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Reviews for The Lion and the Serpent

By : emilywaters
  • From SoftObsidian74 on February 10, 2008
    Wow, OK, this story is just pulling me in deeper and deeper. I like how you had the final battle go down, with Neville dying and Harry charging Voldemort.Very interesting how you describe him spreading, like a virus over everything. I wonder if that's what's infecting Calix or if she's just naturally like that. What's up with Hermione knowing about Harry's undergarments and sleeping with him in his bed, asking him to take off his hoodie? Are they "together" or bed buddies or something? That would be interesting to say the least. It was kinda deep hearing Harry ask Hermione to "just let him burn", he does want to punish himself...I hope he isn't infected with Voldemort's evil essence or something...so good...keep it coming : )
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  • From Dezra on February 10, 2008
    This is a really interesting story so far. I can't wait to find out if there is anything that can be done about the encroaching darkness that Harry unleashed accidentally.
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  • From thrnbrooke on February 10, 2008
    Why wouldn't he remove the hoodie? Let him burn? I sooo need chapter 12!!!!
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  • From bananasforyou on February 10, 2008
    goss thats incredible but also insane!
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on February 10, 2008
    Oh damn..this Calixa girl is bad news. She only confirms why Harry is treating Slytherins the way he is...I hope Draco stays away from her, but something tells me, he's going to run into her a lot. Did I sense some sexual tension between them? I wonder what she means when she says there are ways around the bond for alluding mind penetration? Still loving it : )
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  • From thrnbrooke on February 10, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 11! Cali is going to try to use the bond against Harry. She thinks Draco will become the perfect weapon. Will he?
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on February 10, 2008
    So what's up with Calixa? Interesting OFC...I'm glad she gave us some insight into the new world order at Hogwarts...Gryffindors, vindicative and cruel? oh for shame! I'm sure Harry had something to do with that, what a great role model he's being. I'm glad he's giving Draco his own quarters and not being a total asshole to him..ok, off to Ch. 10.
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  • From kawanale on February 10, 2008
    Dang, that is some scary and angry Harry stuff. So Ron is dead because he touched that necklace. Hmm, I'm not a fan of dark and scary H/D, but I have to say I am fascinated, and frankly this is a different Harry that I've been reading the past couple months. Nicely written story, thus far.
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  • From thrnbrooke on February 10, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 9!!! This chapter explains sooo much!
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  • From Poppendol on February 10, 2008
    Okay, I've decided my previous commentary should be ignored. Your portrayal is simply wonderful. Please keep it up.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on February 10, 2008
    Yay!! You update so quick, I'm figuring you already have this story completed. This was an interesting chapter. At least Harry has moved from not sure if he wanted to kill him to not caring if he lives..that's progress, lol. Who would have thought that Hermione would wind up being Draco's advocate? She's right about the unforgivables, and I"m glad she stopped him from deliving it. The beating seemed brutal, but it also seems like Harry is either punishing himself by punishing draco or he's trying to work out some issues by keeping draco's blood on his hands. Their interactions are complex to say the least...I'm loving this so much. Keep posting quick.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on February 10, 2008
    Wow, powerful chapter. Harry is right, Draco obviously had no regard for life when he did that, it was so meaningless how Ron died. I was holding my breath though at the way Draco attempted to kill himself. He really wanted to suffer for what he did I suppose. It's a good sign that Harry stopped him and from the sounds of it, sounded panicked at the thought of him dying. I'm sure that won't stop him from making him suffer though. I wonder how Draco got Lily's locket?
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  • From Poppendol on February 10, 2008
    Hi, I actually waited to review this story until there were a few more chapters up because I'm a little torn about your story. First off, you're writing is really good and you're capturing Draco's and Harry's turmoil very well. But what irks me is the lack of backstory, it raises a lot of questions. That said, the hints and clues you leave are tantalizing. In short, I really do like your story, please keep it up.
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  • From helewisetran on February 10, 2008
    Love chapter 6 ending. Is that mean Harry will make an effort to be nice to Draco from now on?
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  • From stargirl77 on February 09, 2008
    This story is very interesting. Can't wait to read more!
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