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Reviews for The Lion and the Serpent

By : emilywaters
  • From QueenB on March 04, 2008
    Ch. 44 Well, that was unexpected. I always thought Hermione had all the virtues of a Ravenclaw but never wondered about the hat Sorting her into Gryffindor because I always thought girls could be brave and loyal, too. Why else would they marry boys? ;D
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  • From Diane on March 03, 2008
    Hahahaha, Hermione would have to plan his wedding. If it was up to Harry, it'd focus on Quidditch or something. Nice speeches though. No wonder you didn't have Hermione mention her house. Nice one. Sounds like the castle's going to require some remodeling if they're going to double the houses. Yay for summer work! Minerva's going to get it. Harry didn't want to come back and teach and now he's head of joined Houses. XD
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  • From Nikte on March 03, 2008
    A HAPPY ENDING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I
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  • From Milva on March 03, 2008
    I think this story is great! At the beginning I didn't like it so much, cause I though you made of Harry new Voldemort or something. He was so cold, an cruel, like not-Harry. But then I saw that wasn't you intention :) Besides, I like the idea of story - Draco as Harry's slave xDD All in all, great job :) Keep writing, you good in it ^^ P.S. I'm sorry if there are any mistakes - I'm not oryginally English-speaker :)
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  • From Leentjef on March 03, 2008
    very very good chapter keep going and post soon
    bye bye
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  • From thrnbrooke on March 03, 2008
    Soooo need chapter 45!!! I do sooo love this! And the Unforgiven! Wow!
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on March 03, 2008
    oh wow....merging houses is a great idea and so appropiate but i never saw it coming like that. how fitting that hermione is heading the smart and loyal ones and harry the courageous and cunning ones...I loved that harry kissed draco in front of everyone like f*ck y'all....lol. McGonagall is tripping big time...lol. this chapter was great, loved the non stop teasing and rope play....draco sure i lucky... I can't wait to see the wedding.
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  • From Dezra on March 02, 2008
    Nice ending. Attention!!! it's the wedding of the season! woohoo, it's about time.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on March 02, 2008
    AWESOME!!! The wedding of the year and they get to be together on their own terms, I'm sure Draco still won't mind being Harry's love slave but at least he can have a little of himself to himself...lol. I hope this works : ) I love your ideas as far as bonding go, you're really coming up with some creative stuff...the idea of marriage being a bond of equals is fairly progressive in any world. ;p I'm also happy Hermione gets to plan a wedding, so sad she couldn't have her own...
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  • From Diane on March 02, 2008
    Damn I knew something was up with that spell. I just knew it when Harry was acting funny. Self-destructive little bastard. Funny isn't it that Harry's about to destory all the dark poison in the world, but he can't help himself. You didn't say what House Hermione's going to Head. I'm assuming Ravenclaw, but that' just an assumption. I can't believe I waited a day and got three whole chapters to read at once.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on March 02, 2008
    Yay, there's laughter and light...I'm glad that it seems Harry will stay on as a professor, I know he won't be half as snarky as Snape was...at least not any longer. It's good there's a place there for Hermione as well, I really want her close to Harry and Draco, she seems good for them. Poor Harry, always so hard on himself, I hope he gets over it, this is probably as good as it can get, and I hope he realizes that and doesn't beat himself up too much about what he's done.
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  • From Leentjef on March 02, 2008
    very very good chapter keep going and post soon
    bye bye
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  • From QueenB on March 02, 2008
    Ch. 41 That was an interesting and brilliant interpretation of Asklepio (hey, did you get that from me?!) and I appreciated the insight into Cali's mind. I could tell she was getting sweet on Draco (I'm surprised he didn't see it) and she truly wanted to help him. As a Slytherin, she probably didn't understand why he would allow and like it when Harry hurt him. But as an abused child who alternately loved and hated her own father, she was all too aware of how such conflicting sentiments can hold sway in a person's mind.

    That last conversation between Draco and Hermione was funny, touching and infuriating... exactly as it would have been if Ron were still there although the Weasley wasn't as manipulative or intelligent as Draco. I liked Draco's interaction with Hermione throughout, even when she was being a sanctimonious prig. Many stories about H/D focus primarily on the love affair but this tale couldn't have worked without Hermione taking her part. She's always been my favorite HP character and I'm so pleased that your story did her justice.
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  • From Dezra on March 02, 2008
    YES!!! Harry is awake. I hope his guilt doesn't stop him from from letting him be with Draco.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on March 02, 2008
    Awesome awesome, awesome....thank you for bringing Harry back!!! I love the way you did it too. Draco and him had to make great sacrifices to save each other. Beautiful. I hope Harry gets as comfortable with owning Draco as Draco is with being owned, and that he will learn to live better and be happy...he really deserves that after all of this.
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