him...oh and did Draco get something sexual out of Harry smacking him or was that a relief as a result of the bond? Good chapter...
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  • From hpn827 on February 15, 2008
    That was a nice VDay gift. Too bad it had to end so soon.
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  • From Omnni on February 14, 2008
    Love it, hope there be more soon.
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  • From helewisetran on February 14, 2008
    poor Draco, in a way, he kinda has what he wish for though. Hope thing get better between him and Harry
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  • From Leentjef on February 14, 2008
    very very good story
    keep going and post soon
    bye bye
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