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Reviews for The Lion and the Serpent

By : emilywaters
  • From Dezra on February 13, 2008
    I have a hundred questions about Harry. But I suppose that I'll have to wait to have my answers. Thank goodness you write so fast.
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  • From helewisetran on February 13, 2008
    sure take Harry long enough. Poor Draco, all he need is some comfort.
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  • From Mitamay on February 13, 2008
    Woah, this has gotten very good! I can't wait for the next chapter! I'm really feeling sorry for Draco, though...wonder what Harry's gonna do to him? EM
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  • From on February 13, 2008
    I'm still reading it. It's an interesting take on a Harry gone evil sort of fic. I like it so far. Just interested in how it'll progress.
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  • From kalaway on February 13, 2008
    It's an interesting direction. I've never seen anyone go quite that way, making Harry almost Snape-like, rather than just evil or pissed. I don't know if I like it, but I don't dislike it and it's written well.
    I liked "Cali", goddess of death lol.
    I don't understand why Hermione is there. If she's still a student then how is Harry a teacher? She obviously couldn't have been held back like Malfoy. I don't see Harry accomplishing anything academically that she did not, at least nothing that would leave her in the dust.

    It's all just a bit bare bones for my taste though. Dark fics are usually best when there's more meat in them, something to hook onto so that it feels balanced--a depth of emotion that you can connect with. It's all just quite cold, which I realize is probably purposeful but nonetheless. The more dialogue driven style just feels a tad thin and leaves me with a lot of whys and hows for which the prose doesn't point to resolution.
    I'll keep reading though! Please keep writing.
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  • From thrnbrooke on February 13, 2008
    I sooo need chapter 19!! I feel sooo bad for all three of them. Though I fear for Draco I think I pity Harry! Sooo need more!
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  • From Dezra on February 13, 2008
    I'm still here and still enjoying your story. I am very happy at how fast you update. Great story so far. I feel so bad for Draco. Is Harry going to give him SOME leniency? Draco did try to defend him at one point, he even asked to be obliviated so he could leave. Poor Draco.

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  • From stargirl77 on February 12, 2008
    This story is just getting better and better! And I love how often you update, everything's just amazing and I hope to see Ch. 19 up there soon!
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  • From LarienMiriel on February 12, 2008
    o.O' heh, i really wasn't thinking harry would be following him around- but i guess he would wouldn't he? he's not always going to be so evil right? **looks anxiously around**
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  • From Cloud646 on February 12, 2008
    I hope that when/if harry gets back to normal, that draco doesn't just accept a simple apology for the treatment he's endured. I understand that he has done bad things, however, nothing can justly warrant what he has been put through. Harry should have to work for any kind of forgiveness from draco, because draco has been through enough to earn forgiveness from harry for his past transgressions...whereas harry has violated draco in the worst way; a simple "i'm so sorry" shouldn't be enough for draco, and i sincerely hope that it won't be.
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  • From helewisetran on February 12, 2008
    as the story process, Harry turn into Snape more and more
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on February 12, 2008
    Of course I'm still here! Not leaving you until this story is finished, and then after that I'll stalk your other ones! I'm starting to feel torn about this whole Slytherin house/Harry situation. Harry is dark, even if it is for the right reasons...although I don't like Calixa, I think I can why they would think the things they are thinking about Harry. They are, after all, only children, and if we think back to Harry and his friends, they thought the worse about Severus Snape and look how wrong they were. Harry's a little batty, and I hope something happens in his relationship with Draco to bring him back to reason or at least make him a bit more like his former self. I hope he doesn't hurt Draco too much...I'm sure we haven't seen the last of the Resistance though...
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  • From hpn827 on February 12, 2008
    Thanks for the updates
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  • From thrnbrooke on February 12, 2008
    Oh I knew something like that was going to happen! He was just tooo willing to let Draco visit with her. Practically throwing him to her. And he did tell Draco that he'd never be able to harm him. This is bad. Very very bad! I hope Harry was there for the whole thing so that he heard everything. Otherwise he just might really hurt Draco when he punishes him! I sooo need chapter 18!
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on February 12, 2008
    Ha! I knew Harry knew something was up with that Calixa bitch! And yea, it's official. I don't like her and she's up to no good. I can see how people would think that somehow Harry and Voldemort are linked, especially with how he's acting and the cloud that's hanging in the air but this girl is just no good and wouldn't be even if that situation didn't exist. I just hope Harry doesn't hurt Draco too bad.
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