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Reviews for The Lion and the Serpent

By : emilywaters
  • From ANON - sp on April 06, 2008
    Just finished your story. You are a wonderful writer and should continue producing as often as possible.
    Thank you
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  • From ANON - Moyima on March 29, 2008
    Fantastic story! I really enjoyed it! Read it in one setting, too! Couldn't put it down!
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  • From LostPetunia on March 09, 2008
    Oh my goodness! I started reading this at fou o' clock this morning and it's now almost nine. Your story ensnared me; I feel completely in love with your characters and their world. Your unique take is refreshing- at times you had me crying, screaming, and afraid of what the next chapter would bring but I was so caught up in the roller coaster ride that I couldn't stop. Thank you for writing this and I'll most definately be looking for the sequel. Now I have to rush along before I'm late to church....
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  • From Leentjef on March 06, 2008
    I AM SO GLAD YOU ARE WRITING AN SEQUEL
    KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND POST SONN
    BYE BYE
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  • From IncessantDarkness29 on March 06, 2008
    I started reading this yesterday. It took me into the wee hours of the morning until I couldn't keep my eyes open any longer and I had to give it up and get some sleep when I hit chapter 35. You will understand, then, that I was extremely overjoyed to find this story finished when I came back to it today.

    I love finding a fic at the right time, and I seem to have come across this one at the perfect time.

    Since I have yet to review, I shall leave a relatively long review that shows a little of what I thought of this fic.

    1. I absolutely hate Cali. I don't care if her intentions and actions absolve her in the end, I don't like her one bit.

    2. The ending, the epilogue, was absolutely perfect.

    3. I took an odd like to the submissive and beaten down Draco, and I found his wish for acceptance from Harry to be his most endearing quality. It was something that invoked a sense of pathos I suppose, but not that, it wasn't really pity, and yet it was heart-wrenching, Draco's emotions.

    4. The most brilliant part of the entire fic for me was the backfiring of the healing spell. I think it was very symbolic of Harry's inherent goodness, and I found it to be a brilliant plot twist.

    5. Dark!Harry is a sexy Harry, and I especially love your portrayal of Harry, so smart yet ill-tempered, witty and powerful.

    6. Hermione in this story had the perfect counter-balancing effect to Harry and all of the darkness. And in that way I found that I liked and even took to a character that would normally just piss me off.

    Overall I think this was a well thought-out and well written fic. I found it tragic that Hermione doesn't really get much absolution in her life, but I loved all the little details that made this fic so unique, and I'm glad that I decided to read it despite the daunting idea of having to go through 44 chapters.

    Well done.

    I'll be keeping my eye out for more fics from you in the future.

    - Incessant_Darkness
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  • From Diane on March 05, 2008
    That had to be the sweetest ending. I think I'm going to cry. There's a typo in Harry's vows and I wouldn't say anything if they weren't so pretty. I was really looking for a happy ending and I got more than I thought. That was excellent.
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  • From Nikte on March 05, 2008
    Hi, CONGRATULATIONS ON THIS GREAT STORY!!!!!!!!! I really liked it, and I
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on March 05, 2008
    yay!! a sequel? A dark one too? with a threesome with harry/hermione/draco? are you in my freaking head or what? we must have been separated at birth!! I'm definitely there, can't wait til you post it. I LOVED this story..going into my favorites file. and I loved the epilogue...how fitting and sweet for Draco to do that for Harry....and of course, how romantic for Harry to trust Draco enough to submit. Best line
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on March 05, 2008
    Emily, what a beautiful wedding!! It seemed so genuine, and I'm happy that Hermione got to plan it since she couldn't have her own. I'm so glad that Draco's old and new friends were there. Calixa has grown on me, and it's fitting that she would sing a song at their wedding. I could picture her doing that and playing the guitar. You painted the whole thing so wonderfully...I'm glad you chose that spot and the vows, especially Harry's really were touching. I'm sorta glad the bond wasn't broken? How sick is that? lol. I really really liked what Minerva had to say, you obviously put a lot of thought into this chapter. Kinda sad this story is ending...but I'll be following your stuff from now on...ok, onto the epilogue..
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  • From QueenB on March 05, 2008
    Ch. 47 Ooh, there's going to be a menage a trois? I hadn't expected that. And I don't see how it could be sadder than this! I mean, Ron died and Harry nearly died. I don't see how it could get more upsetting than that.

    The wedding scene was very moving. I'm going to have to check out that song so I can hear what it sounds like. However, I'm not quite sure what happened with Draco taking that pain into himself using the blood quill. But then I haven't read all the HP novels so some references baffle me. I'll have to check them out in the near future.
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  • From Milva on March 05, 2008
    Aaah, it's end too soon... Love this story :)
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  • From dracoharry4life on March 05, 2008
    I loved the story. I'm all for a sequel, but I don't care for the adding Hermione part.
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  • From thrnbrooke on March 05, 2008
    A sequel? With Hermione added in? Interesting. Not something I normally read but if you're writing it, well I've give it a read! Can't wait!
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  • From thrnbrooke on March 05, 2008
    Sooo can't wait for chapter 46!!! Even though it means the end.
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  • From Writeitloudx on March 04, 2008
    wow you're a great writer and this story is amazing but im going crazy no updates yesterday or so
    far today?!?! i need more, what happens next!
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